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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Good morning!
First, I will make your curiosity solved.
My friend delivered her baby boy about 2 weeks ago, and now, we only can see her and her son by pictures on the KAKAO STORY.
It is a really shame, but she and her son are surely sensitive about the current state of affairs, so we can totally understand her mind.
By the way, did you have a party in celebration of Father's Day there?
You are the eldest sibling, so you might have a big duty to prepare for those anniversaries.
I am suddenly curious about how you celebrated it for your father.
By the way, our boss went to Busan to install a machine that was imported from China yesterday, and this kind of machine was our main item a few years ago.
However, the machine business had gone bad day-by-day, so our boss had stopped doing that business.
Recently, a few customers still give an order to us to buy this machine, and our boss sometimes helps them to install the machine by himself, because all employees in charge of the machine business resigned our company a few years ago.
I think he really works hard to get more money even if the work is so hard.
Well, he might be under the weight of family obligations as a head of household.
Somehow, I admire him. ^^
That's all for now, and please help me to check my answers below.
See you very soon!
[이름]
1. Money is the ROOT OF ALL EVIL, so what's the point of earning a lot?
(d) the cause of wickedness
2. In my opinion MONEY TALKS and the little people are totally ignored.
(b) rich people have influence
3. She's a really happy woman now because for once she's IN THE MONEY.
(c) got money to spend
4. FOR MY MONEY I would sooner go on a cruise than sit all day on the beach.
(b) In my opinion
5. He has very little to do but he gets well paid and agrees it's MONEY FOR JAM.
(d) easy money
6. I think she should stop talking about it and PUT HER MONEY WHERE HER MOUTH IS.
(a) give money for talking too much
(b) take money out of her mouth and be quiet
(c) give money for something she says she believes in
(d) give money for talking a lot about nothing
7. If you want to find some help with your project ask him because HE'S GOT MONEY TO BURN.
(b) he spends money foolishly
8. As soon as he had won the lottery, he went crazy and started SPENDING MONEY LIKE WATER.
(a) spending money freely
9. When you consider all the advantages you've gained I think you'll admit you had A GOOD RUN FOR YOUR MONEY.
(d) a lot of benefit from your money
10. She's made it clear that we don't need to worry because MONEY IS NO OBJECT.
(a) money is not important
강사 첨삭
Hi There, Dear [이름]! ^.^
Happy Tuesday! ^^
First of all, I would like to THANK YOU for informing me more about your friend who already has a baby boy.
Now, I totally understand the situation.
By the way, we had a simple celebration for Father\'s Day last Sunday.
I stand as the eldest in our family now, because my older sister already has her own family.
However, I didn\'t organize it.
It\'s not our practice.
We planned for our Father\'s Day celebration together.
In my case, I bought a big pan of pizza, did the cleaning with my younger sister and made some decorations with my younger sister\'s daughter.
My parents and younger brother did the cooking.
My younger brother\'s partner bought a cake, and it\'s very delicious.
My older sister and her family bought some ice cream and alcoholic beverages.
Hahaha! ^^
We celebrated that day by eating, drinking and chatting. ^^,
Anyway, I think your boss really considers money a lot nowadays.
He doesn\'t want to waste his time, so he works a lot to earn a lot, too.
That is good for your company but not good for him.
I think he will have a fatigue soon.
I still hope for that not to happen.
I admire him, too.
However, I am just worried about his condition.
That\'s all for now! ^^
Thanks for the sharing! ^^,
Happy reading! ^^.
See you tomorrow! ^.^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
P.S.: Why were you absent in our class today?
Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!
Good morning! >> CORRECT!
First, I will make your curiosity solved. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: First, I will end your curiosity.
My friend delivered her baby boy about 2 weeks ago, and now, we only can see her and her son by pictures on the KAKAO STORY. >> CORRECT!
It is a really shame, but she and her son are surely sensitive about the current state of affairs, so we can totally understand her mind. >> CORRECT!
By the way, did you have a party in celebration of Father\'s Day there? >> CORRECT!
You are the eldest sibling, so you might have a big duty to prepare for those anniversaries. >> CORRECT!
I am suddenly curious about how you celebrated it for your father. >> CORRECT!
By the way, our boss went to Busan to install a machine that was imported from China yesterday, and this kind of machine was our main item a
few years ago. >> CORRECT!
However, the machine business had gone bad day-by-day, so our boss had stopped doing that business. >> CORRECT!
