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Dear Teacher Paula, Happy Monday! Yesterday, I watched a boxing match which Pacquiao and Mayweathe played for the title. I somehow cheered for Pacquiao while watching it, but the result was the opposite of my expectation. Did you also watch that? I think all Pilipinos were enthusiastic about this match. As I heard, this game is the match of the century, but frankly speaking, I didn't notice any specificity, especially Mayweathe. He maintained to avoid Pacquiao's attack or hug him to stop the flow of the game. Even if Mayweathe is an out-boxer, he was so passive about attacking the opponent. However, because of this game, I could feel an attraction to boxing. Before watching this game, I didn't know about boxing, but since I knew about Pacquiao by this match, I would want to watch his game next time. I think he is considered as a hero in the Philippines, and he is an honor to your country. I didn't enjoy his match to the fullest due to my lack of knowledge about boxing, but I could feel his passion to the champion fully. Anyway, I heard that he is one of the members of the National Assembly, am I right? I think he has a background that is quite unique, and it is not easy for him to combine a player and a politician. Anyway, he has a right to be admired by many people, because he overcame a physical handicap of Asian. ^^ I am so glad to be able to share this game with you. See you soon.

Dear [Name] [이름],   Happy Monday! ^.^ Advance happy Children\'s Day! ^,^   My weekend was great. How about yours? Hahaha! ^^   By the way, I also watched \"The Fight of the Century.\" I also think that the title of the match doesn\'t really suit the game. However, not like you, I already expected a bias decision from the judges. Even though our Filipino Pride Manny \"Pacman\" Pacquiao did his best, the result was not on his side. He lost the game because of the judges decision, but he won a lot of people\'s hearts around the world because of the dedication that he showed during his fight with Floyd \"Money\" Mayweather, Jr. I knew that Mayweather would win the title, but I didn\'t like his actions after the match. He acted so arrogantly. Because of that, I somehow hated his personality. His screen name is Money, and I think it really suits him. Hahaha! ^^ I know I am somehow bitter about the fight.   Anyway, I am glad to hear that you watched the game, but I am a little shocked when you told me that you would watch Pacquiao\'s next fight. Are you sure about that? Boxing games are a little brutal to watch. But, if you really want to watch him fighting again, I would like to say thank you, because I can feel some support from you. Thank you very much! ^^   About your question, you are right that Pacquiao is already considered as one of the Philippine National Heroes alive. In addition, you are correct again that he is a member of the National Assembly. I think he enjoys serving people through sports and civil service.   Anyhow, I am also glad to share my insight about the matter that you opened in your writing.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you very soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!Happy Monday!>> CORRECT! Yesterday, I watched a boxing match which Pacquiao and Mayweathe played for the title. >> Yesterday, I watched a boxing match which Pacquiao and Mayweather played for the title. (C1 You forgot the R in MAYWEATHER\'s name.) >> OR: Yesterday, I watched a boxing match which Pacquiao and Mayweather fought for the title. I somehow cheered for Pacquiao while watching it, but the result was the opposite of my expectation. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I somehow cheered for Pacquiao while watching it, but the result was the opposite of what I expected. Did you also watch that? >> CORRECT! I think all Pilipinos were enthusiastic about this match. >> CORRECT! As I heard, this game is the match of the century, but frankly speaking, I didn\'t notice any specificity, especially Mayweathe. >> As I heard, this game is the match of the century, but frankly speaking, I didn\'t notice any specificity, especially from Mayweather. (See C1. C2 PATTERN: notice something from something or someone, so there should be FROM before MAYWEATHER.) He maintained to avoid Pacquiao\'s attack or hug him to stop the flow of the game. >> CORRECT! Even if Mayweathe is an out-boxer, he was so passive about attacking the opponent. >> Even if Mayweather is an out-boxer, he was so passive about attacking the opponent. (See C1.) >> OR: Even if Mayweather is an out-boxer, he was so passive about attacking his opponent that time. However, because of this game, I could feel an attraction to boxing. >> CORRECT! >> OR: However, because of this game, I could feel some interest in boxing. Before watching this game, I didn\'t know about boxing, but since I knew about Pacquiao by this match, I would want to watch his game next time.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Before watching this game, I didn\'t know about boxing, but since I knew about Pacquiao by this match, I would want to watch his next game. I think he is considered as a hero in the Philippines, and he is an honor to your country. >> CORRECT! I didn\'t enjoy his match to the fullest due to my lack of knowledge about boxing, but I could feel his passion to the champion fully. >> CORRECT! Anyway, I heard that he is one of the members of the National Assembly, am I right? >> CORRECT! >> OR: Anyway, I heard that he is one of the members of the National Assembly, is it right? I think he has a background that is quite unique, and it is not easy for him to combine a player and a politician. >> I think he had a background that is quite unique, and it is not easy for him to combine his tasks as a player and a politician at the same time. (C3 I think your sentence is not yet complete. I can\'t figure out the meaning of combine in your sentence.) >> OR: I think he had a background that is quite unique, and it is not easy for him to be a player and a politician at the same time. Anyway, he has a right to be admired by many people, because he overcame a physical handicap of Asian. ^^ >> CORRECT UNTIL THE WORD PEOPLE. (C4 What do you mean about the other content of your sentence.) I am so glad to be able to share this game with you. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am so glad to be able to share my opinion about this game. See you soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you soon!