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Dear [Name]. [Name], A wonderful Thursday to you! Did you recover from your stomach? Frankly speaking, I also had a stomach yesterday, and I had diarrhea in the morning, so I had a bowl of rice porridge at lunch after lecture. I was worried about that if I want to go to the toilet during the lecture, but luckily, the symptom didn't become serious. If I didn't feel better in my stomach, I wouldn't have my lunch, even if it is porridge. After arriving in my place, I drank many cups of warm water, and I made my belly warm using a hotpack. In addition, I had a Cheonggukjang that my boyfriend bought for my dinner. Cheonggukjang is a kind of fermented food, so it contains a lot of lactobacilli, and it helps me to recover from my stomachache. I can say that it is a natural remedy. Through those good methods, I could totally get over that. I have thought of the reason why I had my stomachache, and I realized that I had a lot of iced coffee recently. These days, the weather has become hot suddenly, and I am a person who really likes drinking iced beverages. In this case, I already know that it is totally normal for me to suffer from stomachache, so I have to reprimand myself. I really did a polish behavior, so I make a decision to stop having iced drinks. I don't know if I can follow my decision well, but I should try to do my best for my health. The less I drink cold beverages, the less likely I am to have a stomachache. Well, both of us really should control ourselves not to exceed our limitations. See you very soon. ^^

Dear [Name]. [이름],   A delightful Thursday to a wonderful lady like you! ^.^   Today is really a wonderful, because I totally recovered from my sickness that started yesterday. My niece\'s hands are really good. She gave me a good back massage last night when I got home. I burped and farted a lot during the therapy. Hahaha! ^^   By the way, I am sad to know your condition. Frankly speaking, I didn\'t notice that you were somehow suffering from a stomachache. I thought you were totally fine. I am really sorry to hear that. But, I shouldn\'t worry a lot about your condition, because you already know what to do. You should eat the food that your boyfriend bought for your dinner. Furthermore, you should avoid having iced-cold drinks.   Anyway, you are really correct when you said that we should both control ourselves. Eating and drinking too much of some things are not good. Let\'s stay healthy and kicking actively! ^^,   That\'s all for today! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: I think you also need a massage or acupuncture. ^.^     Dear [Name]. [Name], >> CORRECT! A wonderful Thursday to you!>> CORRECT! Did you recover from your stomach? >> Did you recover from your stomachache? (C1 STOMACH is one of your body parts. STOMACHACHE is a pain in the stomach.) >> OR: Did you recover from your stomach pain? Frankly speaking, I also had a stomach yesterday, and I had diarrhea in the morning, so I had a bowl of rice porridge at lunch after lecture. >> Frankly speaking, I also had a stomachache yesterday, and I had a diarrhea this morning, so I had a bowl of rice porridge at lunch after the lecture. (C2 When you make a sentence with the idea of having an illness, putting A or AN before the name of an illness is needed. IN THE MORNING may mean YESTERDAY MORNING or THIS MORNING, so it is better to make it specific by using THIS MORNING.) I was worried about that if I want to go to the toilet during the lecture, but luckily, the symptom didn\'t become serious. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I worried about the situation in which I have to go to the toilet during the lecture, but fortunately, the symptom didn\'t get serious. If I didn\'t feel better in my stomach, I wouldn\'t have my lunch, even if it is porridge. >> CORRECT! >> OR: If I didn\'t feel better in my stomach, I wouldn\'t have my lunch, even if it is just porridge. After arriving in my place, I drank many cups of warm water, and I made my belly warm using a hotpack. >> After arriving in my place, I drank many cups of warm water, and I made my belly warm using a hot-pack. (C3 HOTPACK should be HOT-PACK.) In addition, I had a Cheonggukjang that my boyfriend bought for my dinner. >> CORRECT! Cheonggukjang is a kind of fermented food, so it contains a lot of lactobacilli, and it helps me to recover from my stomachache. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Cheonggukjang is a kind of fermented food, so it contains a lot of lactobacilli, and it can help me to recover from my stomach problem. I can say that it is a natural remedy. >> CORRECT! Through those good methods, I could totally get over that. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Through those good methods, I will totally get over that. I have thought of the reason why I had my stomachache, and I realized that I had a lot of iced coffee recently. >> CORRECT! These days, the weather has become hot suddenly, and I am a person who really likes drinking iced beverages. >> CORRECT! >> OR: These days, the weather has become hot suddenly, and I am a person who really likes drinking ice-cold beverages. In this case, I already know that it is totally normal for me to suffer from stomachache, so I have to reprimand myself. >> In this case, I already know that it is totally normal for me to suffer from a stomachache, so I have to reprimand myself. (C4 Look for C1.) >> OR: In this case, I already know that it is totally normal for me to suffer from a stomach pain, so I have to reprimand myself. I really did a polish behavior, so I make a decision to stop having iced drinks. >> I really did a polished behavior, so I make a decision to stop having iced drinks. (C5 POLISH is used as a noun and a verb. To make it as an adjective, -ED should be connected to it, so from POLISH, it will be POLISHED.) >> OR: I really did a polished behavior, so I make a decision to stop having chilled drinks. I don\'t know if I can follow my decision well, but I should try to do my best for my health. >> CORRECT! The less I drink cold beverages, the less likely I am to have a stomachache. >> CORRECT! Well, both of us really should control ourselves not to exceed our limitations.>> CORRECT! See you very soon. ^^ >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you very soon!