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Dear my Teacher Paula, Good day! I really enjoyed our talks in last class. Here in Korea, when it comes to IQ point, many people think of it sensitively. However, according to statistics, 95~110 point is a standard, so we don't need to be ashamed that we are in a low grade. Moreover, the more we get a test of IQ, the more we can acquire a skill in getting a better point. Therefore, we should not trust the point blindly. I don't think IQ guarantees our success. As we can see easily, there are many people who win success without high IQ point. All things depend on each person's effort and will. Well, if you have a chance, you can have a test about it only with entertainment. ^^ See you very soon! *Essay I am now standing at the crossroads between saving money and spending money. If I consider enjoying my life to the fullest, of course, I should spend money without limitation. However, if I consider worrying about my future, needless to say, I must save my money. I really don't know which one is correct. I think it depends on individual outlook. I am really certain to say that we shouldn't waste money thoughtlessly, but we should consume reasonably. If we keep this logic, we may not be regretful when we look back into our past after being old.

Dear my Student [이름],   Happy Thursday! ^.^   I\'m glad to know that you enjoyed our class yesterday. I hope I can make more enjoyable classes for us. However, I can\'t do that tomorrow. I won\'t see you. I think I will miss you a lot, but I need to control myself.   By the way, thank you for sharing more about our IQ topic. Hahaha! ^^ I agree with what you have written in your composition that IQ test result doesn\'t guarantee our success. Well, mental capability is nothing when physical and emotional abilities don\'t exist.   Anyway, that\'s all for today! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, Enjoy your weekend! ^^. See you on Monday! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good day! >> CORRECT! I really enjoyed our talks in last class. >> I really enjoyed our talks in our last class. (C1 PATTERN: in the last + noun or in + possessive pronoun + last + noun) >> OR: I really enjoyed out talked in the last class that we had. Here in Korea, when it comes to IQ point, many people think of it sensitively. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Here in Korea, when it comes to IQ issue, many people think of it sensitively.  However, according to statistics, 95~110 point is a standard, so we don\'t need to be ashamed that we are in a low grade.>> However, according to statistics, 95~110 points are standard, so we don\'t need to be ashamed that we are in a low grade. (C2 Sorry, I can\'t give any explanations why your sentence is not correct, but I can give other examples to give you a clearer idea about your error.) >> OR: However, according to statistics, points ranging from 95 to 110 are considered as standard, so we don\'t need to be ashamed that we are in a low grade. >> OR: However, according to statistics, points ranging from 95 to 110 are considered as standard, so we don\'t need to be ashamed that we are in a low class. Moreover, the more we get a test of IQ, the more we can acquire a skill in getting a better point. >> Moreover, the more we get a test in IQ, the more we can acquire a skill in getting better points. (C3 MATH TEST is TEST IN MATH, so we can also say IQ TEST is TEST in IQ.) >> BETTER: Moreover, the more we get an IQ Test, the more we can acquire a skill in getting higher points. >> OR: Moreover, the more we get an IQ Test, the more we can acquire a skill in getting better grades. Therefore, we should not trust the point blindly. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Therefore, we should not trust our grades blindly. I don\'t think IQ guarantees our success. >> CORRECT! As we can see easily, there are many people who win success without high IQ point. >> As we can see easily, there are many people who win success without high IQ points. (C4 POINT should be with S since you used THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE.) >> OR: As we can easily see, there are many people who win success without high IQ points. >> OR: As we can obviously see, there are many people who become successful without attaining high IQ points. All things depend on each person\'s effort and will. >> CORRECT! Well, if you have a chance, you can have a test about it only with entertainment. ^^ >> CORRECT! >> OR: Well, if you have a chance, you can have a test about it only for fun. See you very soon!>> CORRECT!   *Essay I am now standing at the crossroads between saving money and spending money. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am not standing at the crossroads between saving and spending money. If I consider enjoying my life to the fullest, of course, I should spend money without limitation. >> CORRECT! >> OR: If I consider enjoying my life to the fullest, of course, I should spend my money without any limitations. However, if I consider worrying about my future, needless to say, I must save my money. >> CORRECT! I really don\'t know which one is correct. >> CORRECT! I think it depends on individual outlook. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I think it depends on an individual\'s outlook. I am really certain to say that we shouldn\'t waste money thoughtlessly, but we should consume reasonably.>> I am really certain to say that we shouldn\'t waste money thoughtlessly, but we should consume it reasonable. (C5 In your sentence, there should be IT after CONSUME.) If we keep this logic, we may not be regretful when we look back into our past after being old. >> CORRECT! >> OR: If we keep and practice this logic, we may not have any regrets when we look back into the past after being old.