Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good day! Did you do your homework? Yesterday, you were wondering about how to express the word 'space movement' in one word in English. I have also been curious about that. By the way, I read your reply with a joy, and thank you for sharing your special holiday's story. I like it when you relate your reply with your life. I hope we can share more stories with each other. Anyway, I'd like to explain a recipe for Korean noodle more to you. There are many different kinds of noodles here, and the methods of making those are also not the same. What I want to introduce first is a banquet noodle, and it is my favorite. To make it, I need many kinds of ingredients like pumpkin, mushroom, anchovy, fried egg, sea weed laver, crushed garlic and beef. The anchovy is to make a soup which will cover noodle. After boiling water with anchovy for a while, I should remove those from the soup. In this case, I just brew those in hot water, and the water will be a good tasted soup after adding some salt, crushed garlic and soy sauce. Then, I should stir-fry vegetables and beef in oil separately, and then I also should make fried eggs. The fried egg has to be sliced thin. After finishing those processes, I should put those fried garnishes on a plate separately. The last one that I have to do is to boil noodle. In this case, the noodle has to be washed with cold water to make it straight. Everything is all set, so I can just pour some soup and garnish the fried ingredients with the noodle. If you sprinkle some sea weed laver on that, it will become a heavenly taste. In this process, cutting ingredients into thin slices is the most important and difficult work. Well, I really want to recommend this food to you.

Dear my Student [이름],   A marvelous Thursday to you! ^.^   First of all, I would like to thank you for reminding me about my homework. The ability to move from one place to another instantly is called teleportation. If I have this kind of superpower, I will go to Korea and meet you every day. Hahaha! ^^ I think it will be so much fun to see you in person.   By the way, just like you, I thank you for sharing your life to me. I really like knowing new things about you, especially those crazy ones. Hahaha! ^^, I would also like to thank you for telling me how to make your favorite noodle dish. I will try to cook and eat it someday. I am so sorry, because I can\'t promise you about when I will do that, but I will.   Anyway, that\'s all for today! ^^, Happy reading! ^^. Sleep tight later! ^,^ See you tomorrow! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!Good day! >> CORRECT! Did you do your homework? >> CORRECT! Yesterday, you were wondering about how to express the word \'space movement\' in one word in English. >> CORRECT! I have also been curious about that. >> CORRECT! By the way, I read your reply with a joy, and thank you for sharing your special holiday\'s story. >> CORRECT! I like it when you relate your reply with your life. >> CORRECT! I hope we can share more stories with each other. >> CORRECT! Anyway, I\'d like to explain a recipe for Korean noodle more to you. >> Anyway, I\'d like to explain a recipe for a Korean noodle more to you. (C1 Since you want to introduce one kind of noodle dish, it is better to use A before KOREAN.) There are many different kinds of noodles here, and the methods of making those are also not the same. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: There are many different kinds of noodles here, and the methods of making them are also not the same. What I want to introduce first is a banquet noodle, and it is my favorite. >> CORRECT! To make it, I need many kinds of ingredients like pumpkin, mushroom, anchovy, fried egg, sea weed laver, crushed garlic and beef. >> CORRECT! >> OR: To make it, I need a lot of ingredients like pumpkin, mushroom, anchovy, fried egg, sea weed laver, crushed garlic and beef. The anchovy is to make a soup which will cover noodle. >> The anchovy is for the soup which will cover the noodle. (C2 I think you need to check your sentence more.) >> OR: The anchovy is an ingredient for the soup which will cover the noodle. After boiling water with anchovy for a while, I should remove those from the soup. >> CORRECT! >> OR: After boiling some water with anchovy for a while, those small fish should be removed from the soup. >> BETTER: After boiling some water with anchovy for a while, remove the small fish in the soup. In this case, I just brew those in hot water, and the water will be a good tasted soup after adding some salt, crushed garlic and soy sauce. >> CORRECT! Then, I should stir-fry vegetables and beef in oil separately, and then I also should make fried eggs. >> Then, I should stir-fry vegetables and beef in oil separately, and then, I also should make fried eggs. (C3 You forgot to put a COMMA after AND THEN.)>> BETTER: Then stir-fry some vegetables and beef in oil separately, and then, make fried eggs, too. The fried egg has to be sliced thin.>> CORRECT! >> OR: The next step is to slice the fried egg into thin pieces. After finishing those processes, I should put those fried garnishes on a plate separately. >> CORRECT! >> OR: After finishing those processes, put the fried garnishes on a plate separately. The last one that I have to do is to boil noodle. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Lastly, boil some noodle. In this case, the noodle has to be washed with cold water to make it straight. >> CORRECT! Everything is all set, so I can just pour some soup and garnish the fried ingredients with the noodle. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Since everything is all set, pour some soup and garnish the fried ingredients with the noodle. If you sprinkle some sea weed laver on that, it will become a heavenly taste. >> If you sprinkle some sea weed laver on that, it will have a heavenly taste. (C4 BECOME should be HAVE.) In this process, cutting ingredients into thin slices is the most important and difficult work. >> CORRECT! Well, I really want to recommend this food to you. >> CORRECT!