Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, A fabulous Thursday to you! The days of this week seem to move so fast due to my last days off. I totally relieved my physical fatigue of the travel. This time, I felt again that I should play more before it is too late. Indeed, I seemed to have less strength than before. Just the thought of it makes me sad. ㅠㅠ I think I need to work out more to build my physical strength. ^^ Anyway, I made some sentences below in relation to our last pattern 'be based on.' Please help me check these below if there is something wrong. 1. My saving is based on my salary. 2. This movie is based on a famous cartoon. 3. The annual report from government should be based on facts. 4. I can't trust the result of survey that is based on the internet. 5. His success was based on his sweat. 6. Our company's profit is based on a sales volume. 7. The benefit of the welfare of children is based on the number of babies. 8. The discrimination which is based on gender and age should be abolished immediately. 9. This painting which was drawn by Picasso was based on a real person. 10. My feeling is based on mutual relationship between me and my customers from day to day. See you soon! ^^

Dear my Student [이름],   A fabulous Thursday to you, too! ^.^   It\'s a pride to check your composition today. You committed really few mistakes. That\'s great! ^^ Very Good! ^^,   By the way, I am happy that your physical condition now is okay. It is natural to have fatigue from traveling. All you need to do is to have some rest after that trip. I am happy that you can evaluate yourself. You know what your body needs. Just do the things that are good for you. Make yourself happy, and don\'t forget to stay healthier than ever.   Anyway, about the sentences you want me to help you with, they are already checked. Almost all of them are correct. Thank you for making me see them! ^^ I learned a lot! ^^,   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you very soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: Happy reading! ^.^     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! A fabulous Thursday to you! >> CORRECT! The days of this week seem to move so fast due to my last days off. >> CORRECT! I totally relieved my physical fatigue of the travel. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I totally relieved my physical fatigue from the travel I had recently. This time, I felt again that I should play more before it is too late. >> CORRECT! Indeed, I seemed to have less strength than before. >> CORRECT! Just the thought of it makes me sad. ㅠㅠ >> CORRECT! I think I need to work out more to build my physical strength. ^^>> CORRECT! Anyway, I made some sentences below in relation to our last pattern \'be based on.\'>> CORRECT! Please help me check these below if there is something wrong. >> CORRECT! 1. My saving is based on my salary. >> CORRECT! 2. This movie is based on a famous cartoon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: This movie is based on a famous animation. 3. The annual report from government should be based on facts. >> The annual report from the government should be based on facts. (C1 THE GOVERNMENT is the same as YOUR GOVERNMENT IN YOUR COUNTRY.) >> OR: The annual report from a government should be based on facts. (A GOVERNMENT is ANY OF THE GOVERNMENT IN THE WORLD.) 4. I can\'t trust the result of survey that is based on the internet. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I can\'t trust the result of the survey that is based over the internet. 5. His success was based on his sweat. >> CORRECT! 6. Our company\'s profit is based on a sales volume. >> CORRECT! 7. The benefit of the welfare of children is based on the number of babies. >> CORRECT! 8. The discrimination which is based on gender and age should be abolished immediately.>> CORRECT! 9. This painting which was drawn by Picasso was based on a real person. >> CORRECT! 10. My feeling is based on mutual relationship between me and my customers from day to day. >> My feeling is based on a mutual relationship between me and my customers from day to day. (C2 There should be A before MUTUAL.)See you soon! ^^ >> CORRECT!