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Dear my Student [이름],

A wondrous Wednesday! ^.^

Hahaha! ^^

This is the second time I will greet you today through writing.

I hope you are not fed up of me.

Hahaha! ^^,

By the way, I am so happy because of your positive feedback toward my absence.

I know you always understand me, but I am really sorry for not having a class with you yesterday.

However, my absence was a blessing in disguise for the both of us.

It gave you more time for yourself.

I am so thankful that you use our time for exercise and a wonderful dinner with your boyfriend.

It gave me time to know things about my family.

Hahaha! ^^,

Anyway, thank you for the update about MERS.

I\'m just worried about the pregnant woman who is suspected to have the virus.

I hope her condition is not serious.

Suddenly, I pity the baby in her womb.

When the mother is afraid, the baby can surely feel it.

I hope everything will be fine soon. ^^

That\'s all for today! ^^,

Always take care! ^^.

Be safe! ^.^

See you tomorrow! ^,^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good day!
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I am curious about what happened to you yesterday. ^^
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Meanwhile, you don\'t need to say sorry in this case.
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I am totally okay for your absence.
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You must have had an unavoidable situation yesterday.
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By the way, I didn\'t take a substitution class due to my busyness.
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I was very busy to book a vessel towards India, and there were some problems to solve.
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>> OR: I was very busy to book a vessel toward India, and there were some problems to solve. (TOWARDS is usually use in British English. While TOWARD is in American English.)

After solving those problems, my quitting time also passed about 10 minutes.
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I had guessed this situation would happen, so I asked Power English to cancel my class.
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Somehow, I took advantage of your absence and maximized my spare time.
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As soon as I got home, I started exercising and did it until my boyfriend came back.
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After having some simple dinner with him, I watched daily news, and he took extra Telephone English classes for 40 minutes.
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To grasp the situation of MERS much more, I specially watched JTBC news by my computer.

>> To grasp the situation of MERS much more, I specially watched JTBC News by my computer. (C1 The N in JTBC NEWS should be capitalized.)

>> OR: To grasp the situation of MERS much more, I specially watched JTBC News on computer.

JTBC is one of TV channels, and it always gives fair and exact information to the public.
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>> OR: JTBC is one of the TV channels in Korea, and it always gives exacy information to the public.

That is not our state television, so I only can watch that on the website.
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The situation of MERS is still serious.
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In addition, one of pregnant women also has a symptom of that.
>> In addition, one pregnant woman also has a symptom of that. (C2 It is better to make ONE OF PREGNANT WOMEN to ONE PREGNANT WOMAN to make the sense of the sentence general.)

As we already know, pregnant woman is not allowed to use medicines, so all Koreans are worried about her condition.
>> As we already know, a pregnant woman is not allowed to use medicines, so all Koreans are worried about her condition. (C3 There should be A before PREGNANT.)

I really hope her symptom is not related with MERS.
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Anyway, see you in our today\'s class.

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