Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good day! It is Wednesday which is your favorite. The days seem to move fast after Wednesday. By the way, I succeeded in contacting with the guy who moved out yesterday. He said some of movers didn't distinguish my goods from his and took all of my winter boots which were packed in boxes. Luckily, he also knew about this situation, and he apologized to me. Maybe, today, he will go to our building to give those back to me. That was indeed a ridiculous situation. Hahaha! I will let you know the result soon. ^^ See you very soon! *Essay Here in Korea, we have three kinds of market, such as super market, public market and flea market. The super markets are the most common store here, and our major companies build those. Wherever we go, we can easily find those. Because of their convenience in shopping, many people prefer to shop goods there. The super market usually provides parking lots, carts, and kind services to people. That's why many people rather go there to buy goods than public market. Besides those kinds of market, we can rarely see flea markets. This market is not common, so we only should go special spots to see that. The most famous flea market is near Hongik University, and that place also can be called 'Street of Youth'. The flea market is only popular to young generation, so that place became 'Street of Youth' naturally. Well, suddenly, I want to go there to recall my old memories. ^^

Dear my Student [이름],   A marvelous Wednesday to us and to the people we love! ^.^   I am really looking forward for the updates that you will tell me. ^^   Anyway, I won\'t say a lot of things anymore. I would just like to say VERY GOOD for making your composition. Your writing is like a burger in Burger King. It is full of fillings. I enjoyed reading eat. I hope you will also enjoy reading the corrections and suggestions I made for you composition improvement.   Anyhow, that\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good day! >> CORRECT! It is Wednesday which is your favorite. >> CORRECT! The days seem to move fast after Wednesday. >> CORRECT! By the way, I succeeded in contacting with the guy who moved out yesterday.>> CORRECT! >> OR: By the way, I successfully contacted the guy who moved out yesterday from our apartment building last night. He said some of movers didn\'t distinguish my goods from his and took all of my winter boots which were packed in boxes. >> He said some of the movers didn\'t distinguish my goods from his and took all of my winter boots which were packed in boxes. (C1 There should be THE before MOVERS, because the thought is very specific.) Luckily, he also knew about this situation, and he apologized to me.>> CORRECT! Maybe, today, he will go to our building to give those back to me. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Maybe, today, he will go to our building to give those back to me in person. That was indeed a ridiculous situation. Hahaha! >> CORRECT! I will let you know the result soon. ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: I will update you about it soon. See you very soon! >> CORRECT!   *Essay Here in Korea, we have three kinds of market, such as super market, public market and flea market. >> Here in Korea, we have three kinds of markets, such as supermarket, public and flea markets. (C2 The first market that you used in your sentence should be plural since you put THREE KINDS. C3 SUPER and MARKET should only be one word, so it should be SUPERMARKET not SUPER MARKET.) The super markets are the most common store here, and our major companies build those. >> The supermarkets are the most common stores here, and our major companies built those. (C4 See C3. C5 STORE should be with S. C6 BUILD should be BUILT.) >> OR: The supermarkets are the most common stores here, and our major companies built them. Wherever we go, we can easily find those. >> CORRECT! Because of their convenience in shopping, many people prefer to shop goods there. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Because of their convenience in relation with shopping, many people prefer to shop goods there. The super market usually provides parking lots, carts, and kind services to people.>> The supermarker usually provides parking lots, carts, and kind services to people. (C7 See C3.) That\'s why many people rather go there to buy goods than public market. >> That\'s why many people would rather go there to buy goods than going to the public market. (C8 I think your sentence is not complete without the word WOULD before RATHER.) >> OR: That\'s why many people go there to buy goods rather than to go to the public market. Besides those kinds of market, we can rarely see flea markets. >> Besides those kinds of markets, we can rarely see flee markets. (C9 MARKET should be MARKETS because of THOSE and KINDS.) >> OR: Aside from those kinds of markets, there are also flea markets, that we can see rarely. This market is not common, so we only should go special spots to see that. >> This market is not common, so we should only go to special spots to see that. (C10 PATTERN : go to) The most famous flea market is near Hongik University, and that place also can be called \'Street of Youth\'. >> The most famous flea market is near Hongik University, and that place also can be called \'Street of Youth.\' (C11 When you use open and close apostrophes at the end of your sentence, the period or dot should be placed before the close apostrophe.) >> OR: The most famous flea market is near Hongik University, and that place can also be called \'Street of Youth.\' The flea market is only popular to young generation, so that place became \'Street of Youth\' naturally. >> CORRECT! Well, suddenly, I want to go there to recall my old memories. ^^ >> CORRECT! >> OR: Well, suddenly, I want to go there to reminisce the past.