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Dear [Name]. [Name],
I have some questions about Balance of Bellin.
BG balance didn't matched.
No matched amount is 45.00EUR.
We received 45.00EUR invoice from BG in Mar.
But 45.00EUR is already cancelled in Apr.01.2011 and we received new invoice.
New invoice date is 31.Mar.2011.
We already up loaded new invoice in Bellin.
We have to change green color in Bellin.
So be it, I think BG have to change data for Green in Bellin.
We can't anything to do.
Would you please check this problem and please let me know?
Thank you for your help.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Bella,
Thank you for the composition..:)
About your writing, Im happy to say that you are really improving! I commend you for a job well done..:)
Talk to you again later my dear..
T.Cam
Dear [Name]. [Name],I have some questions about Balance of Bellin.
>.correct!
BG balance didn't matched.
>>BG Balance didnt match.
No matched amount is 45.00EUR.
>>The deduction is 45.00 EUR.
We received 45.00EUR invoice from BG in Mar.
>>correct!
But 45.00EUR is already cancelled in Apr.01.2011 and we received new invoice.
>>correct!
New invoice date is 31.Mar.2011.
>>correct!
We already up loaded new invoice in Bellin.
>>correct! (Uploaded)
We have to change green color in Bellin.
>>correct!
So be it, I think BG have to change data for Green in Bellin.
>>So be it, I think BG has to change some data in Bellin to green.
We can't anything to do.
>>We coudlnt do anything.
Would you please check this problem and please let me know?
>>correct!
Thank you for your help.
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