Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

A marvelous Monday to you! ^.^

I had a wonderful weekend.

However, I didn\'t do a lot on those days.

I am still glad, because I met one of my friends after more than a month of not seeing each other.

Because of that meeting, we might see each other every Saturday for exercise.

I want to be fit.

I want to look good for myself. Hahaha! ^^

By the way, I am glad that nothing happened during the wedding. Hahaha! ^^.

After having your lunch, did you go to Dimulmeori just with your boyfriend?

I was wondering that maybe you and your boyfriend was with other colleagues that time.

Anyway, I am happy that you had a great weekend.

Don\'t forget to exercise. Hahaha! ^^,

That\'s all for my reply. ^^

See you soon! ^^,

Happy reading! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good day!
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Did you have a wonderful weekend?
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In my case, as I already told you before, I attended a wedding last Saturday.
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The place where the wedding was held was 2 hours away from my place, but because of traffic jams on the road, it took 3 hours to get there.
>> The place where the wedding was held is 2 hours away from my place, but because of the traffic jams on the road, it took 3 hours to get there. (C1 WAS 2 HOURS AWAY FROM MY PLACE is a fact. It is not a past fact, so WAS should be IS.)

>> BETTER: The place where the wedding was held is 2 hours away from my place, but because of the traffic jams on the road, it took us 3 hours to get there.

The wedding was going to be held at 12:00 pm, but we got there at 13:00 pm.
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By the time we got there, the wedding had been already finished.
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Luckily, the bride and groom were being taken pictures, so we could exchange greetings at a wedding hall.
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After greetings, we had a buffet lunch.
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I was extremely famished, because I didn\'t have breakfast, so I had a lot of foods.
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After lunch, we decided to stop at a tourist attraction called \'Dumulmeori\' in Yangpyung.
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>> OR: After lunch, we decided to stop at a tourist destination called \'Dumulmeori\' in Yangpyung.

This place is famous for a lovely view, so it is used to take advertisements, dramas and movies.
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>> OR: This place is famous for its lovely view, so it is used to take advertisements, dramas and movies.

>> OR: This place is famous for its lovely view, so a lot of advertisements, dramas and movies are taken here.

Generally, that place is so crowded with many people, that there is no place to put my feet.
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However, because of a spread of MERS, there were not many people seeing a view.
>> However, because of the spread of MERS, there were not many people seeing the view. (C2 It should be THE SPREAD OF MERS, since most people around the world know this information. C3 A VIEW should be THE VIEW, since it is your second time to use this word.)

>> OR: However, because of the spread of MERS, there weren\'t many people seeing the view.

We somehow took advantage of this disease at that time. ^^;;
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It was very nice that we could enjoy a beautiful view and relax at a bench.
>> It was very nice that we could enjoy the beautiful view and relax at a bench. (C4 See C4.)

When we were on our way home, there was a traffic jam, so we got home at 06:00 pm.
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As our dinner, we ate grilled beef brisket with shrimp.
>> As our dinner, we ate Grilled Beef Brisket with Shrimp. (C5 Names of dishes should be capitalized.)

Both of us ate so many foods on that day, we could not breathe without opening zipper.
>> Both of us ate so many foods on that day, and we could not breathe without opening our zippers. (C6 You forgot to put AND after the comma in your sentence.)

>> OR: Both of us ate so many foods on that day. We could not breathe without opening our zippers.

>> OR: Both of us ate so many foods on that day; we could not breathe without opening our zippers.

I even skipped doing my exercise because of my big tummy. Hahaha!
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That\'s all for my story last weekend. ^^
>> That\'s all for my story about last weekend. (C7 You should write ABOUT before LAST WEEKEND.)

See you very soon!

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