Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good afternoon! What happened to you? You might have been very busy yesterday. However, I am so glad that you helped me to check my composition in spite of your busyness. ^^ Yesterday, Jamie was supposed to teach me as a substitute for you. However, when I logged in, I didn't receive her call even after 2 minutes past and I didn't even notice whether she called me or not. After 3 minutes, she said by typing that she had called me, but I was the one who didn't get a call. It was a very weird situation. It is because I haven't received any calls from her. Because of this weird situation, I told her that I want to skip today's class in spite of her another calling. That was my yesterday's situation during your absence. ^^;; I felt a little sorry for her. If I delivered my opinion in advance, she wouldn't have wasted her time like that. Anyway, today is Wednesday. At this time of the week, it is easy for us to feel very tired or lose the desire to work. Do you have any good ways to remove that kind of feeling? In my case, I do more exercise or have more delicious and special food. I just walked back to our office from a long distance after my lunch, and it took 30 minutes. Somehow, I seem to suffer from spring fatigue suddenly. Maybe, it is a kind of side effect of my walk. Hahaha! See you very soon. ^^

Dear [이름],   Happy Wednesday! ^.^   First of all, I would like to apologize for my absence yesterday. I had to meet my mother to process some important things. I am really sorry about that. I am also sorry for what happened to you and your substitute teacher. However, it is really good, because both of your are understanding people.   By the way, thank you for the concern for me and for Teacher Jamie! ^^   Anyway, about your question, honestly, I am somehow having that kind of feeling. For me to remove it, I make myself happy. How do I make myself  happy? I make other people happy? How can I make other people happy? I make them happy by sharing them my favorites. Just like today, I went out and ate Samgyupsal with my niece. Hahaha! She was so happy the time that we were eating that famous Korean dish together. She ate a lot. I ate more. Hahaha! ^^, After eating, we met my mother, and we went to McDonald\'s to eat some food and drink cola there. Hahaha! It was fun, too. ^^. After that, I left them, because I needed to go to work. Therefore, somehow, that negative feeling disappeared.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you very soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! >> OR: Dear Teacher Paula, >> OR: Dear [Name],Good afternoon! >> CORRECT! What happened to you? >> CORRECT! You might have been very busy yesterday. >> CORRECT! However, I am so glad that you helped me to check my composition in spite of your busyness. ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: However, I am so glad that you checked my composition in spite of your busyness. Yesterday, Jamie was supposed to teach me as a substitute for you. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Yesterday, Teacher Jamie was supposed to teach me as a substitute for you. >> OR: Yesterday, Teacher Jamie was supposed to be my substitute teacher. However, when I logged in, I didn\'t receive her call even after 2 minutes past and I didn\'t even notice whether she called me or not. >> However, when I logged in, I didn\'t receive her call even after 2 minutes past, and I didn\'t even notice whether she called me or not. (You forgot to put a comma before AND.) >> OR: However, when I logged in, I didn\'t receive any calls from her even after 2 minutes past, and I didn\'t even notice whether she called me or not. After 3 minutes, she said by typing that she had called me, but I was the one who didn\'t get a call. >> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: After 3 minutes, she said by typing that she had called me, but I didn\'t get any call from her. It was a very weird situation. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It was bizarre. It is because I haven\'t received any calls from her. >> CORRECT! Because of this weird situation, I told her that I want to skip today\'s class in spite of her another calling. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Because of this situation, I told her that I want to skip today\'s class in spite of her calling me again that time. That was my yesterday\'s situation during your absence. ^^;; >> CORRECT! >> OR: That was my situation during your absence yesterday. I felt a little sorry for her. >> CORRECT! If I delivered my opinion in advance, she wouldn\'t have wasted her time like that. >> CORRECT! Anyway, today is Wednesday.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Anyway, today is the middle of the week. At this time of the week, it is easy for us to feel very tired or lose the desire to work. >> CORRECT! Do you have any good ways to remove that kind of feeling? >> CORRECT! >> OR: Do you have any good ways to remove it? In my case, I do more exercise or have more delicious and special food. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: In my case, I do more exercise or have more delicious and special foods. I just walked back to our office from a long distance after my lunch, and it took 30 minutes.>> CORRECT! Somehow, I seem to suffer from spring fatigue suddenly. >> CORRECT! Maybe, it is a kind of side effect of my walk. Hahaha! >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Maybe, it is a kind of side effect from the walk. See you very soon. ^^ >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: See you soon!