Composition

Dear [Name] [이름],

A tantalizing Thursday to you! ^.^

Ohhh~~~! ^^

Thanks for the understanding! ^^,

However, sorry if I made you repeat what you have said before about having my days off.

Anyhow, thanks for reminding me about my personality.

I think being positive the best way to live my life.

You are also very positive.

I know you can understand me. ^^.

By the way, about my eating habit, I am getting fat.

Honestly, I have a big belly, so I am planning to exercise every weekend.

What do you think about my plan to be in shape?

Thank you for saying that I am blessed! ^^

Anyway, about your composition, you are really right.

Most people who travel want to relieve their stress.

I totally agree with you that we are not strong enough to enjoy traveling when we are old.

That\'s all for now! ^^

I hope I can satisfy you today.

See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A good day to you!
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As I told you yesterday, you really don\'t need to say sorry due to your absence.
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I am the one who is thinking that you also have a right to enjoy your day off like other people.
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Anyway, I really agree with your way to make yourself happy.
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You are a very positive person.
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>> OR: You are very optimistic.

>> OR: You are very positive.

>> OR: You are a very optimistic person.

However, somehow, you seemed to eat too much in a row yesterday. Hahaha!
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It is bizarre that you never get fat no matter how many foods you eat.
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You are so blessed! ^^
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In my case, I had a heavy feeling in my stomach yesterday, so I could not enjoy my dinner.
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I was supposed to eat pigs\' feet named Jokbal in Korean, but because of my condition, I lost my chance to have that yesterday.
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>> OR: I was supposed to eat Jokbal which is a Korean dish consisting of pig\'s trotters cooked with soy sauce and spices, but because of my condition, I lost my chance to have that yesterday.

I totally recovered from that, so maybe I can have that this evening if my boyfriend comes back home early like yesterday. ^^
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>> OR: I totally recovered from that, so I might have that this evening if my boyfriend comes back home early like yesterday.

I would have to supplement some collagen which is really effective in preventing aging skin. ^^;;
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>> OR: I would have to supplement some collagen which is really effective in preventing skin aging.

See you soon!
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*Essay

From my thinking, going on a trip is a kind of stress reliever.
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>> OR: For me, going on a trip is a good way to relieve stress.

Everyone works very hard on weekdays, and they don\'t have enough time to remove their stress during working hours.
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>> OR: Everyone works very hard on weekdays, and they don\'t have enough time to remove their stress while they are working.

The reason why people like to travel to different places in their free time is to relieve their stress and recover their strengths.
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>> OR: The reason why people like to travel to different places in their free time is to relieve their stress and regain their strengths.

As we know, if we get stuck at the same places, it is easy for us to get fed up with those.
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>> OR: As we know, if we get stuck at the same areas, it is easy for us to get fed up with the things that we do.

Each of those places can provide us different feelings and memories.
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I think there is nothing better than traveling to different places to recharge our body and soul.
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>> OR: I think there is nothing better than exploring different places to unwind.

Remember that we are not strong enough to go out when we are old!

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