Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Good day!
Did you rest and enjoy well on your weekend?
In my case, I stayed home all day and made some side dishes that I like yesterday.
Making foods is one of my hobbies, so I usually enjoy doing that when I am free.
Yesterday, I made 3 side dishes, and the names of those are chives spicy salad, anchovy-chili with boiled soy sauce and stir-fried sea weed stem.
Since I arranged some side dishes like that, I don't need to be worried about what I should have in every meal time.
Somehow, it is like a full-time homemaker's mind. Hahaha!
By the way, these days, we shipped one new item from China to LGEKOREA, but there are some problems on that.
That is our first time to provide it to our customer, so we are unfamiliar with dealing with that.
Because of this serious problem, our boss gave calls to our Chinese coworkers and nagged at them consistently.
The noise of his crotchety voice made my ears deafened.
Well, this is a new item, so we can't avoid this kind of situation.
I really have no idea how long it will last.
I might be sitting on pins and needles until resolving this problem. ^^;;
See you very soon.
강사 첨삭
Dear my Student [이름],
A wonderful day to us, especially to you! ^.^
First and for most, I would like to thank you for being understanding about my absence last Friday.
By the way, my weekend was great except that I was sick the whole weekend.
Don\'t worry.
I am fine, because I am a strong woman.
Hahaha! ^^
It was a usual weekend.
I enjoyed it with my family.
However, I didn\'t play and chat with them a lot.
Anyhow, I am so glad that you had a great weekend, especially a great Sunday.
I am happy that you won\'t be worried anymore about what you will eat.
However, I am so envious of you.
I can\'t try the dishes that you prepared.
The thought of you eating them makes me salivate.
Wait a minute!
You said that you were like a full-time homemaker.
I think you are considering to settle down.
Well, that is great! ^^
Hahaha! ^^,
Anyway, I am saddened to hear your news about your work.
But, I know your company will be through on that in no time. ^^.
That all for now! ^^
Happy reading! ^^,
See you tomorrow! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!Good day! >> CORRECT!
Did you rest and enjoy well on your weekend? >> CORRECT!
>> OR: Did you rest and enjoy your weekend well?
In my case, I stayed home all day and made some side dishes that I like yesterday. >> CORRECT!
Making foods is one of my hobbies, so I usually enjoy doing that when I am free. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: Making foods is one of my hobbies, so I usually enjoy doing that when i have some free time.
Yesterday, I made 3 side dishes, and the names of those are chives spicy salad, anchovy-chili with boiled soy sauce and stir-fried sea weed stem. >> Yesterday, I made 3 side dishes, amd the names of those are Spicy Chive Salad, Anchovy-chili with Boiled Soy Sauce and Stir-fried Seaweed Stem. (C1 When you introduce names of dishes, put the first names of the important words in capital letters. C2 Study the Order of Adjectives.)
>> OR: Yesterday, I made 3 side dishes, amd the names of those are Spicy Chive Salad, Anchovy Chili Soy Sauce and Stir-fried Seaweed Stem.
Since I arranged some side dishes like that, I don\'t need to be worried about what I should have in every meal time. >> CORRECT!
Somehow, it is like a full-time homemaker\'s mind. Hahaha! >> CORRECT!
By the way, these days, we shipped one new item from China to LGEKOREA, but there are some problems on that. >> By the way, these days, we shipped one new item from China to LGE KOREA, but there are some problems on that. (C3 There should be a space between LGE and KOREA.)
That is our first time to provide it to our customer, so we are unfamiliar with dealing with that. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: That is our first time to provide that kind of service, so we are unfamiliar with the process of dealing with that.
Because of this serious problem, our boss gave calls to our Chinese coworkers and nagged at them consistently. >> CORRECT!
The noise of his crotchety voice made my ears deafened.>> CORRECT!
Well, this is a new item, so we can\'t avoid this kind of situation. >> CORRECT!
I really have no idea how long it will last. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: I really have no idea how long it will take to find a remedy for it.
I might be sitting on pins and needles until resolving this problem. ^^;; >> CORRECT!
See you very soon.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you very soon!
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