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2011-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name].Ziehr, Are you OK now? You looks so tired. Anyway, we has 5,335.00EUR invoice for tooling fee of Riese and booked in SAP. We paid only 3,201.00EUR to Riese and remain 2,134EUR. 2,134EUR have to still be opened in SAP. But Mr.Yu of Purchasing said that we don't need to pay after confirming it. Nam[이름] system is already cleared 2,134EUR and balance is zero. We have to compare with Nam[이름] system. So we put in SAP by credit not reverse for clean up 2010 . If you have question please let me know. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Bella!!! Good afternoon!! Here뭩 your composition. Kindly check on the corrections I made. Just ask me later during our class if you have any concerns. See you later. Take care!

T. Camille J

Dear [Name]. [Name],

>>correct

Are you OK now?

>>correct!

>>Are you feeling better now?

>>Are you okay now?

You looks so tired.

>>You look so tired.

Anyway, we has 5,335.00EUR invoice for tooling fee of Riese and booked in SAP.

>>Anyways, we have 5,335.00 EUR invoice for the Riese tooling fee and booked at SAP.

We paid only 3,201.00EUR to Riese and remain 2,134EUR.

>>We paid only 3,201 EUR to Riese and we still have a balance of 2,134 EUR.

2,134EUR have to still be opened in SAP.

>>2,134 EYR still has to be opened in SAP.

But Mr.Yu of Purchasing said that we don't need to pay after confirming it.

>>correct

Nam[이름] system is already cleared 2,134EUR and balance is zero.

>>The Nam[이름] system already cleared the 2,134 EUR and we now have zero balance.

We have to compare with Nam[이름] system.

>>correct

So we put in SAP by credit not reverse for clean up 2010 .

>>So we put in SAP for credit and didn뭪 reverse it for clean up in year 2010.

If you have question please let me know.

>>If you have any questions please let me know.

Thank you.

>>correct

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