Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

A marvelous Monday to you, too! ^.^

I think you also like the word MARVELOUS. Hahaha! ^^

By the way, you are right that I really had a busy and pleasant weekend.

I enjoyed my time with my co-workers a lot, but, because of this activity, I couldn\'t attend my younger brother\'s daughter\'s birthday and christening celebration.

Fortunately, my parents brought my brother\'s baby to our home, so I had some precious time with her.

It was a little short though.

Okay, I will inform you about my Saturday in detail for you to understand what I mean more.

At 6:30 AM, I needed to leave home to meet three of my co-workers, because we needed to buy some foods for our team building.

We stayed in the public market until 8:00 AM.

We were fetched at the same place at 8:30 AM.

We went to the meeting place and waited for other Power English employees until 9:00 AM.

We arrived at the resort which is called \"Riverview Resort\" at around 11 AM.

We stayed there until 4:00 PM.

When I got home, it was already almost 7 PM.

My brother\'s baby\'s party ended at 3:30 PM.

It was really a shame that I couldn\'t attend that event, but I was so happy to see her jumping and shouting when she saw me. Hahaha! ^^

I just held her until she fell asleep, and that was already 7:30 PM.

I needed to prepare to go out, because of another appointment.

I took a shower, changed my clothes and left home at 8:00 PM.

Anyway, I hope you can meet your friends again and have a longer time with each other. ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A marvelous Monday to you!
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I enjoyed reading your holiday plans, and you must have been busy and pleasant on last weekend.
>> I enjoyed reading your holiday plans, and you must have been busy and pleasant last weekend. (C1 It is not good to use two or more prepositions consecutively in a sentence. PATTERN: last weekend or on the weekend.)

>> OR: I enjoyed reading your holiday plans, and you must have been busy and pleasant on your weekend.

By the way, you said that you would go to a resort for your team building on last Saturday.
>> By the way, you said that you would go to a resort for your team building last Saturday. (C2 See C1.)

Is it a regular activity in Power English?
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>> OR: Is it a regular event in Power English?

I think you had a great fun with your co-workers at that time.
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I could totally feel your thrill against your activity from your reply.
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How did it go with your niece\'s birthday party?
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Here in Korea, we also celebrate the first birthday of baby, and it is considered as an important event.
>> Here in Korea, we also celebrate the first birthdays of babies, and it is considered as an important event. (C3 When you give a general information, be clear with the forms of the important words like BIRTHDAY and BABY. You can make them both in singular or plural. However, when you stick with their singular form, don\'t forget to use articles when needed.)

>> OR: Here in Korea, we also celebrate the first birthday of a baby, and it is considered as an important event.

I am also happy for that party and congratulations on you and your younger brother.
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In my case, I met some of my female friends from Busan, and they came here to attend one of their friends\' wedding.
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We only had a short time to talk because of their train time.
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>> OR: We only had a short time to talk because of their tight train schedule.

I was so regretful that we didn\'t have a talk for a long time.
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>> OR: I was so regretful for not having a long discussion with them.

Apart from that, nothing special happened to me. ^^;;
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That\'s all for now!
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See you very soon.
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>> OR: See you very soon!

*Essay

These days, a lot of people prefer to have fast foods such as hamburger, pizza, chicken and spaghetti.
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Due to this kind of phenomenon, our health is being threatened.
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>> OR: Due to this kind of phenomenon, our health is on danger.

>> OR: Due to this kind of phenomenon, our health is at stake due to our own wrong doings.

As I know, those foods are already considered as junk foods in the west
>> As I know, those foods are already considered as junk foods in the west. (C4 You forgot to use a dot at the end of your sentence.)

In comparison to our traditional foods, fast foods are so fatty and greasy, and these have high calories, so these make us unhealthy.
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It is an alarming issue for us now, so we should protect ourselves from a food counterattack.
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There is a saying here in Korea that bitter taste foods may have blessed effects.
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The old sayings are all true.
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We should try not to have many junk foods to be healthier in our daily lives.

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