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Dear my Student [이름],

Happy Wednesday again! ^.^

Now, let\'s talk about my Sunday. Hahaha! ^^

It was a very busy day.

We prepared a lot for my younger sister\'s daughter\'s birthday party.

Even though it was celebrated at Jollibee, we made an effort to make it more special by decorating the place with the staff of the saif fastfood chain.

The party started at 3 o\'clock PM, and it ended at almost 6 o\'clock PM.

I could see the happiness of my niece that time.

I was so glad for her.

All the attendees of the event enjoyed the party.

We all participated in the games.

However, I never won that time, but it\'s okay since I enjoyed a lot, especially during the eating time. Hahaha! ^^

By the way, I really waited for the update of your Skype profile picture.

Don\'t worry.

I am okay with it even though it was not changed.

I am still happy for you, because you had a wonderful holiday.

Anyway, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below.

See you! ^^

Happy reading and sleep tight! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good day!
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Today is Sunday, but, somehow, I feel like it is Friday.
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I still have 2 days off to rest, so I feel a little free.
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>> OR: I still have 2 days off to rest, so I feel freedom a little.

Now, I am preparing for my holiday busily.
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I am planning to go fishing with my boyfriend in the sea tomorrow early morning.
>> I am planning to go fishing with my boyfriend in the sea early tomorrow morning. (C1 EARLY TOMORROW MORNING is wrong. Look at the patterns I included in my recommended sentences.)

>> OR: I am planning to go fishing with my boyfriend in the sea tomorrow early in the morning.

We will leave for the sea tomorrow at 05:00 AM.
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>> OR: We will leave for the sea tomorrow at 5 o\'clock AM.

Maybe, it will take about 2 hours to get there.
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The sea is located on the west side of our country, and it has tides.
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From what I gather, at this time of the year, a flood tide will be in the early morning.
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>> BETTER: From what I gather, at this time of the year, a high tide will be early in the morning.

We should be on time for a flood tide, so that we can fish to the fullest.
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>> OR: We should be on time for a high tide, so that we can fish to the fullest.

After fishing, we can also dig out clams at mud flats when it is time for an ebb tide.
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As I heard, the weather will be so nice tomorrow, and the temperature will be high.
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To prevent the strong sun from making my skin tanned, I should wear long clothes and sunglasses.
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Of course, a sun block and hat are also indispensable necessities.
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We will go there just for one night two days, but there are many things to take.
>> We will go there just for one night and two days, but there are many things to take. (C2 There should be AND in the middle of ONE NIGHT and TWO days.)

>> OR: We will go there just for one night and two days, but there are many things to consider.

The weather in the sea will be very changeable, so I need to take thick clothes even if the mid day temperature will be higher than 30 degrees Celsius.
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Anyway, if I catch a big fish by a fishing rod, I will show you that through my SKYPE profile picture.
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That\'s all for now!
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Happy holiday and see you next week. ^^

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