Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, A fabulous Friday to you! Needleless to say, today is a special day to you, am I right? I am somehow wondering about what kind of family gathering it is. Regarding my today's class, I haven't decided if I accept a substitution class. I somehow want to take advantage of this chance to have fun with my friends. ^^;; Anyhow, I hope you have a wonderful time with your family. P.S.: Don't eat too much! Hahaha (I’m just kidding. ^^) *Essay I don't think people are surely happy due to their wealth. Human beings are very greedy animals. Even if they have a huge amount of money, they tend not to be satisfied with staying where they are. Because of this character, sometimes, some of people lose everything after attempting too much to acquire more wealth. This kind of situation can be showed by many politicians. Some of them already have a lot of money that can't be spent all before they die, but they still use dirty tricks to make their savings grower. Even they are greedy for their power. From their viewpoint of it, since they are already rich, the next step is to take power, especially in politics. Here in Korea, these days, our prime minister accepted a bribe from one of business men, so he was forced to resign. He is now on trial for bribery. He was so greedy for his power and wealth, and it finally made him lose everything. As we can see by this example, too much greed for power and wealth can make people's lives fall into the hell. Of course, it is an extreme case, but we shouldn't ignore a good lesson from that. Sometimes, when it comes to living happily, I think ordinary things are the best.

Dear my Student [이름],   We are fabulous today! ^.^ Hahaha! ^^   I think you already now me a lot. Even though I don\'t tell you my whereabouts in detail, you can feel something about me. Don\'t worry. I won\'t eat a lot. Hahaha! ^^ Yoiu should also do that. ^^,   Anyway, I think you are a really experienced person. You know what is happening in the world, especially in your country. You know the personalities of people living in this world, especially the politicians. That\'s good.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Have a great weekend! ^^, See you on Monday! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! A fabulous Friday to you! >> CORRECT! Needleless to say, today is a special day to you, am I right? >> Needless to say, today is a special day to you, am I right? (C1 I think you committed a typographic error. You typed NEEDLELESS instead of NEEDLESS.) I am somehow wondering about what kind of family gathering it is. >> CORRECT! Regarding my today\'s class, I haven\'t decided if I accept a substitution class. >> CORRECT! I somehow want to take advantage of this chance to have fun with my friends. ^^;; >> CORRECT! Anyhow, I hope you have a wonderful time with your family.>> CORRECT! P.S.: Don\'t eat too much! Hahaha (I’m just kidding. ^^) >> CORRECT!   *Essay I don\'t think people are surely happy due to their wealth. >> CORRECT! Human beings are very greedy animals. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Human beings are greedy animals indeed. Even if they have a huge amount of money, they tend not to be satisfied with staying where they are.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Even if they have a huge amount of money, they are not satisfied with what they have. >> OR: Even if they have a huge amount of money, they don\'t find any satisfaction from what they already have. Because of this character, sometimes, some of people lose everything after attempting too much to acquire more wealth. >> Because of this character, sometimes, some of those people lose everything after attempting too much to acquire more wealth. (C2 I think you want to be specific in your sentence, so I suggest you to use SOME OF THOSE PEOPLE instead of SOME OF PEOPLE. SOME OF PEOPLE is wrong.) >> OR: Because of this character, sometimes, some of them lose everything after attempting too much to acquire more wealth. This kind of situation can be showed by many politicians. >> CORRECT! >> OR: This kind of situation can be shown by many politicians. >> OR: This kind of situation is practiced by many politicians. Some of them already have a lot of money that can\'t be spent all before they die, but they still use dirty tricks to make their savings grower. >> Some of them already have a lot of money that can\'t be spent before they die, but they still use dirty tricks to make their savings grow more. Even they are greedy for their power. >> CORRECT! From their viewpoint of it, since they are already rich, the next step is to take power, especially in politics. >> CORRECT! Here in Korea, these days, our prime minister accepted a bribe from one of business men, so he was forced to resign. >> Here in Korea, these days, our prime minister accepted a bribe from one of the businessmen in our country, so he was forced to resign. He is now on trial for bribery. >> CORRECT! He was so greedy for his power and wealth, and it finally made him lose everything. >> CORRECT! As we can see by this example, too much greed for power and wealth can make people\'s lives fall into the hell. >> As we can see by this example, too much greed for power and wealth can make people\'s lives fall into hell. Of course, it is an extreme case, but we shouldn\'t ignore a good lesson from that. >> CORRECT! Sometimes, when it comes to living happily, I think ordinary things are the best. >> CORRECT!