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Dear my Student [이름],

A majestic Thursday to you! ^.^

I am listening to the OST of \'The Classic\' now.

The melody is so good.

I like it so much.

I keep on repeating it until I go home.

Hahaha! ^^

I can\'t stop from crying because I can see some scenes from the movie.

I am so in love again.

Hahaha! ^^,

Anyway, thanks for telling me more about the movie.

Thank you very much! ^^,

Anyhow, happy reading! ^^

See you tomorrow! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A fabulous Thursday to you!
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It is a sunny day, and I can totally see a blue sky and breathe in fresh air.
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By the way, I was glad to hear that you also watched the movie ‘The classic.’
>> By the way, I was glad to hear that you also watched the movie \'The Classic.\' (C1 The first letters of the important words of a title of a movie should be capitalized. The first letter of a title should always be capitalized. The words that you shouldn\'t capitalize in a title are the prepositions and articles.)

I copied a web site address to you below, and you can listen to the OST of that.
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http://blog.naver.com/gwguitars/220358208729
>> It is http://blog.naver.com/gwguitars/220358208729.

Let me tell you the story line of that movie below.
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A female and a male character fell in love with each other.
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However, the guy fought in a war, and due to his personal reason, they couldn\'t keep in touch with each other.
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A few years later, she got married with another guy, and delivered a baby girl.
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About 20 years later, her daughter became a university student, and she is lost in love with one of university club seniors.
>> About 20 years later, her daughter became a university student, and she was lost in love with one of the university club seniors. (C2 You started your story with past tense sentences, so all of your verbs should be written considering the past. C3 PATTERN: one of the + plural noun)

>> OR: About 20 years later, her daughter became a university student and was lost in love with one of the university club seniors.

Through some circumstances, the female lead realized that her daughter\'s boyfriend is the son of her first lover.
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>> OR: Through some circumstances, the leading actress realized that her daughter\'s boyfriend is the son of her first lover.

At the same time, her daughter also knew about the mother\'s first love story, and she felt amazed at this coincidence.
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She appreciated that although her mother and his father failed in love at that time, but she and her boyfriend are ironically in love with each other now.
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>> OR: She appreciated that although her mother and her boyfriend\'s father failed in love at that time, but she and her boyfriend are ironically in love with each other now.

Indeed, this story touches my heart!
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The OST also makes my heart beat.
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No matter how much listen to that music and watch that movie, I wouldn\'t get fed up with that.
>> No matter how much I listen to that music and watch that movie, I wouldn\'t get fed up with that. (C4 You forgot to put I between MUCH and LISTEN.)

All actors and actresses in this movie have become famous here in Korea, and they are still active in movie and musical fields.
>> All actors and actresses in this movie have become famous here in Korea, and they are still active in movies and musical fields. (C5 The secons MOVIE should be in its plural form, because you are not only talking about one movie, right?)

Well, I have to look for the movie file on the web.
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See you very soon!

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