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Dear my Teacher Paula, Good morning. I'd like to let you know that we have two days off here soon, and those are Labor's day and Children's day. Labor's day is on 1st May, and Children's day is on 5th May. I am not sure if Power English can cancel our class on 1st May, but it is sure to rest on 5th May. It is because Children's day is marked with red on the calendar, but Labor's day is not like that. Whether we can rest on Labor's day or not, it depends on each company's discretion. Fortunately, I can have a holiday that day, so I somehow feel free already. By the way, I have to go to LG to get training related with new registration process tomorrow. I really don't want to go there because I don't think it is helpful for me, and I already know that this training is a means only for their business performance. For them, the more people come, the more helpful it is. However, for me, to accept this training, I have to waste of my entire day. I am not a person of leisure, but I am standing at the subordinate position, so I can't reject their request in this case. Well, I feel a little bitter because of this situation. By the way, I forgot to let you know the end of 'Heungbu and Nolbu' yesterday. The older brother finally became a poor man by goblins out of pumpkins because of his greed. However, the kind-hearted younger brother brought his brother's family to his house and lived with them. Maybe, the greedy brother might regret his fault after suffering unbelievable experience. Indeed, that is a natural outcome in which evil is punished and good is rewarded. Well, I suddenly think that I also have to try doing something good for my life. Hahaha! See you soon! ^^

Dear [이름],   Happy Tuesday and good evening! ^.^   As you know, I am aware of the holidays there in your country. In May, there are four special days. First is Labor Day which is celebrated on May 1, but not all Koreans have their day off, because it is considered as an observance. Next is Children\'s Day, and it is a national holiday dated on May 5. The third one is Parents\' Day, and since it is on May 8 which is a Sunday this year, work and studies are not going to be affected. Lastly, on May 25, Buddha\'s Day is celebrated, and it is a national holiday.   By the way, I am hoping that you will have a good training tomorrow. Just enjoy it! ^^   Anyway, sorry for the short comment. See you tomorrow! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! >> OR: Dear [Name], Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! I\'d like to let you know that we have two days off here soon, and those are Labor\'s day and Children\'s day. >> I\'d like to let you know that we have two days off here soon, and those are Labor Day and Children\'s Day. (It is LABOR DAY not LABOR\'S DAY, and you forgot to make the D in CHILDREN\'S DAY in capital letter.) Labor\'s day is on 1st May, and Children\'s day is on 5th May. >> Labor Day is on the 1st of May, and Children\'s Day is on the 5th of May. (PATTERN: the first of the month) >> OR: Labor Day is on the 1st of May, and Children\'s Day is on the 5th of the same month. >> OR: Labor Day is on the May 1st, and Children\'s Day is on May 5th. I am not sure if Power English can cancel our class on 1st May, but it is sure to rest on 5th May. >> I am not sure if Power English can cancel our class on the 1st of May, but it is sure for us to rest on the 5th of May. >> BETTER: I am not sure if Power English can cancel our class on May 1, but it is sure that we can rest on the 5th of this month. >> OR: I am not sure if Power English can cancel our class on Friday, but it is sure that we can rest on the 5th of this month. It is because Children\'s day is marked with red on the calendar, but Labor\'s day is not like that. >> It is because Children\'s Day is marked with red on the calendar, but Labor Day is not like that. (The D in CHILDREN\'S DAY should be in capital letter. LABOR\'S DAY should be LABOR DAY.) >> OR: It is because Children\'s Day is marked red on the calendar, but Labor Day is not. Whether we can rest on Labor\'s day or not, it depends on each company\'s discretion.>> Whether we can rest on Labor Day or not, it depends on each company\'s discretion. (LABOR\'S DAY should be LABOR DAY.) Fortunately, I can have a holiday that day, so I somehow feel free already. >> Fortunately, I can have a holiday on that day, so I somehow feel free already. (You forgot to put ON before THAT DAY.) >> OR: Luckily, I can have a holiday on that day, so I somehow already feel free. By the way, I have to go to LG to get training related with new registration process tomorrow.>> By the way, I have to go to LG to get a training related with new registration process tomorrow. (You forgot to use A before TRAINING.) >> OR: By the way, I have to go to LG tomorrow to get a training related with new registration process. I really don\'t want to go there because I don\'t think it is helpful for me, and I already know that this training is a means only for their business performance. >> I really don\'t want to go there, because I don\'t think it is helpful for me, and I already know that this training is a means only for their business performance. (You forgot to put A COMMA before BECAUSE.) >> OR: Frankly speaking, I really don\'t want to go there, because I don\'t think it is helpful for me, and I already know that this training is a means only for their business performance. For them, the more people come, the more helpful it is. >> CORRECT! However, for me, to accept this training, I have to waste of my entire day. >> However, for me, to accept this training, I have to waste my entire day. (PATTERN: v. waste something and n. waste of something) >> OR: However, for me, accepting this training will surely waste my entire day. >> OR: However, for me, accepting this training will surely be a waste my entire day. I am not a person of leisure, but I am standing at the subordinate position, so I can\'t reject their request in this case. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am not a person of leisure, but I am at the subordinate position, so I can\'t turn their request down in this case. Well, I feel a little bitter because of this situation. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Well, I feel a little peevish because of this situation. By the way, I forgot to let you know the end of \'Heungbu and Nolbu\' yesterday. >> CORRECT! The older brother finally became a poor man by goblins out of pumpkins because of his greed.>> CORRECT! However, the kind-hearted younger brother brought his brother\'s family to his house and lived with them. >> CORRECT! Maybe, the greedy brother might regret his fault after suffering unbelievable experience. >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: Maybe, the greedy brother might regret being greedy after suffering an unbelievable experience. >> OR: Maybe, the older brother might regret being greedy after suffering an unbelievable experience. Indeed, that is a natural outcome in which evil is punished and good is rewarded. >> CORRECT! Well, I suddenly think that I also have to try doing something good for my life. Hahaha!>> CORRECT! >> OR: Well, I suddenly think that I also have to do good deeds for my life. See you soon! ^^ >> CORRECT!