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Dear my Teacher Paula, Good morning and happy Tuesday! Today is a sunny day here, and I feel very nice because of the warmth of spring. Somehow, I don't want to be stuck at my office on such a nice day. However, there are a lot of tasks to finish within today, so I should set aside what I am thinking now and concentrate on my work. ^^ See you tonight! *Essay I think our transport system is very excellent and convenient. When I was in university, I had to take two buses to get to my school. At the time, I paid the bus fare whenever I get on the different bus. However, now, the situation is not the same with before. I can transfer a bus to another without paying standard fee. Our subway system is also connected with that. If we don't exceed the 30 minutes time limit from the time I got off the bus or subway, we don't need to pay the cost of public transport when we take another bus. In this case, we shouldn't take the same kind of public transportation in a row. It must be an order like 'bus-subway-bus or subway-bus-subway'. Because of this advantage, I could save my expense a lot. Apart from that, we have bus-only lanes on the road, so we can get to our destination much quicker than driving our own car. This traffic policy is to prevent a problem of traffic congestion in rush hours, so I think it is effective to disperse the volume of traffic concentrated around the main road. On the other hand, because of this benefit, our government is facing a budget deficit, so they are going to increase the cost of public transportation in June. Well, I think it is worth to endure that to enjoy this benefit. P.S.: Against your question, of course, KTX is only for South Korea. We are banned on visiting with North Korea by law.

Dear [이름],   Good evening and happy Tuesday, too! ^.^   Ohhh! T.T I would like to say SORRY for my absence during our class today. I am really sorry.   Anyway, happy reading! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning and happy Tuesday! >> CORRECT! Today is a sunny day here, and I feel very nice because of the warmth of spring. >> CORRECT! Somehow, I don\'t want to be stuck at my office on such a nice day. >> CORRECT! However, there are a lot of tasks to finish within today, so I should set aside what I am thinking now and concentrate on my work. ^^ >> CORRECT! >> OR: However, there are a lot of tasks to finish within  this day, so I should set what I am thinking aside now and concentrate on my work. ^^ See you tonight!>> CORRECT!   *Essay I think our transport system is very excellent and convenient. >> CORRECT! When I was in university, I had to take two buses to get to my school. >> CORRECT! >> OR: When I was in university, I had to take two buses to be at my school. At the time, I paid the bus fare whenever I get on the different bus. >> CORRECT! >> OR: At that time, I paid the bus fare whenever I get on a different bus. However, now, the situation is not the same with before. >> CORRECT! >> OR: However, now, the situation is not the same as before. I can transfer a bus to another without paying standard fee. >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: I can transfer from one bus to another without paying. Our subway system is also connected with that. >> CORRECT! If we don\'t exceed the 30 minutes time limit from the time I got off the bus or subway, we don\'t need to pay the cost of public transport when we take another bus. >> If we don\'t exceed the 30 minutes time limit from the time we get off the bus or subway, we don\'t need to pay the cost of public transport when we take another bus. (You used WE, so you should constantly use WE in your sentence. Using I is wrong.) In this case, we shouldn\'t take the same kind of public transportation in a row. >> CORRECT! It must be an order like \'bus-subway-bus or subway-bus-subway\'. >> CORRECT! Because of this advantage, I could save my expense a lot. >> CORRECT! Apart from that, we have bus-only lanes on the road, so we can get to our destination much quicker than driving our own car. >> CORRECT! This traffic policy is to prevent a problem of traffic congestion in rush hours, so I think it is effective to disperse the volume of traffic concentrated around the main road. >> CORRECT! On the other hand, because of this benefit, our government is facing a budget deficit, so they are going to increase the cost of public transportation in June. >> CORRECT! >> OR: On the other hand, because of this benefit, our government is facing a budget deficit, so they are going to increase the cost of public transportation this June. Well, I think it is worth to endure that to enjoy this benefit.>> CORRECT! P.S.: Against your question, of course, KTX is only for South Korea. >> CORRECT! We are banned on visiting with North Korea by law. >> CORRECT!