Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

A fruitful Friday to both of us! ^.^

T.G.I.F.~~~! ^.~

I am glad to hear that it already rained last night.

You are right.

The rain somehow solved some problems caused by the drought that you are experiencing now in your country.

Well, more rain will go to Korea.

God is good.

He will make everything fine. ^^

By the way, thank you for giving me more information about your high school life.

However, I didn\'t feel good about it.

I strongly believe that your educational system is too tough for students.

Anyway, your homework is almost perfect.

9 out of 10 is a great standing.

Hahaha! ^^

Very good! ^^,

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading and checking! ^^,

See you on Monday! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

P.S.: I forgot to tell you that today is Philippine Independence Day. ^.^

Dear my Teacher Paula,

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Good morning and happy Friday!
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Finally, the rain fell last night, and it helped to solve a problem of drought a little.
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The rain drops were hitting on my windows, and it sounded great.
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I was so glad to see the rain falling.
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However, the precipitation was not that high, so we still have to be waiting for the rain falling again.
>> However, the precipitation was not that high, so we still have to wait for the rain falling again. (C1 It is better to use the pattern \'have to + base-verb.)

>> OR: However, the precipitation was not that high, so we still have to wait for the rain to fall again.

From the weather forecast, it will be a rainy day tomorrow night, but the amount of rain is likely to be small.
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I am not a person of loving the rain falling, but if I consider the surrounding situation, I am willing to pray for the heavy rain. ^^
>> I am not a person who loves the rain falling, but if I consider the surrounding situation, I am willing to pray for the heavy rain to fall. (C2 It is better to use WHO in your sentence. In addition, I think the third clause in your sentence is not complete, so I added TO FALL.)

>> OR: I am not a person who loves the rain falling, but if I consider the surrounding situation, I am willing to pray for the heavy rain to come.

By the way, we didn\'t talk more about our high school lives in our last class due to our time limit.
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>> OR: By the way, we didn\'t talk more about our high school lives in our last class due to our llimited time.

I already knew about your high school life, but I didn\'t fully introduce my school life to you and I felt sorry for this.
>> I already knew about your high school life, but I didn\'t fully introduce my school life to you, and I felt sorry for this. (C3 You forgot to put a COMMA before AND.)

Freakily speaking, I don\'t have special stories about my school life.
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Under our educational system, all students are forced to study and study all day and can\'t be allowed to play as much as they want to.
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In my case, I went to school at 06:00 and went back home at 22:30.
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I had to have three meals at school, and my home was considered only as a place to sleep.
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I even had to go to school on weekends, and when someone was absent from school on weekend without any reasons, our school principal reprimanded her in front of all students in person. (P.S.: I attended girl\'s school.)
>> ... (P.S.: I attended a girls\' school.) (C4 GIRL\'S SCHOOL should be A GIRLS\' SCHOOL.)

In this situation, I couldn\'t break the rules, and I finished my school life in peace. Hahaha!
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I had a boring school life, so I am somehow regretful about that.
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Anyway, that is all for my school life story, and enjoy reading! ^^
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*Homework

1. He\'s UP TO HIS EARS IN work and cannot possibly see you now.
(a) fully occupied with
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2. If you GIVE ME A HAND, then I shall be able to finish more quickly.
(b) help me
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3. I prefer to talk to people FACE TO FACE rather than to talk on the phone.
(a) in person
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4. The manager dismissed the new proposal OUT OF HAND and said that it was not at all practical.
(b) utterly
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5. As she is new to the job I would ask you TO KEEP AN EYE ON her for the time being.
(d) observe
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6. The opposition in parliament accused the government of PLAYING GAMES and refusing to accept the seriousness of the situation.
(a) being light hearted
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7. He accused her of TALKING THROUGH HER HAT and refused to accept a word of what she said.
(c) talking nonsense
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8. The police advised them to go down to the cellar in order to be OUT OF HARM\'S WAY.
(c) into safety
>> (d) away from danger

9. I\'d GIVE MY RIGHT ARM if I could get tickets for that concert.
(a) do absolutely anything
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10. You can always rely on Fred to PUT HIS FOOT IN IT and come out with a remark like that.
(c) say something embarrassing

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