Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good day! Today is the last work day of this week, and I feel very happy now even if our boss is now acting irritated. Because of our holiday and my day off, I am fully occupied dealing with tasks in advance. Do you have a wonderful plan on this coming weekend and Buddha's day? You will also be able to rest for 3 days in a row. You should hold this rare chance to enjoy your spare time. For your reference, next month, we have a national holiday, but the day is on Saturday. As for you, it will be a bad new. ^^;; By the way, I want to ask you some questions below. When I study English, I found a sentence as follows. -> The sting of an insect is swollen. Refer to above, I made my composition as 'if your tonsil is swollen' on last homework, but you helped me to ament it to 'if your tonsils swell up.' As I know, 'swollen' is an adjective and swell's past participle at the same time. [swell-swelled-swelled (or swollen)] I am a little confused about that word's usage. Please help me to make it clear. ^^ See you very soon.

Dear my Student [이름],   Happy Friday! ^.^ T.G.I.F.~~~! ^,^   I feel so good when you say that you are happy even though your boss acts in a negative way. However, what are those tasks that you talked about in your composition? I have a feeling that they are for your work. I\'m hope I am wrong.   Don\'t worry! ^^ I will spend my long weekend wisely. Hahaha! ^^,   By the way, I already answered your question below. So, you need to read all of my comments and suggestions first before you find those answers. ^^   Happy reading! ^^ Enjoy your long weekend with a bang! ^^, See you on Tuesday! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good day! >> CORRECT! Today is the last work day of this week, and I feel very happy now even if our boss is now acting irritated. >> Today is the last workday this week, and I feel very happy now even if our boss is acting irritated. (C1 There should be no space between WORK and DAY. C2 It is better to remove OF before THIS. C3 Just use NOW once in a sentence.) >> OR: Today is the last working day this week, and I feel very happy even if our boss is now acting irritated. >> OR: Today is the last working day this week, and I feel very happy even if our boss is acting irritated now. Because of our holiday and my day off, I am fully occupied dealing with tasks in advance. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Because of our holiday and my day off, I am fully occupied dealing with some tasks in advance. Do you have a wonderful plan on this coming weekend and Buddha\'s day? >> Do you have a wonderful plan this coming weekend and Buddha\'s Day? (C4 PATTERN: on the coming weekend or this coming weekend C5 When you right a name of a holiday, be sure to make the first letters of the words of that event in capital letters.) >> OR: Do you have a wonderful plan on the coming weekend and Buddha\'s Day? You will also be able to rest for 3 days in a row. >> CORRECT! You should hold this rare chance to enjoy your spare time. >> CORRECT! For your reference, next month, we have a national holiday, but the day is on Saturday. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: For your reference, next month, we have a national holiday, but that day is on Saturday. As for you, it will be a bad new. ^^;;>> As for you, it will be a bad news. (C6 The NEW in your sentence should be NEWS, because it\'s meaning is a report for an event, right?) By the way, I want to ask you some questions below. >> By the way, I want to ask you some questions, and they are below. (C7 Your sentence is not complete.) When I study English, I found a sentence as follows. >> CORRECT! -> The sting of an insect is swollen. >> CORRECT! (This is correct in grammar, and we can also say that that part of an insect is swelling.) >> OR: The sting of an insect can result in sweling. (Here, we are focusing on the effect of the sting of an insect.) Refer to above, I made my composition as \'if your tonsil is swollen\' on last homework, but you helped me to ament it to \'if your tonsils swell up.\'>> Refer to above, I made my composition as \'if your tonsil is swollen\' on my last homework, but you helped me to amend it to \'if your tonsils swell up.\' (C8 PATTERN: on the last or on my last C9 IF YOUR TONSIL IS SWOLLEN is correct. I only thought of it as the past participle of SWELL.) As I know, \'swollen\' is an adjective and swell\'s past participle at the same time. [swell-swelled-swelled (or swollen)]>> CORRECT! I am a little confused about that word\'s usage. >> CORRECT! Please help me to make it clear. ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: Please help me remove confusion about it. See you very soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you very soon!