Composition

Dear my Understanding Student [이름],

A winsome Wednesday to you! ^.^

Let me THANK YOU first for continuing your class with me here at Power English.

I am really happy that you are not fed up with the way I have classes with you.

I am really glad that you consider learning and studying English very important for you.

It\'s not really good to skip gaining knowledge or maintaining what you know.

By the way, about your question, here in my country, we usually use feet to describe our heights.

However, when I was in high school and university, my height was measured in centimeters.

I think we like using feet to determine how high we are, because it is easier to visualize.

Hahaha! ^^

Anyway, I will follow your advice.

I will really drink many glasses of water.

Thanks! ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you tomorrow! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning!
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It is already Wednesday.
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Time flies so fast. ^^
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Yesterday was our first class of the third re-registration in Power English.
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>> OR: Yesterday was our first class of my third re-registration in Power English.

>> OR: Yesterday was my first class with you for my third re-enrollment in Power English.

I realized that if I skip my class even one day, I seem to stumble over my words in English.
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>> OR: I was aware of the fact that if I skip my class even for one day, I seem to stutter over my words in English.

Indeed, speaking foreign languages is a matter of practice.
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>> OR: Speaking foreign language is a matter of practice indeed.

>> OR: Speaking foreign language is indeed a matter of practice.

By the way, there in the Philippines, do you usually use \'feet\' as the measure of a person\'s height?
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>> OR: By the way, do you usually measure your height there in the Philippines by \'feet\' instead of centimeters?

I am not good at converting the measure, so that is unfamiliar to me.
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>> OR: I am not good at converting measures, so that is unfamiliar for me.

>> OR: I am not good at converting any systems of measurement, so that is foreign for me.

I think as a graduate in math, that is not a big deal for you. ^^
>> I think, as a graduate in Math, that is not a big thing for you. (The first letter of a subject\'s names should be in capital letter.) 

I am really envious of someone who has ability in mathematics.
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>> OR: I am really desirous of someone you has mathematical ability.

Anyway, take care of your health in the hot weather.
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>> OR: Anyhow, watch your health in the hot weather.

Drinking much more water is the best way for you. ^^
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>> OR: The best way for you to cope with the tropical weather you are experiencing now is drinking a lot of water.

See you very soon!
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*Essay

Here in Korea, nowadays, some sports are popular to the public as follow.
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>> OR: Nowadays, here in Korea, some sports are popular to the public, and they are as follow.

The first sport that I want to say is a baseball.
>> The first sport that I want to say is baseball. (You don\'t use an article before a name of a sport.)

Korea Baseball Organization league is held every year, and now is the time to be held.
>> Korea Baseball Organization League is held every year, and now is the time for it to be held. (LEAGUE is part of the event\'s name, so L should be in capital state.)

Koreans really like to watch the game, and our state TV also broadcasts that in real-time on TV.
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>> OR: Koreans really like watching that game, and our state TV also broadcasts it in real-time on TV. 

Those games take about 6 months to decide a winning team.
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>> OR: Those games take about 6 months to proclaim a winning team.

In my case, I also enjoy watching that, and I cheer for LOTTE team which is based in Busan.
>> In my case, I also enjoy watching that, and I cheer for LOTTE Team which is based in Busan. (TEAM is a part of a group\'s name. It is better to make T into a big letter.)

Second, foreign football games are really popular to men.
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Most of guys are enthusiastic about those, and I also think the goal is very fantastic whenever players score points.
>> Most guys are enthusiastic about those, and I also think the goal is very fantastic whenever players score points. (PATTERN: most of the + plural noun or most + plural noun)

>> OR: Most guys are enthusiastic about those, and I also think it is very fantastic whenever players go for the goal and score.

Compared to Korean football game, European football is in a different class from ours.
>> Compared to Korean football game, European football is in a different class. (Your sentence seems redundant because of COMPARE TO and FROM.)

Indeed, I think they were born with great physical conditions.

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>> OR: Surely, I think they were born with great physical conditions.