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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Friday! It was a shame that we had a bad internet connection in our last class. However, you considered this problem and extended one more minute for me, so I want to say thank you. ^^ By the way, I want to explain Hyundai to you more. If you say Hyundai, it means Hyundai Groups. They have a lot of groups, such as car, card, insurance, department store, capital, construction, and so on. Therefore, if we want to say about an automobile company of Hyundai, you should name it Hyundai Cars or Hyundai Motors. I hope my explanation will help with your understanding about our Hyundai. Anyway, thanks for your concern and see you very soon! ^^ *Essay In my opinion, rich counties really should help poor countries in various fields. First of all, they have a duty to help them in foods field. Many countries in Africa, because of their poor surroundings, they are suffering from a shortage of food. However, ironically, other rich countries are suffering from excessive food wastes. It is really unfair, and it shouldn't happen any further. Secondly, rich countries should engage in medical support in poor countries. Many poor people are dying of various diseases that can even be easily healed by modern medical technology just because of being poor. We are living in a global village, and it means that all human beings are one family. That's why we should focus on taking care of other poor centuries' hardship before it is too late.

Dear my Student [이름],   A fabulous Friday to you! ^.^ There\'s no need for you to thank me for extending our class yesterday. It is my job to do it. ^^   By the way, thank you for further explaining what Hyundai Groups is. Now, I have wider knowledge about that company. Hahaha! ^^   Anyway, I agree with what you have written in your homework. Rich countries should help poor countries in many ways, and one of them is about food. However, I think it would be better for rich countries to help the poor by giving them livelihood. What do you think?   That\'s all for today! ^^ Have a happy time reading my comment! ^^, Enjoy an extravagant weekend! ^^. See you on Monday! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Friday! >> CORRECT! It was a shame that we had a bad internet connection in our last class. >> CORRECT! However, you considered this problem and extended one more minute for me, so I want to say thank you. ^^>> CORRECT! By the way, I want to explain Hyundai to you more.>> CORRECT! If you say Hyundai, it means Hyundai Groups.>> CORRECT! They have a lot of groups, such as car, card, insurance, department store, capital, construction, and so on. >> CORRECT! Therefore, if we want to say about an automobile company of Hyundai, you should name it Hyundai Cars or Hyundai Motors. >> CORRECT! I hope my explanation will help with your understanding about our Hyundai. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: I hope my explanation will help with your understanding about Hyundai. Anyway, thanks for your concern and see you very soon! ^^ >> CORRECT!   *Essay In my opinion, rich counties really should help poor countries in various fields. >> CORRECT! First of all, they have a duty to help them in foods field. >> CORRECT! >> OR: First of all, thet have a duty to help them in terms of foods. Many countries in Africa, because of their poor surroundings, they are suffering from a shortage of food. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Many countries in Africa, because of their poor surroundings, they are suffering from food shortage. >> OR: Many countries in Africa, because of their poor surroundings, they are suffering from famine. However, ironically, other rich countries are suffering from excessive food wastes. >> CORRECT! It is really unfair, and it shouldn\'t happen any further. >> CORRECT! Secondly, rich countries should engage in medical support in poor countries. >> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: Secondly, rich countries should engage in medical support to poor countries. >> OR: Secondly, rich countries should engage in medical support for poor countries. Many poor people are dying of various diseases that can even be easily healed by modern medical technology just because of being poor. >> CORRECT! We are living in a global village, and it means that all human beings are one family. >> CORRECT! That\'s why we should focus on taking care of other poor centuries\' hardship before it is too late. >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: That\'s why we should focus on understanding other poor countries\' hardships and helping them resolve those before it is too late.