Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, A terrific day to you! How is it going? In celebration to Children's day, there are a large number of people everywhere. The weather is very wonderful today, so it is suitable for children to go play outside. As for me, to avoid the crowds, I took refuge at a café. I not only studied English, but also checked my mail box related with my work for a while. Today is my last day off, so I am somehow worried about the tasks which are waiting for being handled by me. Apparently, there are a lot of shipping documents to make and dispatch for my customers. It is a natural outcome, because I rested for 5 days. Fortunately, tomorrow, our boss will not come to our office because of his personal appointment, so I would feel free to deal with those. I am now comforting myself that if I just wait a few more days, it will be a lovely weekend. I just hope I won't suffer from vacation sickness. See you tomorrow! ^^

Dear my Student [이름],   A beautiful Wednesday to you! ^.^   My day yesterday went fine. Since it wasn\'t a holiday in our country, there were few people outside. It seemed like a normal day, but I wanted it to be special, so I treated my niece outside. To make the time more fun, I invited one of my high school friends to join us. We went to Mr. [Name] to eat for lunch. We had some Ramyun and [이름]bap. I wanted my niece to try Bibimbap, but the store didn\'t have any ingredients for it. Well, I didn\'t let that thing ruin our celebration for Children\'s Day. Hahaha! ^^ After eating lunch, we went to Western Union to get some money. Then, we went to the mall for my niece to play and for my friend and I to go around the place. After staying in the mall, we went to McDonalds to eat again, but it was so full of people, so we just bought some food somewhere else. We ended up, waiting for my mother, because it was time for her to finish her work. We met my mom and my friend went home. In my case with my mother and niece, we walked a little at the park. We went home after that and ate dinner with my father. That\'s my Tuesday! ^^   By the way, thanks for the sharing about your whereabouts, especially about your days off! ^^   Anyway, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions for your writing improvement. Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! A terrific day to you!>> CORRECT! How is it going? >> CORRECT! >> OR: How is your day going? In celebration to Children\'s day, there are a large number of people everywhere. >>  CORRECT! The weather is very wonderful today, so it is suitable for children to go play outside. >> The weather is very wonderful today, so it is suitable for children to go and play outside. (C1 You forgot to put AND between go and play.) >> OR: The weather is very wonderful today, so it is suitable for kids to go outside and play. >> OR: The weather is very wonderful today, so it is suitable for kids to go out and play. As for me, to avoid the crowds, I took refuge at a café. >> As for me, to avoid the crowds, I took refuge at a caf&eacute. (C2 It is better to remove the semi-colon [;] before the period [.].) >> OR: As for me, to avoid the crowds, I took refuge at a cafeacute. >> OR: As for me, to avoid the crowds, I took refuge at a cafe. I not only studied English, but also checked my mail box related with my work for a while. >> I didn\'t only study English, but also check my mail box related with my work for a while. (C3 Please check your pattern in your sentence. When you are talking about something that was not done by you, you should use DIDN\'T.) >> OR: >> I didn\'t only study English, but also check my mail box related with my work for awhile. (WHILE means a period or interval of time. AWHILE means for a short time or period.) Today is my last day off, so I am somehow worried about the tasks which are waiting for being handled by me. >> Today is my last day off, so I am somehow worried about the tasks which are waiting for me to be handled. (C4 PATTERN: waiting for someone.) >> BETTER: Today is my last day off, so I am somehow worried about the tasks which are waiting to be handled by me. Apparently, there are a lot of shipping documents to make and dispatch for my customers.>> CORRECT! It is a natural outcome, because I rested for 5 days. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is a normal outcome, because I took some rest for 5 days. Fortunately, tomorrow, our boss will not come to our office because of his personal appointment, so I would feel free to deal with those. >> Fortunately, tomorrow, our boss will not go to our office because of his personal appointment, so I will feel free to deal with those. (C5 We use GO if we are not in the destination you are talking about in your statement. We say COME if we are in the destination. So, remember the patterns \'go there\' and \'come here\'. C6 WOULD is the past tense of WILL, so in your sentence, it is wrong to use WOULD.) I am now comforting myself that if I just wait a few more days, it will be a lovely weekend. >> I am now comforting myself that if I wait for a few more days, it will be a lovely weekend. (C7 PATTERN: wait for something or some time) I just hope I won\'t suffer from vacation sickness. >> CORRECT! See you tomorrow! ^^ >> CORRECT!