Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

A winsome Wednesday to you and your boyfriend! ^.^ Hahaha! ^^

I am so happy to read your composition.

Thank you for sharing the things that you saw on that program! ^^,

I got some information from your writing.

Therefore, next time I go to the public market, I will not be surprised of the things that I will see there.

Just like what I told you during our class, I don\'t usually go to the market.

By the way, I think everything you saw on TV that time is true.

Anyway, I think you had more fun in watching the show because of your funny boyfriend.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you tomorrow in our class! ^^,

Happy reading! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good day!
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I want to tell you what I watched on TV yesterday.
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I usually like watching EBS channel, and it gives us programs in relation to education. 
>> I usually like watching EBS Channel, and it gives us programs in relation to education. (C1 The C in CHANNEL should be in capital letter since it is a part of a program\'s name.)

>> OR: I usually watch EBS Channel, and it gives us programs regarding education.

Every day, I watch a program named \'World Theme Travel\' from that channel, and this program usually shows each country\'s culture.
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Yesterday, I also watched that program, and unexpectedly, it showed Baguio\'s culture where you live now.
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It introduced your city as \'Capital of Summer.\'
>> It introduced your city as \'The Summer Capital of the Philippines.\' (C2 I just made it complete.)

At that time, I was really happy to see this city on TV, and I was thinking of you while I was watching it.
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The most impressive thing was about strawberry farms.
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As I heard from that, that place is very suitable to plant strawberries due to fertile soil even if there is a tropical region.
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In addition, I saw several traditional foods in Baguio public market, but I didn\'t remember the names of those.
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>> OR: In addition, I saw several traditional foods in Baguio public market, but I couldn\'t remember the names of those.

One of foods was made by a fish and a tomato.
>> One of the foods was made of fish and tomatoes. (C3 PATTERN: made by + person and made of + material)

The tomato was inside the fish, and then those needed to be grilled.
>> C4 IT IS BETTER TO SAY: The sliced tomatoes were inside the fish, and then those were needed to be grilled.

I couldn\'t imagine what its taste was.
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The second place where was impressive was Vigan City.
>> C5 I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: The second most impressive place was Vigan City.

>> OR: The second place which impressed me also was Vigan City.

From what I heard, this place was listed as World Heritage by UNESCO.
>> C6 TO COMPLETE YOUR SENTENCE: From what I heard, this place was listed as one of the World Heritage Sites by UNESCO.

It is called a small Europe in the Philippines, and Spanish architecture styles are well preserved in that city.
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The place was so magnificent that I was fascinated by the view.
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I watched it with my boyfriend, and he wanted me to concentrate on watching it whether Paula is on TV or not.
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>> OR: I watched it with my boyfriend, and he wanted me to concentrate on watching it whether you are on TV or not.

And then, whenever pretty women were on TV, he kept on saying that isn\'t she Paula???? Hahaha!
>> And then, whenever pretty women were on TV, he kept on saying that, \"Isn\'t she Paula????\" Hahaha! (C7 If you are including an direct speech in your sentence, don\'t forget to put open and close quotation marks where the dialogue was written.)

If I didn\'t study with you, I would not enjoy this program so much like yesterday.
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You made my day and thank you! ^^
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My composition is so long, I just have to stop making! ^^;
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See you very soon!

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