Composition

Hi there, [이름]! ^.^

Happy Tuesday! ^^

First of all, I would like to say sorry.

I can\'t come up with another word to replace DISAPPEAR.

In addition, I checked some expressions to connect with typhoon, and DISAPPEAR is okay to be used.

Therefore, you are correct.

I am really sorry.

By the way, I am happy for you about your present to your mother.

I am really sure she will like it.

Your mother is so lucky to have a daughter like you.

Anyway, I agree with you that mothers are all the same.

With my mother too, she doesn\'t like me buying things for her.

Instead of giving her presents, she encourages me to give some things to my siblings.

Hahaha! ^^

That\'s all for today! ^^,

Don\'t forget to read happily.

See you tomorrow! ^^. 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good day!
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It is raining here due to a typhoon.
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From what I heard, the typhoon is toward Japan, so it is affecting us a little.
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Here in Seoul, the rain is not that heavy, but it is raining cats and dogs in the south of our country.
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>> OR: Here in Seoul, the rain is not that heavy, but it is raining cats and dogs in the southern part of our country.

I hope people who live in the south will not be affected a lot from this typhoon.
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Anyway, I read your reply with joy, and I could see your family\'s harmoniousness.
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Here in Korea, May is called \'family\'s month\'.
>> Here in Korea, May is called \'Family Month.\' (C1 FAMILY\'S MONTH is FAMILY MONTH.)

In celebration to Mother\'s day, I also bought a set of cosmetic for my mother.
>> In celebration for Mothers\' Day, I also bought a set of cosmetics for my mother. (C2 PATTERN: celebration for noun or something/celebration to base-verb C3 MOTHER\'S DAY should be MOTHERS\' DAY. C4 COSMETIC should have S since you are talking about different kinds of cosmetics which are in a set.)

Before buying that, I asked my mother what she needs, but she said there was nothing she wants.
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Of course, I don\'t believe what she said, so I kept asking her the same question.
>> Of course, I didn\'t believe what she said, so I kept asking her the same question. (C5 You should concentrate on the past. DON\'T should be DIDN\'T.)

Through this persistent effort, I could ultimately get her answer.
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I think all mothers are the same.
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They just don\'t want their offspring to spend money.
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However, I already know that they will show that they are very happy, as soon as they get the present.
>> However, I already know that they will show that they are very happy, as soon as they get their presents. (C6 THE PRESENT should be THEIR PRESENTS.)

>> OR: However, I already know that they will show their happiness as soon as they get their presents.

This is the reason why I prepare the present for her.
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I bought that by internet shopping, so I didn\'t receive it yet.
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>> OR: I bought that online, so I haven\'t received it yet.

I am going to dispatch it to her with another moisture cream which is bought by my boyfriend at a duty free shop.
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>> OR: I am going to dispatch it to her with another moisturizing cream which is bought by my boyfriend at a duty free shop.

I can imagine how happy she is. ^^
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That is all for now and see you very soon.
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P.S.: Today, we are going to have Unit 2-17 Part 2 Letter C Question No 5.
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After finishing that, let\'s move on to the next page. ^^;;

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