Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Now is 11:00 PM. Normally, I have to go to bed at this time, but I don't need to go to work tomorrow, so I could afford to be free tonight. I usually make my composition at my working hour, but I won't have time to do that tomorrow, so before going to bed, I am doing my homework. ^^ Maybe, you are teaching students very hard, and you might be getting tired due to talking too much. In my case, talking too much makes me feel dizzy, so I prefer listening to others. However, I really know that I must be more talkative to improve my English skill. Sometimes, when I speak English, I find myself sweating. It means that I feel still nervous when I speak English. I really hope I can totally relieve my tension very soon. It is your time to go home shortly. My beautiful Teacher, watch yourself when you go home. See you tomorrow. ^^ *Essay Here in our country, most people like to travel, and whenever they have chances, they set off for everywhere. Korea is a bit small, so if we put our mind on traveling, we can get everywhere with ease. The most popular method of transportation is train. It only takes two and a half hours from Seoul to Busan by KTX. It is not only fast, but also very comfortable. Because of those strengths, we can now travel from one side of city to another within the same day. However, there is nothing better than traveling by our own car. When we go on a trip, we usually need to prepare some necessaries. If we carry those in a backpack, we might be easily tired on our journey. Unfortunately, I don't have a drive license. I think I really need to get it for me and my boyfriend. I should learn that before it is too late. P.S.) Paula, This composition was written last night, but I forgot to upload that on website. ^^;; See you very soon.

Dear [Name] [이름],   An extraordinary Friday to you! ^.^   I am happy today for somehow making my private student happy for extending the celebration for his birthday today. His birthday was yesterday. I bought one of his favorites, and it is cheesecake. I bought some New York Cheesecake at Starbucks. Hahaha! ^^ I hope I really made him happy.   By the way, I hope you were not very tired last night for doing your homework.   Anyway, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below for your writing improvement.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you on Monday! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: I didn\'t put the explanations why some of your sentences are wrong. I want you to analyze about why your sentences are wrong.     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Now is 11:00 PM. >> CORRECT! Normally, I have to go to bed at this time, but I don\'t need to go to work tomorrow, so I could afford to be free tonight. >> CORRECT! I usually make my composition at my working hour, but I won\'t have time to do that tomorrow, so before going to bed, I am doing my homework. ^^>> I usually make my composition in my working hours, but I won\'t have time to do that tomorrow, so before going to bed, I am doing my homework. Maybe, you are teaching students very hard, and you might be getting tired due to talking too much. >> CORRECT! In my case, talking too much makes me feel dizzy, so I prefer listening to others. >> CORRECT! However, I really know that I must be more talkative to improve my English skill. >> CORRECT! Sometimes, when I speak English, I find myself sweating. >> CORRECT! It means that I feel still nervous when I speak English. >> CORRECT! I really hope I can totally relieve my tension very soon. >> CORRECT! It is your time to go home shortly. >> CORRECT! My beautiful Teacher, watch yourself when you go home.>> CORRECT! See you tomorrow. ^^>> CORRECT!   *Essay Here in our country, most people like to travel, and whenever they have chances, they set off for everywhere. >> Here in our country, most people like to travel, and whenever they have chances, they set off everywhere. Korea is a bit small, so if we put our mind on traveling, we can get everywhere with ease. >> CORRECT! The most popular method of transportation is train. >> CORRECT! It only takes two and a half hours from Seoul to Busan by KTX. >> CORRECT! It is not only fast, but also very comfortable. >> CORRECT! Because of those strengths, we can now travel from one side of city to another within the same day. >> Because of those strengths, we can now travel from one side of a city to another within the same day. However, there is nothing better than traveling by our own car.>> CORRECT! When we go on a trip, we usually need to prepare some necessaries.>> CORRECT! If we carry those in a backpack, we might be easily tired on our journey. >> CORRECT! Unfortunately, I don\'t have a drive license. >> Unfortunately, I don\'t have a driver\'s license. I think I really need to get it for me and my boyfriend. >> CORRECT! I should learn that before it is too late. >> CORRECT! P.S.) Paula, >> P.S.: Paula, This composition was written last night, but I forgot to upload that on website. ^^;;>> This composition was written last night, but I forgot to upload that on the website. See you very soon. >> CORRECT!