Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

A fantastic Friday to us and to the people we love! ^.^

I think it is my second time to hear about your problem of shipping with LG.

I am afraid that you still have problem with that.

I hope to hear more updates about that.

I am excited to hear some good news in relation to that.

By the way, I have some plans for the coming weekend.

Tomorrow, my co-workers and I will go to a resort for our team building.

I am so excited now.

Frankly speaking, I couldn\'t sleep well last night because of the thought of having some time with them.

I am really so high as a kite.

Hahaha! ^^

On the same day, my younger brother\'s daughter will celebrate her christening and first birthday.

Therefore, as soon as our company\'s team building ends, I will attend that event.

On Sunday, I will meet a Korean friend.

Hahaha! ^^

Anyway, I know that you will find a lot of things for you to enjoy your weekend.

Let\'s have fun like we just don\'t care! ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^

Have a terrific weekend! ^^,

See you after two days! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Happy Friday!
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Today, I am not that busy, but I am just informed from LG that our new good that was shipped to LG two weeks ago had some problems.
>> Today, I am not that busy, but I am just informed by LG that our new goods that was shipped to them two weeks ago has some problems. (C1 GOOD should be with S if your are talking about a product or products. C2 PATTERN: be-verb + informed by someone C3 Avoid redundancy.)

>> OR: Today, I am not that busy, but I just got some information from LG that our new goods that was shipped to them two weeks ago has some problems.

Because of this situation, our office\'s atmosphere became dark, and this bad news spoilt my feeling.
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>> OR: Because of this situation, our office\'s atmosphere became dark, and this bad news spoiled my feeling.

Now, our boss is busily talking to our Chinese coworkers about this issue on the phone, and I also have to translate an improvement report.
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This is our first time to ship the new good to LG, so we really can\'t avoid this kind of problem.
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We can\'t breathe easy until this problem gets solved.
>> We can\'t breathe easily until this problem gets solved. (C4 PATTERN: action verb + adverb / be-verb + adjective)

Well, that is life, and don\'t worry about me.
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Maybe, as soon as I leave from work, I won\'t think of it any longer.
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>> OR: Maybe, as soon as I leave from work, I won\'t think of it anymore.

That is a kind of professional mind! Hahaha!
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>> OR: That is being professional!

By the way, do you have a special plan on this coming weekend?
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I think your daily pattern is always special because of your family, so I don\'t have to worry about how you will spend your spare time meaningfully.

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In my case, I don\'t know what to do on this weekend.
>> In my case, I don\'t know what to do on the weekend. (C5 ON THIS WEEKEND is wrong. PATTERN: on the weekend or this weekend)

>> OR: In my case, I don\'t know what to do this coming weekend.)

I think I am somehow a very boring person. ^^;;
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There is a saying here in Korea that person who have eaten meats are good at eating meats.
>> There is a saying here in Korea that a person who has eaten meet is good at eating meat. (C6 You forgot to put A before PERSON. C7 Since you used person ARE should be IS.)

>> OR:  There is a saying here in Korea that persons who have eaten meet are good at eating meat.

It means \'how important experience is.\'
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Just like what you said, we should take up a challenge in order to enjoy our lives much more.
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Anyway, thank you for reading my grumble until now, and see you very soon! ^^

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