Composition

Dear [이름],

A fabulous Friday to you! ^.^

T.G.I.F.! ^,^

In my case, I consider Friday a special day.

I think you already know my favorite day, and it is Wednesday.

I\'m not really sure if I have some good reasons why I like that day.

All I know is that I have my highest energy on that day, and the days seem to move fast after Wednesday.

I hope this reason is enough to be a good ground to justify why it is the best day for me.

Hahaha! ^^

Anyway, from the time you brought out the topic about eating \'Jokbal\' in your composition, I started to salivate.

I really want to eat it today, but I am not sure where to go to eat it. T.T

Frankly speaking, I am dizzy now due to my craving for that special dish.

Ohhh~~~!

I can already smell it.

I think I am going to be sick soon. T.T

By the way, I would like to say VERY GOOD to you for a very informative and well-written writing.

I enjoyed reading it.

I was surprised about the information that your country don\'t really have a lot of resources.

I was shocked, because from what I know, Korea is a very rich country.

Anyhow, thanks for giving me more information about your beautiful country! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Puala,
>> Dear my Teacher Paula, (Did you forget the spelling of my name?)

A terrific Friday to you!
>> CORRECT!

Friday is my most favorite day, because I could enjoy a thrill to welcome the weekend coming with joy for a while.
>> Friday is my most favorite day, because I could enjoy a thrill to welcome the coming weekend with joy for a while. (You can\'t use COMING WITH here because the word after that phrase should be SOMEONE not SOMETHING. PATTERN: coming weekend)

>> Friday is my most favorite day, because I could enjoy a thrill to welcome the weekend together with joy for a while.

No matter how many tasks I have to do, I wouldn\'t be exhausted on Friday.
>> CORRECT!

By the way, I didn\'t eat Jokbal yesterday, because my boyfriend had dinner with others outside.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: By the way, I didn\'t eat Jokbal yesterday, because my boyfriend had dinner with other people outside.

As you know, no matter how delicious foods there are, it won\'t taste good if I eat alone.
>> CORRECT!

Somehow, I am salivating over the thought of that. ^^
>> CORRECT!

Anyway, do you have a wonderful plan for this coming weekend?
>> CORRECT!

In my case, I am going to Pocheon to meet one of my female friends.
>> CORRECT!

It\'s been a long time since we met each other last.
>> It\'s been a long time since we last met each other. (You somehow scrambled few of your words in this sentence.)

>> OR: It\'s been a long time since the last time that we met each other.

I\'m somehow expecting for tomorrow\'s meeting. ^^
>> CORRECT!

See you soon.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: See you soon!

*Essay

We have a wonderful island named \'Jeju\', and it is one of the most famous tourism spots here.
>> We have a wonderful island named \'Jeju\', and it is one of the most famous tourist spots here. (TOURISM SPOTS is wrong. It should be TOURIST SPOTS or TOURIST ATTRACTIONS.)

These days, many of foreigners visit there, especially from China.
>> These days, many foreigners visit there, especially from China. (MANY OF + PLURAL NOUN is used for specific ideas. You should use only MANY since you are giving a GENERAL information.)

>> OR: These days, many foreigners go there, especially from China.

>> BETTER: These days, many foreigners visit there, especially those who are from China.

>> OR: These days, many foreigners visit there, especially Chinese.

Even I felt that here is China, not Jeju when I visited there a few years ago.
>> Even I felt that there is China, not Jeju, when I visited there a few years ago. (THERE should be HERE since you were not in Jeju when you wrote your composition. Put a comma before when. NOT JEJU is considered as an additional information in your sentence, so there should be commas before and after this phrase.)

>> OR: Even I felt that there is China, not Jeju, when I went there a few years ago.

The reason why Chinese tourists prefer to visit there is that they don\'t need to issue a visa to go there.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: The reason why Chinese tourists prefer to go there is that they don\'t need to have a visa to go there. (It is better to avoid using VISIT or same words in your composition.)

In addition, Jeju has a magnificent natural landscape, so it is enough to fascinate them.
>> CORRECT!

As a Korean, I was also overwhelmed by its beauty.
>> CORRECT!

Korea is a small country, so we don\'t have plenty of resources.
>> CORRECT!

In this case, we have to develop intangible resources to boost our economy.
>> CORRECT!

Attracting tourists is one of the most outstanding methods for us to revive our economy.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Attracting tourists is one of the most outstanding strategies for us to revive our country\'s economy.

According to this kind of logic, we really should develop and promote new tourism resources.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: According to this kind of logic, we really should develop and promote new tourism assets.

Nowadays, Korean pop stars have positioned into many countries, and it is called Korean wave.
>> CORRECT!

I think if we connect it with our tourism industry smoothly, we could attract more foreigners here.
>> CORRECT!

Well, in the near future, it would become a main item of tourism in our country.

>> CORRECT!