Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, A good day to you! I want to tell you something about our boss. When I got in my office today, I suddenly found that our water purifier didn't work. I was wondering about why that machine didn't work, and I finally found the reason. Our boss was the last one who left from work yesterday, and he unplugged it when he got off work. Maybe, he would consider electric charges. However, somehow, I think he seems a bit of a skinflint. Every time I get to my work, because of the hot weather, I want to drink some cool water, but now, I can't quench my thirst instantly. Wait! If you were under this situation, how would you deal with that? I have already made a decision to ask him not to unplug it, but I am not sure if I can persuade him. Hahaha! By the way, I saw some pictures about your membership training in Power English on the web. However, I can't tell who you are, because those pictures are a little bit small. Just like what you said before, you and other teachers seemed to enjoy the team building to the fullest. Well, somehow, I think that it would be much better if there were some male teachers with you. Hahaha! ^^;; I suddenly wonder about why Power English doesn't employ male teachers. I think Power English might consider teachers' pronunciation. ^^ That's all for now, and please help me to check if I use proper idioms against the sentences below. See you very soon! ^^ 1. Most people in my country listen to pop music, but I don't. I take the road less traveled. 2. When I was a child I had to learn the alphabet by heart. 3. While I cook I also like to listen to music. I kill two birds with one stone. 4. On the same day that my dog died I broke my legs. When it rains, it pours. 5. She often makes mistakes with her boyfriend, but her heart's in the right place, so he loves her anyway.

Dear my Student [이름],   A wonderful Wednesday to you! ^.^   To start, I would like to apologize for my absence yesterday. I just had to solve an urgent family matter. I am so sorry about that.   By the way, I think you are right that your boss is a skinflint. I would also be like that if I were him. He is a businessman, and he wants more money to come than go. About your question, if I were in your situation, I would just understand my boss and be more patient about him and the weather. When you notice that your water purifier is not working again, because it was turned off, you just need to turn it on and patiently wait for the water to get cool. In addition, while waiting for the cold water, you can get some water for you to drink to somehow satisfy your thirst. That is how I will deal with that kind of circumstance.   Anyhow, about our pictures when we had our team building, I think you are right. I am sorry about that. I also feel like our images in our pictures are too small for us to notice where we are in the photos. I think the remedy for that is for us to use a magnifying glass. Hahaha! ^^ I am just kidding. ^^,   Anyway, I would like to say VERY GOOD! ^^ You made your homework perfectly. I think there are no questions about the idioms, right? If there are, just be free to ask, so that we can avoid any confusion.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Don\'t forget to enjoy your time while reading my comment and checking the corrections I made for your writing improvement. See you very soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!A good day to you! >> CORRECT! I want to tell you something about our boss. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I want to tell you something about my boss. When I got in my office today, I suddenly found that our water purifier didn\'t work. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: When I got in my office today, I suddenly found that our water purifier wasn\'t working. I was wondering about why that machine didn\'t work, and I finally found the reason.>> CORRECT! Our boss was the last one who left from work yesterday, and he unplugged it when he got off work. >> CORRECT! Maybe, he would consider electric charges. >> CORRECT! >> OR: He might have considered electric charges. However, somehow, I think he seems a bit of a skinflint. >> CORRECT! Every time I get to my work, because of the hot weather, I want to drink some cool water, but now, I can\'t quench my thirst instantly. >> CORRECT! Wait! If you were under this situation, how would you deal with that? >> CORRECT! I have already made a decision to ask him not to unplug it, but I am not sure if I can persuade him. Hahaha! >> CORRECT! By the way, I saw some pictures about your membership training in Power English on the web. >> CORRECT! However, I can\'t tell who you are, because those pictures are a little bit small. >> CORRECT! Just like what you said before, you and other teachers seemed to enjoy the team building to the fullest. >> CORRECT! Well, somehow, I think that it would be much better if there were some male teachers with you. Hahaha! ^^;;>> CORRECT! I suddenly wonder about why Power English doesn\'t employ male teachers. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I suddenly wonder why Power English doesn\'t have male teachers. I think Power English might consider teachers\' pronunciation. ^^>> CORRECT! That\'s all for now, and please help me to check if I use proper idioms against the sentences below. >> CORRECT! See you very soon! ^^ >> CORRECT!1. Most people in my country listen to pop music, but I don\'t. I take the road less traveled. >> CORRECT! 2. When I was a child I had to learn the alphabet by heart.>> CORRECT! 3. While I cook I also like to listen to music. I kill two birds with one stone.>> CORRECT! 4. On the same day that my dog died I broke my legs. When it rains, it pours.>> CORRECT! 5. She often makes mistakes with her boyfriend, but her heart\'s in the right place, so he loves her anyway. >> CORRECT!