Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good day! Regarding my yesterday's composition, what I wanted to say to you was green tea powders. Sorry for confusing you. ^^;; By the way, I just went back from my lunch, I am a little sleepy. We only have one hour time for lunch, so it is impossible to sleep for a while. In my case, if our Chinese coworkers are not working, I also can't do anything for tasks. They usually have two and a half hours of resting time at lunch, so I don't want to give a call and interrupt them resting, even if I have some tasks to ask them. Due to this situation, I can also rest for a while to take advantage of this time, but I can't avoid checking my boss's mood or condition. ^^;; Do you know what the heaviest thing in the world is? That is the eyelids with sleep. Thursday is the most tiring day among one week, so my eyelids are also very heavy now. How do you ward off your sleepiness? Someone says that drinking coffee can help making people awake, but in my case, no matter how many coffees I drink, it doesn't work to me. Well, I've got to go to the bathroom to refresh my mind. ^^ See you very soon!

Dear my Student [이름],   A tremendously beautiful Thursday to you! ^.^   Ohhh~~~! ^^ Thanks for the clarification about that powder thing! ^^, Hahaha! ^^. Now, it is totally clear, and I can sleep well tonight. Hahaha! ^^   By the way, I am glad that you had some rest because of your Chinese co-workers. However, I just wonder a little. Why do you need to care about your boss\'s mood or condition? For you to have some peace of mind, you should avoid thinking about your boss sometimes. ^^   Anyway, we have similar situation about sleepiness. You are right! ^^ Thursday is the most tiring day in a week. In my case, to ward my sleepiness of, I do stretching and eat some chocolate. Do you know M&M\'s chocolate? For me that is the best medium for me to avoid being sleepy. Try it! ^^   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: Why didn\'t you do your homework? Hahaha! ^^     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good day! >> CORRECT! Regarding my yesterday\'s composition, what I wanted to say to you was green tea powders.>> Regarding my yesterday\'s composition, what I wanted to say to you was green tea powder. (C1: POWDER is uncountable, so it is wrong to make it in PLURAL.) Sorry for confusing you. ^^;; >> CORRECT! >> OR: Sorry for the confusion I caused. By the way, I just went back from my lunch, I am a little sleepy. >> CORRECT! We only have one hour time for lunch, so it is impossible to sleep for a while. >> CORRECT! In my case, if our Chinese coworkers are not working, I also can\'t do anything for tasks. >> In my case, if our Chinese coworkers are not working, I also can\'t do anything for my tasks. (C2: to complete your sentence, there should be MY before TASKS. >> OR: In my case, when our Chinese coworkers don\'t work, I also can\'t do anything. >> OR: In my case, when our Chinese co-workers don\'t have work, I also can\'t do my tasks. They usually have two and a half hours of resting time at lunch, so I don\'t want to give a call and interrupt them resting, even if I have some tasks to ask them. >> C3 I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: They usually have two and a half hours of resting time at lunch, so I don\'t want to give a call and interrupt them while they are resting, even if I have some tasks to ask to them. >> They usually have two and a half hours of break at lunch, so I don\'t want to give a call and interrupt their rest, even if I have something important to discuss with them.Due to this situation, I can also rest for a while to take advantage of this time, but I can\'t avoid checking my boss\'s mood or condition. ^^;;>> CORRECT! Do you know what the heaviest thing in the world is? >> CORRECT! That is the eyelids with sleep. >> CORRECT! Thursday is the most tiring day among one week, so my eyelids are also very heavy now. >> Thursday is the most tiring day among the days in a week, so my eyelids are also very heavy now. (C4 Here we can avoud to use DAY twice.) How do you ward off your sleepiness? >> CORRECT! >> OR: How do you ward your sleepiness off? Someone says that drinking coffee can help making people awake, but in my case, no matter how many coffees I drink, it doesn\'t work to me. >> Someone says that drinking coffee can help making people awake, but in my case, no matter how many cups of coffee I drink, it doesn\'t work to me. (C5 COFFEE is uncountable. We can\'t say COFFEES.) >> OR: Someone says that drinking coffee can help making people awake, but in my case, no matter how many times I drink coffee in a day, it doesn\'t work to me. Well, I\'ve got to go to the bathroom to refresh my mind. ^^>> CORRECT! See you very soon! >> CORRECT!