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Dear my Student [이름],

A thrilling Thursday to you! ^.^

Good day! ^^

I think you enjoyed reading my comments about your compositions.

Because of that, I am happy. ^^

Anyway, about your boss, you just need to understand him more.

It is better for you to extend your patience.

By the way, I can\'t believe that you felt shy talking with me yesterday when your boyfriend arrived at your place.

If I were you, I wouldn\'t have that kind of feeling.

However, I totally understand you about that.

In my case, I feel nervous and shy when I\'m talking with someone, and suddenly, my parents appear.

Hahaha! ^^

I think I should get that under control.

Anyhow, I feel sorry for those people who get their living from farming.

If your government doesn\'t do anything about that, what you fear to happen will take place.

Let\'s just hope for that thing not to happen.

Well, now, let\'s talk about your homework. ^^

I thought you were worried about your learning task, but I was wrong.

You were just too humble to say that it was a piece of cake.

Hahaha! ^^,

You done it perfectly.

That\'s awesome! ^^,

Very good! ^^.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good afternoon!
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I read your commend against my last two compositions, and I found your good suggestion about my boss\'s behavior.
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I agree with your opinion, and it looks like a simple remedy for me.
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Somehow, I seemed to think of his behavior negatively. ^^;;
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By the way, I felt that if I am with someone when I am talking with you, somehow, I seem to become nervous.
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Yesterday, while you and I were talking, my boyfriend got in my place, from that time, I started to mind him.
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I know I shouldn\'t do that, but I was a little shy to speak in English in front of him.
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Feeling shy is one of my weaknesses in speaking English, and that is a thing that I should perfectly overcome.
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I still have a long way to go. ^^
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Changing the subject, these days, here in Korea, a drought is a big problem for farms.
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Our some main rivers are getting drier, and it caused to make crops wither.
>> Some main rivers are getting drier, and it caused crops to wither. (C1 I think you over used other words in your sentence.)

>> OR: Some of our main rivers are getting drier, and it makes crops to wither.

Indeed, recently, I haven\'t seen the rain falling.
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>> OR: Indeed, recently, it haven\'t rained.

>> OR: Indeed, recently, the rain hasn\'t fallen.

If this situation lasts longer, this year\'s farming will fail.
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At this time of the year, it is time to begin a rainy season here.
>> C2 IT IS BETTER TO SAY: At this time of the year, rainy season should be starting.

However, what I heard from news that this rainy season will start later than usual.
>> However, what I heard from the news is that rainy season will start later than usual. (C3 There should be THE before NEWS. C4 There should be IS before THAT.)

I really hope the drought in the heat will disappear very soon.
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>> OR: I really hope the drought cased by the heat will disappear very soon.

Anyway, today\'s homework is a little bit hard. ^^
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Please help me check those.
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>> BETTER: Please help me check my answers.

1. You have to raise your voice a little when talking to him. He\'s a little HARD OF HEARING.
(c) deaf
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2. I went to a real nice restaurant yesterday. The food cost was cheap and they served a lot of food. I had to ask for a DOGGY BAG because I couldn\'t eat the whole thing.
(a) package to store left over food so the person can take it home
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3. Fabian was a DOORMAT. No wonder his classmates were always giving him a hard time.
(c) coward
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4. I invited a friend to go to a street market by my house where they served some real good Japanese food. My friend\'s mom wanted to pay for her daughter\'s meal, but I insisted on paying for both our meals myself, her mom finally said: Ok, as long as we GO DUTCH next time.
(d) we divide the costs
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5. So, is everything PLAIN AS A PIKESTAFF? Oh, yes indeed sir!
(b) clear
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6. We are having a POT-LUCK DINNER at Tim\'s house tomorrow. Everybody is invited!
(a) dinner where everybody brings something to eat
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7. I need everybody\'s help. The wedding is tomorrow and we haven\'t even started with the decorations yet. We have NO TIME TO LOSE.
(d) to start right now
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8. Just KEEP YOUR WIG ON. Everything is going to be alright, okay?
(c) calm down
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9. Kyle was SAVED BY THE BELL when his sister walked in and asked him to take her to ballet practice.
(a) rescued from an unwanted situation
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10. I would stay away from that guy if I were you, he HAS A SCREW LOOSE.
(d) is crazy

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