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Dear my Student [이름],

A challenging Monday to us! ^.^

Just like what I told you in our class, I didn\'t go to the gym.

I just went hiking with Teacher Venus who is a teacher also here at Power English.

I know what you are thinking.

You are right.

We are co-workers and friends.

That\'s good, right?

It should be three of us going to the mountains, but one of us had an emergency and needed to cancel appointment with us.

Her name is Teacher Julie.

She is the secretary of Power English.

Her friend passed away because of cancer, so she really needed to prioritize going to her friend\'s wake than coming with us for hiking.

I am a little sad about that.

I am sad because of her friend\'s death.

I am also sad, because we didn\'t go hiking with her last Saturday.

However, Teacher Venus and I completely understands her. ^^

Anyway, let\'s go to the happy parts.

We had our tour in the mountains for four hours.

We met at 8 o\'clock in the morning and started our hike around 9 am.

While we were in the mountains, we took some pictures, but we couldn\'t take some pictures in which we are together, because we didn\'t have a monopod.

We tried to take selfies using my friend\'s camera.

However, my arms looked very big, so we just decided to stop taking selfies.

We just continued walking and climbing.

On our way going down to the mountain, my friend who I should meet for exercise at a gym called.

She told me about the cancellation of our appointment.

Anyhow, our activity ended around 1 pm.

After that, we met another friend.

Her name is Teacher Naomi, and she was a teacher here at Power English.

We had late lunch with her.

We went to a Korean restaurant named \"Urban Seoul.\"

We met Teacher Naomi at 2 pm.

We had Samgyupsal there.

We had our lunch date until 3:30 pm.

After that, we all went to our own homes.

I think I ate a lot, because frankly speaking, I have a stomachache until now.

Hahaha! ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^,

Sorry for the short reply. ^^.

Happy reading and see you tomorrow! ^.^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good day!
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Did you have a wonderful time at a gym last Saturday?
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In my case, I went to the library with my boyfriend.
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After going back home, we made a Braised Spicy Seafood and had a fabulous dinner.
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It was a quarter to nine PM.
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>> OR: I was a quarter to nine in the evening.

Suddenly, my boyfriend searched a movie application on his phone while I was washing dishes.
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>> OR: Suddenly. my boyfriend searched a movie application on his phone while I was washing the dishes.

>> OR: Suddenly. my boyfriend searched a movie application on his phone while I was doing the dishes.

He said that there is a new theater that opened near our home, and it would take 15 minutes to get there on foot.
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Therefore, we left from our home in a hurry so that we could catch the movie time.
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What we saw was \'Mad Max,\' and he had wanted to see that movie a long time ago.
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He finally got his wish, and I also unexpectedly enjoyed that movie.
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We usually don\'t have popcorn at theaters, but the theater provided it to all viewers for free to celebrate their first opening there.
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We were so lucky.
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The move was very stimulating, so it made us lose track of time.
>> The movie was very stimulating, so it made us lose track of time. (C1 Your spelling for MOVIE is wrong.)

If you didn\'t see that movie, I\'d like to recommend it to you.
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>> OR: If you haven\'t seen that movie, I\'d like to recommend it to you.

That\'s all for my story about last weekend and let’s share more about our story in our class.
>> That\'s all for my story about last weekend, and let\'s share more about our story in our class. (Since your sentence is composed of two complete ideas, there should be a COMMA before AND.)

See you very soon! ^^
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*Homework

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>> OR: P.S.: Below are my answers for my homework.

1. This sort of behavior SENDS THE WRONG MESSAGE to young people.

(b) fails to communicate
>> (d) does not send a good example

2. The government IS UNVEILING plans today for a new tax system.

(b) is revealing
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3. I HEAR WHAT YOU ARE SAYING but I don\'t agree with you.

(a) I understand what you mean
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4. You must admire the way SHE TRICKS TO HER GUNS.
(b) she maintains her opinion
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5. I\'m sorry I can\'t follow that, RUN THAT PAST ME AGAIN.

(a) explain that once more
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6. KEEP YOUR SPIRITS UP, it may not be as bad as you think.

(a) Don\'t get depressed
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7. I\'m afraid HE SHOT HIMSELF IN THE FOOT when he took that action.

(c) he made a bad mistake for himself
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8. Some people love SCORING POINTS when they are in an argument.

(c) taking the initiative
>> (b) taking advantage

9. There is absolutely NO MILEAGE in pursuing that sort of discussion.

(a) no future
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10. He prefers TO BUY SOME MORE TIME by not deciding yet.
(d) to delay a little longer

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