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Dear my Student [이름],

Happy Wednesday! ^^

First of all, I would like to apologize for not checking your composition immediately.

I became so busy with other things at work.

I am really sorry.

Anyway, I will also tell you the things I had last Saturday.

In the morning, I cleaned our house and helped my mother to finish the laundry, because the person who we pay for it had an urgent appointment in the middle of his duty.

I felt a little disappointed, because my mom paid her the whole amount, but she didn\'t finish her task.

Well, my mom is just very kind.

To continue, in the afternoon, my family and I had a late lunch due to our busyness.

I cooked rice, and my mother cooked some viands.

At 3 PM, I prepared to go out one of my friend, who is also my co-worker at Power English, to watch a movie entitled \"Meet the Mormons.\"

We watched it together with her friend who is also her neighbor.

It was fun. Hahaha! ^^,

I got to know a new friend. ^^.

So, that\'s all for my Saturday.

By the way, about your favorite program, I will find time to watch it.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you tomorrow! ^^,

Happy reading! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Happy Saturday!
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I am a little curious about what you are doing now. ^^
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In my case, I cleaned up my room so far, and I just ate some steamed potatoes and a glass of milk as my belated lunch.
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>> BETTER: In my case, I cleaned up my room so far, and I just ate some steamed potatoes and a glass of milk as my late lunch.

Now is 17:20 PM, an hour later, our TV will give my favorite reality variety show named \'Unlimited challenge.\'
>> Now is 17:20, and an hour later, our TV will give my favorite reality variety show named \'Unlimited Challenge.\' (C1 17:20 is understood as time in the afternoon, so there is no need to use PM after it. C2 There should be a conjunction AND between NOW IS 17:20 and AN HOUR LATER since these two ideas are not really connected to each other. To give connection between them, there should be a conjunction to link them.)

>> OR: Now is 5:20 PM, and an hour later, my favorite reality variety show named \'Unlimited Challenge\' will be on air.

As I told you already, I never miss that program.
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When I watch that, somehow, I feel like I can totally remove my stress.
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I am already ready for laughing out a lot.
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>> OR: I am already ready for laughing out loud.

There are 6 members in that show, and they are all comedians.
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One of them is the most famous comedian here in Korea, and almost people like him.
>> One of them is the most famous comedian here in Korea, and most people like him. (C3 PATTERN: most people or almost all people)

>> OR: One of them is the most famous comedian here in Korea, and almost all most people like him.

>> OR: One of them is the most famous comedian here in Korea, and almost all Koreans like him.

He has an upright personality and is a model for other comedians.
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He has been leading this program for 10 years, and it is not easy for comedy program to have a long run.
>> He has been leading this program for 10 years, and it is not easy for a comedy program to have a long run. (C4 You forgot to use A before COMEDY.)

>> OR: He has been leading this program for 10 years, and it is not easy for comedy programs to have a long run.

That\'s why many people admire him.
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Due to that kind of his kind personality and leadership, many entertainers want to appear in that program.
>> Due to his kind personality and leadership, many entertainers want to appear in the program. (C5 Avoid redundancy. You shouldn\'t use KIND twice or more.)

Recently, one of singers joined that program newly, and because of its reputation, the guy had to take a test to be a member of that program.
>> Recently, a singer joined that program, and because of its reputation, that guy had to take a test to be a member of the show. (C6 I think there is no need to use newly since you already have RECENTLY in your sentence. C7 When you use ONE OF THE GROUP PATTERN, you are giving a specific idea, so it is better to write A SINGER, since you are indicating a general thought. C8 You used PROGRAM in your sentence twice. That is not good. Therefore, you must know the synonyms for that word.)

>> OR: Recently, a singer joined that program, and because of its popularity, that guy had to take a test to be a member of the show.

Through a strict selection, the guy finally got recognition as a new member.
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The tile of a member of that program is an honor to him.
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Viewers are also willing to admit him to be a new member.
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Well, today, they will certainly give us a big fun.
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I really want to recommend that to you, but it is a shame that you will be unable to enjoy the big fun in English version.
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Anyway, have a wonderful holiday! ^^
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See you next Tuesday!

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>> OR: See you on Tuesday!

>> OR: See you this coming Tuesday!