Composition
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강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Bella!!! Good afternoon!! Here뭩 your composition. Kindly check on the corrections I made. Just ask me later during our class if you have any concerns. See you later. Take care!
T. Camille J
Dear [Name]. [Name],
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Are you OK now?
>>correct!
>>Are you feeling better now?
>>Are you okay now?
You looks so tired.
>>You look so tired.
Anyway, we has 5,335.00EUR invoice for tooling fee of Riese and booked in SAP.
>>Anyways, we have 5,335.00 EUR invoice for the Riese tooling fee and booked at SAP.
We paid only 3,201.00EUR to Riese and remain 2,134EUR.
>>We paid only 3,201 EUR to Riese and we still have a balance of 2,134 EUR.
2,134EUR have to still be opened in SAP.
>>2,134 EYR still has to be opened in SAP.
But Mr.Yu of Purchasing said that we don't need to pay after confirming it.
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Nam[이름] system is already cleared 2,134EUR and balance is zero.
>>The Nam[이름] system already cleared the 2,134 EUR and we now have zero balance.
We have to compare with Nam[이름] system.
>>correct
So we put in SAP by credit not reverse for clean up 2010 .
>>So we put in SAP for credit and didn뭪 reverse it for clean up in year 2010.
If you have question please let me know.
>>If you have any questions please let me know.
Thank you.
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