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2015-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Friday! These days, I have too many tasks to handle, so I am a little exhausted. In addition, our boss was annoyed by our Chinese coworkers, and this situation made me get hurt too. What did I do wrong? Because of his personality, I felt so bad. Here in Korea, there is a saying that if monk dislikes the temple, he just get out of the temple. That is indeed what I am feeling now. However, I will try not to bring this mood to our class. See you very soon! P.S.: Would you like to let me know which one is correct? 1. I'll be finished within a half an hour. I'll be finished within half an hour. 2. The newspaper is distributed free. The newspaper is distributed for free. 3. She felt refreshment of mind and body after a hot bath. -> I saw this sentence in my dictionary, but yesterday, you said that the phrase 'feel refreshment' is not suitable. Can you kindly explain it more to me?

강사 첨삭

Dear my Student [이름],   Happy Friday and happy Parents\' Day! ^.^   Sorry for not checking your composition very well. T.T I have a little time to go over it. I am really sorry.   By the way, let\'s go directly to your last question. FEEL REFRESHMENT is a correct expression if it is together with TO. Therefore, we have the pattern FEEL REFRESHMENT TO. I hope I answered you question.   Anyway, happy reading! ^^ See you on Monday! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Friday! >> CORRECT! These days, I have too many tasks to handle, so I am a little exhausted. >> CORRECT! In addition, our boss was annoyed by our Chinese coworkers, and this situation made me get hurt too. >> CORRECT! What did I do wrong? >> CORRECT! Because of his personality, I felt so bad. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Because of his behavior, I felt so bad. >> OR: Because of his treatment towards me today, I felt bad. Here in Korea, there is a saying that if monk dislikes the temple, he just get out of the temple. >> Here in Korea, there is a saying that if a monk dislikes the temple, he just gets out of the temple. That is indeed what I am feeling now. >> CORRECT! However, I will try not to bring this mood to our class. >> CORRECT! See you very soon! >> CORRECT! P.S.: Would you like to let me know which one is correct?>> CORRECT! 1. I\'ll be finished within a half an hour. >> I\'ll be finished within half an hour. I\'ll be finished within half an hour.>> CORRECT! 2. The newspaper is distributed free.>> The newspaper is distributed for free. >> OR: The newspaper is distributed for freely The newspaper is distributed for free.>> CORRECT! 3. She felt refreshment of mind and body after a hot bath.>> CORRECT! -> I saw this sentence in my dictionary, but yesterday, you said that the phrase \'feel refreshment\' is not suitable. >> CORRECT! Can you kindly explain it more to me? >> CORRECT!

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