Composition

Dear [이름],

Happy Monday! ^.^

I would like to say sorry first for not checking your composition last weekend.

I was so busy. Hahaha! ^^

You were right that I had a good time with my family.

I had some great and enjoyable time with them on both Saturday and Sunday.

But, that\'s not all.

I also met one of my female friends.

I met her yesterday at 8 o\'clock in the evening.

We had some rice, Pancit (which is a Filipino style of Chapchae) and hotdog.

Hahaha! It was just a very simple and short dinner with her.

She got full easily.

In addition, because she ate her meal very fast, her stomach went crazy. Hahaha! ^^

I think you know what I mean.

However, even though it was a terrific Sunday for me, it wasn\'t still complete.

It is because I didn\'t buy my watch\'s bracelet or strap. T.T

I think it was because of my laziness.

Anyhow, everything went fine still, so that is a wonderful thing that I should be thankful for. ^^,

Anyway, about your composition, I just have a question.

Is KTX used around South Korea?

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you very soon! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!

Happy Sunday!
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: A happy Sunday to us!

It is raining now here, and I feel a little cold.
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>> OR: The rain is falling now here, and I feel a little nippy.

What are you doing now?
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I guess you are having a wonderful time with your family.
>> CORRECT!

In my case, I don\'t like a rainy day, so I am stuck at home.
>> CORRECT!

>> BETTER: In my case, I don\'t like rainy days, so I am stuck at home.

Today, somehow, I don\'t feel like studying, so I watched several movies and variety shows until now.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Today, somehow, I am not in condition to study, so I have watched several movies and variety shows from the time I got up until now.

>> OR: Today, somehow, I am not in condition to study, so I have had movie marathon and watched variety shows from the time I got up until now.

I got a little fed up with those, so I am now doing my homework.
>> CORRECT!

In addition, I think I will have no time to do my homework in my working time tomorrow.
>> CORRECT!

Because of my absence last Friday, I might have to deal with a lot of tasks next Monday.
>> CORRECT!

Just thought of it is a little scaring me. Hahaha!
>> CORRECT!

>> BETTER: Just the thought of them is scaring me a little.

Anyway, have a terrific time with your family during the rest of the weekend.
>> CORRECT!

See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: See you tomorrow!

*Essay

In our country, KTX is the quickest mean of transportation on the ground.
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>> BETTER: In our country, KTX is the quickest means of transportation on the ground.

>> OR: In our country, KTX is the quickest means of transportation on the land.

With KTX, I can reach Busan from Seoul in about two hours only.
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>> OR: With KTX, it will just take me two hours to go to Busan from Seoul.

I can even say that KTX can be substituted for airplane.
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A few years ago, when there was no KTX, I used to get on a train named Saemaul to reach Busan, and it took almost 5hours to get there.
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Compared to the KTX, Saemaul train was so slow.
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At that time, I could not get back home within the same day unless I get on a airplane.
>> At that time, I could not get back home within the same day unless I get on an airplane. (PATTERN: an + noun that begins with a, e, i, o and u sound)

Even if KTX fee is a little high, but it is worth to pay.
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>> OR: Even if KTX fair is a little high, it is worth the pay.

It is well known that time is gold.
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Indeed, our technological advance has improved the quality of our lives.
>> Indeed, our technological advances have improved the quality of our lives. (Are you just saying that you only have one technological advance their in your country? What is that? I think it is really better to use plural nouns to give general thoughts or facts.)

>> Indeed, our technological advances have improved the quality of living here in our country.

Maybe, someday, airplane might become more common, so we would be able to get on that with a lower price without hesitation.

>> CORRECT!