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Dear my cute Teacher Paula, A happy Friday to you! I was really happy to be able to see your perky look again. You finally are back to your previous cute look. ^^ I hope you can keep in good shape all the time. Anyway, what kind of plan do you have for this coming weekend? In my case, I should put winter clothes away and wash a duck down bedclothes taking advantage of this sunny day. I think it will be a busy day for me. ^^ By the way, these days, here in our country is getting warmer, and we can totally smell a scent of spring everywhere. Last week, I went to go Koryo Mountain to see a colony of azalea, but it was too early, so I could not enjoy a wonderful view. As I heard, at this time of the year, we can see that thousands of trees of azalea form a colony, and this view is indeed magnificent. It was really a shame not to be able to appreciate those bold pink flowers. You might think that it is okay for me to go there again, but because the festival is coming soon, so I would not enjoy those to the fullest due to a crowd of people. Wherever we go in a spring, Jams always are a big problem. In this case, I'd rather stay at home and watch a good movie or eat some wonderful foods than going out. However, somehow, the sunny weather is too good to be stuck at home. Well, let me think about my weekend plan again! Hahaha! See you very soon.

Dear my Jolly Student [이름],   An extremely wonderful Friday for us! ^.^   Ohhh~~~!!! ^^ It\'s good that you noticed my cheerful behavior yesterday. Frankly speaking, I just tried my best to be like that. I wasn\'t still feeling okay that time. But, don\'t worry! ^^, My condition is getting better day-by-day.   That\'s all for now! ^^, Sorry for the short reply. See youy very soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my cute Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! >> OR: Dear my Cute Teacher Paula, A happy Friday to you! >> CORRECT! >> OR: A cheerful Friday to you! I was really happy to be able to see your perky look again. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I was really glad to be able to catch the sight of your jaunty look again. You finally are back to your previous cute look. ^^ >> CORRECT! >> OR: You are ultimately back to your previous cutesy look. I hope you can keep in good shape all the time. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I hope you can keep yourself in good shape day and night. Anyway, what kind of plan do you have for this coming weekend? >> CORRECT! >> OR: Anyhow, what are your plans for this coming weekend? In my case, I should put winter clothes away and wash a duck down bedclothes taking advantage of this sunny day. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In my case, I should put my winter clothes away and wash a duck down bedding taking advantage of the sunny weather. I think it will be a busy day for me. ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: I think it will be a day that will make me preoccupied. By the way, these days, here in our country is getting warmer, and we can totally smell a scent of spring everywhere. >> By the way, these days, here in our country is getting warmer, and we can totally smell the scent of spring everywhere. (I think there is only one scent of spring, so THE is needed to be used before SCENT not A.) >> OR: By the way, nowadays, here in Korea is getting warmer, and we can completely smell the scent of spring everywhere. Last week, I went to go Koryo Mountain to see a colony of azalea, but it was too early, so I could not enjoy a wonderful view. >> Last week, I went to Koryo Mountain to see a colony of azalea, but it was too early, so I couldn\'t enjoy the wonderful view. (You are talking about the sight of the colony of the azalea as the wonderful view, so you should use THE before WONDERFUL instead of A. PATTERN: went to + name of a place) As I heard, at this time of the year, we can see that thousands of trees of azalea form a colony, and this view is indeed magnificent. >> CORRECT! >> OR: From what I heard, at this time of the year, we can see thousands of trees of azalea that form a colony, and this view is indeed breathtaking. It was really a shame not to be able to appreciate those bold pink flowers.>> CORRECT! >> OR: It was really disappointing not to be able to appreciate those bold pink flowers.  You might think that it is okay for me to go there again, but because the festival is coming soon, so I would not enjoy those to the fullest due to a crowd of people. >> You might think that it is okay for me to go there again, but because a festival is coming soon, I would not enjoy those to the fullest due to a crowd of people. (BUT, BECAUSE and SO can\'t really be used in one sentence. Please see the alternative sentences.) >> OR: You might think that it is okay for me to go there again, but a festival is coming soon, so I would not enjoy those to the fullest due to a crowd of people. >> OR: You might think that it is fine for me to visit that place again, but since a festival is coming soon, I wouldn\'t enjoy those to the fullest due to a crowd of people. Wherever we go in a spring, Jams always are a big problem. >> Wherever we go in spring, traffic jam is always a big problem. (From my researches, Jams is a clothing brand. What is the Jams in your sentence? PATTERN: in + (the) + name of a season) In this case, I\'d rather stay at home and watch a good movie or eat some wonderful foods than going out. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In this case, I\'d rather stay home and watch some good movies or eat some mouthwatering foods than spend my time outside. However, somehow, the sunny weather is too good to be stuck at home. >> However, somehow, the sunny weather is to good for me to be stuck at home. (From your sentence, it means that the sunny weather will be stuck at your home. That is impossible, right?) >> OR: However, somehow, the sunny weather is to good for me to stuck myself at home. Well, let me think about my weekend plan again! Hahaha! >> CORRECT! >> OR: Well, let me ponder about my weekend plans again! See you very soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you very soon! >> OR: See you in a wink!