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Dear my Loveable Student [이름],

A hot Tuesday to me, and a wonderful day to you! ^.^

Well, it\'s really hot here on Baguio City, Philippines.

It feels like it is 30 degrees Celsius.

Whew! What a sweating weather! T.T

By the way, I had a very tiring weekend, but I enjoyed it a lot.

Last Saturday, I had a hot pot appointment.

It was from 2 pm until 11 pm.

Hahaha! ^^

Sadly, because of that I had to cancel my appointment with another friend.

Fortunately, I was really lucky not to meet her, because she was with her friends whom I don\'t know.

In addition, they spent their time together by drinking, so my friend was so drunk.

Last Sunday, she told me that she had a hangover because of too much consumption of alcohol when she met her friends.

She also said that it would have been better if I was with them, but I don\'t think like that.

I don\'t want to be very drunk these days.

Honestly, I don\'t want to drink any kinds of liquor nowadays.

I need to have a healthy living.

Hahaha! ^^

Anyway, last Sunday, I just stayed home.

I ate a lot of food with my family.

My mother somehow scolded me from spending a lot for food on that day.

However, I didn\'t really care about it, because she also enjoys eating with me.

I bought some ice cream, bread and snacks.

It was really a terrific eating day.

Anyhow, if I were you, I would also feel greedy that time that I somehow won.

I think I will be an addict in relation to racecourse activities.

I easily get attracted to things that will give amusement to me.

So, I don\'t attempt to go to those places, because I know my weakness.

I can\'t resist the temptation and the entertainment that I can get from that activity.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A good day to you! ^^
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Here in Korea, it is raining now, and it makes me feel cold.
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>> OR: Here in Korea, it is raining now, and due to this, I feel cold.

I think because of this rain, a colony of cherry blooms would be gone soon.
>> I think, because if this rain, a colony of cherry blossoms would be gone soon. (There should be a comma before BECAUSE.)

>> OR: Because of this rain, I think a colony of cherry blossoms would be gone soon.

Fortunately, I already enjoyed those to the fullest, but somehow, I feel regretful that the flower of life is so short.
>> Fortunately, I already enjoyed those to the fullest, but somehow, I feel regretful that the life of flowers is so short. (PATTERN: the life of something)

By the way, did you have a wonderful weekend?
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>> OR: By the way, have you had a wonderful weekend?

In my case, I wanted to go to a zoo with my boyfriend on last Saturday, but by the time we arrived there, a large number of cars had lined up waiting to park on the road.
>> In my case, I wanted to go to the zoo with my boyfriend last Saturday, but, by the time we arrived there, a large number of cars had lined up waiting to park on the road. (Since ZOO is a very usual place where we go, we should use THE before it. PATTERN: last Saturday or on Saturday)

We guessed that it would take more than an hour to get in the zoo, so we gave up going there.
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>> OR: We supposed that it would take mote than an hour to get in the zoo, so we gave up our plan to go there.

Fortunately, a racecourse park was near the zoo, so we changed our final destination to the racecourse park.
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>> BETTER: Fortunately, a racecourse park was near the zoo, so we changed our final destination to that place.

This place was not that crowed in comparison to the zoo, so we could park a car without any difficulties.
>> This place was not that crowded in comparison to the zoo, so we could park our car without any difficulties. (I think you mistyped CROWDED. In addition, I think it is better to write OUR CAR than A CAR.)

We didn\'t mean to put money on a horse, but since we got there, we could not resist the temptation.
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>> OR: We didn\'t mean to put some money on a horse, but since we got there, we couldn\'t resist the temptation.

I am not a bold person, so I bet $1 per game only with entertainment.
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>> OR: I am not a dauntless person, so I bet $1 in a game only for entertainment.

As a result, the horse that I chose was in the top three of the race, so I could win a double prize against the amount that I bet.
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>> OR: In the end, the horse that I chose was in the top three of the race, so I could win double the prize against the amount that I bet.

I was disappointed with myself who didn\'t bet much money.
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>> OR: I was disappointed with myself for not betting much money.

At that time, I became a greedy woman suddenly. Hahaha!
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>> OR: That moment, I became a greedy woman suddenly.

I suddenly realized that if someone can\'t control himself or herself under this circumstance, racecourse would be a risky gambling.
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>> OR: I suddenly realized that if someone can\'t be at the helm of himself or herself under this circumstances, racecourse would be a risky gambling.

I saw a lot of middle-aged men betting money there, and some of them have already fallen into addiction to a gambling.
>> I saw a lot of middle-aged men betting money there, and some of them have already fallen into addiction to that gambling activity. (GAMBLING is an uncountable noun. It is not possible to put A in front of it.) 

It was a pity to see those kinds of people.
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>> OR: I felt a pity to see those kinds of people.

Anyway, see you this evening! ^^

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