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Dear [Name] [이름],

A satisfying Wednesday night to us! ^.^

Ohhh~~~!!! ^^

We had a similar weather.

It was also sunny today.

It didn\'t rain even a little, but it was a little cloudy.

Thank you for the information about typhoons in Korea.

In the Philippines, we experience around 19 typhoons every year.

Are you surprised?

You read it right.

There are around 19 typhoons that pass our country.

Don\'t worry, because only 6 to 9 of them reach our land.

However, as you know, whenever there\'s a storm, some Filipinos are in danger.

Frankly speaking, every time I hear news about typhoons approaching our country, I always hope for the safety of all the Filipinos who will be affacted by them.

I hate storms, but I love rain.

By the way, let\'s talk about another thing.

Ah! Let\'s talk about your additional idea in relation to home.

Thank you for the information.

I can reflect from it.

Well, here in our country, we don\'t think a lot about having our own houses.

We just consider that when we start our own families.

Due to strong family ties here, we just plan to buy for our houses that we can make as our home when we settle down.

Our parents don\'t allow us living separately with them unless we are married.

Anyway, about your question in accordance with Fathers\' Day, it is celebrated in our country on the third Sunday of June.

Therefore, this year, it will be on June 21st.

It is so near, so I need to prepare.

Hahaha! ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A happy Wednesday to you!
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Is it sunny there?
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>> OR: Is it a sunny day there?

Here is sunny and clear today.
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>> OR: Here is sunny and clear.

The typhoon has lost strength.
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>> OR: The typhoon has lost it\'s strength.

Here in Korea, at this time of the year, we face 4~5 times of typhoon, and those are usually toward Japan.
>> Here in Korea, at this time of the year, we face 4~5 typhoons, and those are usually toward Japan. (C1 I haven\'t encounter any expressions with 4~5 TIMES OF TYPHOON. It is better to say 4~5 TYPHOONS or TYPHOONS 4~5 TIMES.)

>> OR: Here in Korea, at this time of the year, we face typhoons 4~5 times, and those are usually toward Japan.

However, because of typhoon\'s strong power, whenever it happens, we always get influence.
>> However, because of a typhoon\'s strong power, whenever it happens, we always get influenced. (C2 I think you forgot to consider using articles in your sentences. You forgot to use A in front of TYPHOON\'S. C3 PATTERN: get + adjective or get + PP)

>> BETTER: However, because of a typhoon\'s strong power, whenever it happens, we always get affected.

Therefore, we really should prepare for pretreatments before coming here.
>> Therefore, we really should prepare for pretreatments before it comes here. (C4 BEFORE COMING HERE means BEFORE WE COME HERE.)

Whenever those occur, too much precipitation causes floods in many parts of our country, and due to a wild wind, there is a big possibility for us to get harmed by facilities that are destroyed by the wind.
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Therefore, we should check in advance if drains are not blocked or facilities are fixed tightly.
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By those prior actions, we could prevent our safe from the forces of nature.
>> By those prior actions, we can prevent the forces of nature from endangering our safety. (C5 I think you somehow mixed your words. PATTERN: prevent something from)

>> OR: By those prior actions, we can keep safe against the forces of nature.

By the way, as an extension of our last class, the first thing that comes to my mind when I think \'home\' is \'high price\'.
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Home provides us full of pleasure and comfort, but at the same time, it makes me disappointed because of its high price.
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>> OR: Home provides us full of pleasure and comfort, but at the same time, it makes me disappointed because of its high cost.

Here in Korea, it is our time to buy a house when we reach at my age, but unreasonable prices hinder us from buying that.
>> Here in Korea, it is a person\'s time to buy a house when he or she reaches my age, but unreasonable prices hinder us from buying that. (C6 It is better to make your nouns singular when you start using a singular subject.)

>> OR: Here in Korea, it is a person\'s time to buy a house when he or she reaches my age, but unreasonable prices hinder us from having that.

Just the thought of it makes me bitter.
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When can I get my own house?
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I still have a long way to go. ^^;;
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>> OR: I still have a long way to go to fulfill that.

Anyway, suddenly, I am wondering that when is Father\'s Day there in the Philippines?
>> Anyway, suddenly, I am wondering about when Fathers\' Day is there in the Philippines. (C7 When you use I AM WONDERING as the beginning of your sentence, you shouldn\'t make a question.)

>> OR: Anyway, suddenly, I am wondering about something. When is Fathers\' Day there in the Philippines?

In our country, we don\'t separate the day that is celebrated for mother and father.
>> In our country, we don\'t separate the day that is celebrated to honor our mothers and fathers. (C8 It is better to make your nouns plural when you start using a plural subject.)

I am waiting for your answer. ^^
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>> OR: I will wait for your answer.

See you very soon!

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