Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good afternoon. I just got home from Changwon City. Today's lecture was so boring that I couldn't stand boredom. However, even if the lecture didn't mean anything to me, I could feel free away from the office after a long time. Anyway, it is raining outside here and a little humid, so it makes my hair curly. However, I like seeing the view from the window of the train when it is rainy outside. Today is weekday, so there were a few people on the train. Today's railway journey was peasant due to a quite atmosphere. Anyway, see you very soon. *Essay The current generation can learn a lot from ancestor's life styles. Where can we learn their wisdom? That is historic buildings and monuments. It is totally impossible for us to meet ancestors to ask their great wisdom in person. That's why we concentrate on studying and protect old cultural assets. There is a saying that there is no bright future if we don't know history. Human beings are growing through a self-reflection of the past. For instance, if the Wright brothers didn't invent their glider, could we invent our current airplane? At the time, if no one tried to pursue a better life, our present life would not be convenient. All inventions come from undergoing trial and error. Therefore, we really should give importance to studying and protecting historical products to learn more about how they got over their difficulties.

Dear my Student [이름],   A winsome Wednesday! ^.^   On how I see it, you somehow enjoyed your day. Just like what you said on your writing, the lecture was boring, but you got a freedom from work. Well, that is totally awesome. Hahaha! ^^   Anyway, just like you, I also like watching the rain, especially when it touches our windows. It\'s so beautiful. Suddenly, I remember my childhood. When I was still a kid, whenever it rained, I watched the rain a little, waited for it to be strong and went out to play under it. It is one of the most happiest time in my life. I really enjoyed my innocence that time. Hahaha! ^^, How about you? Have you tried playing under the rain?   Anyhow, your composition is great. I enjoyed reading it. You are really right that through historic buildings and monuments, we can somehow know some wisdom from our ancestors. Very good! ^^.   Ohhh! That\'s all for now! ^^ See you very soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good afternoon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good afternoon! I just got home from Changwon City. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I just came back home from Changwon City. >> OR: I just arrived home from Changwon City. Today\'s lecture was so boring that I couldn\'t stand boredom.>> Today\'s lecture was so boring that I couldn\'t stand the boredom. (You need to put THE before boredom since you are talking about the boring lecture.) >> BETTER: Today\'s lecture was so boring that I couldn\'t stand it However, even if the lecture didn\'t mean anything to me, I could feel free away from the office after a long time. >> CORRECT! >> OR: On the other hand, even if the lecture didn\'t mean anything to me, I could have freedom away from the office after a long time. Anyway, it is raining outside here and a little humid, so it makes my hair curly. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Anyway, it is raining outside here and a little humid, so it makes my hair frizzy. However, I like seeing the view from the window of the train when it is rainy outside. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: However, I like seeing the view from the window of the train when it is raining outside. >> OR: However, I like seeing the view from the window of the train when it is rainy. >> OR: However, I like seeing the view from the window of the train when it rains. Today is weekday, so there were a few people on the train.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Today is a weekday, so there were a few people on the train. Today\'s railway journey was peasant due to a quite atmosphere.>> Today\'s railway journey was pleasant due to a quite atmosphere. (I think you forgot to type L in PLEASANT.) Anyway, see you very soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Anyhow, see you very soon!   *Essay The current generation can learn a lot from ancestor\'s life styles. >> The current generation can learn a lot from our ancestors\' life styles. (PATTERN: our ancestor\'s life style or our ancestors\' life styles) Where can we learn their wisdom? >> CORRECT! That is historic buildings and monuments.>> That is from building and monuments. (You should use FROM, because you are answering a question with the idea of origin.) >> BETTER: We can learn those from historic buildings and monuments. It is totally impossible for us to meet ancestors to ask their great wisdom in person. >> It is totally impossible for us to meet our ancestors to ask their great wisdom in person. (There should be OUR before ANCESTORS.) >> OR: It is completely impossible for us to meet and ask our ancestors about their great wisdom in person. That\'s why we concentrate on studying and protect old cultural assets. >> CORRECT! >> OR: That\'s why we concentrate on studying and protecting cultural assets. There is a saying that there is no bright future if we don\'t know history. >> CORRECT! >> OR: There is a saying that we won\'t have a bright future if we don\'t know history, especially our own. Human beings are growing through a self-reflection of the past. >> CORRECT! For instance, if the Wright brothers didn\'t invent their glider, could we invent our current airplane? >> For instance, if the Wright Brothers didn\'t invent their glider, could we invent our current airplane? (The B in BROTHERS should be in capitalize.) At the time, if no one tried to pursue a better life, our present life would not be convenient. >> CORRECT! All inventions come from undergoing trial and error. >> CORRECT! >> OR: All inventions undergo trial and error. Therefore, we really should give importance to studying and protecting historical products to learn more about how they got over their difficulties. >> CORRECT!