Recently, a few customers still give an order to us to buy this machine, and our boss sometimes helps them to install the machine by himself, because all employees in charge of the machine business resigned our company a few years ago.>> Recently, a few customers still give an order to us to buy this machine, and our boss sometimes helps them to install the machine by himself, because all employees in charge of the machine business resigned from our company a few years ago. (C1 PATTERN: resign from)
I think he really works hard to get more money even if the work is so hard. >> CORRECT!
>> BETTER: I think he really works hard to get more money even if the task is do hard.
Well, he might be under the weight of family obligations as a head of household. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: Well, he might be under the weight of family obligation as the head of their household.
Somehow, I admire him. ^^>> CORRECT!
That\'s all for now, and please help me to check my answers below. >> CORRECT!
See you very soon! >> CORRECT!
[이름]>> CORRECT!
1. Money is the ROOT OF ALL EVIL, so what\'s the point of earning a lot?
(d) the cause of wickedness>> CORRECT!
2. In my opinion MONEY TALKS and the little people are totally ignored.(b) rich people have influence>> CORRECT!3. She\'s a really happy woman now because for once she\'s IN THE MONEY.(c) got money to spend>> CORRECT!4. FOR MY MONEY I would sooner go on a cruise than sit all day on the beach.(b) In my opinion>> CORRECT!
5. He has very little to do but he gets well paid and agrees it\'s MONEY FOR JAM.(d) easy money>> CORRECT!6. I think she should stop talking about it and PUT HER MONEY WHERE HER MOUTH IS.(a) give money for talking too much(b) take money out of her mouth and be quiet(c) give money for something she says she believes in(d) give money for talking a lot about nothing>> (c) give money for something she says she believes in
7. If you want to find some help with your project ask him because HE\'S GOT MONEY TO BURN.(b) he spends money foolishly>> CORRECT!
8. As soon as he had won the lottery, he went crazy and started SPENDING MONEY LIKE WATER.(a) spending money freely>> CORRECT!
9. When you consider all the advantages you\'ve gained I think you\'ll admit you had A GOOD RUN FOR YOUR MONEY.(d) a lot of benefit from your money>> CORRECT!10. She\'s made it clear that we don\'t need to worry because MONEY IS NO OBJECT.(a) money is not important
>> CORRECT!
***PROPER SPACING***
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Good morning!
First, I will make your curiosity solved. My friend delivered her baby boy about 2 weeks ago, and now, we only can see her and her son by pictures on the KAKAO STORY. It is a really shame, but she and her son are surely sensitive about the current state of affairs, so we can totally understand her mind.
By the way, did you have a party in celebration of Father\'s Day there? You are the eldest sibling, so you might have a big duty to prepare for those anniversaries. I am suddenly curious about how you celebrated it for your father.
By the way, our boss went to Busan to install a machine that was imported from China yesterday, and this kind of machine was our main item a few years ago. However, the machine business had gone bad day-by-day, so our boss had stopped doing that business. Recently, a few customers still give an order to us to buy this machine, and our boss sometimes helps them to install the machine by himself, because all employees in charge of the machine business resigned our company a few years ago.I think he really works hard to get more money even if the work is so hard. Well, he might be under the weight of family obligations as a head of household. Somehow, I admire him. ^^
That\'s all for now, and please help me to check my answers below. See you very soon!
[이름]
1. Money is the ROOT OF ALL EVIL, so what\'s the point of earning a lot?(d) the cause of wickedness2. In my opinion MONEY TALKS and the little people are totally ignored.(b) rich people have influence3. She\'s a really happy woman now because for once she\'s IN THE MONEY.(c) got money to spend4. FOR MY MONEY I would sooner go on a cruise than sit all day on the beach.(b) In my opinion
5. He has very little to do but he gets well paid and agrees it\'s MONEY FOR JAM.(d) easy money6. I think she should stop talking about it and PUT HER MONEY WHERE HER MOUTH IS.(a) give money for talking too much(b) take money out of her mouth and be quiet(c) give money for something she says she believes in(d) give money for talking a lot about nothing
7. If you want to find some help with your project ask him because HE\'S GOT MONEY TO BURN.(b) he spends money foolishly
8. As soon as he had won the lottery, he went crazy and started SPENDING MONEY LIKE WATER.(a) spending money freely
9. When you consider all the advantages you\'ve gained I think you\'ll admit you had A GOOD RUN FOR YOUR MONEY.(d) a lot of benefit from your money10. She\'s made it clear that we don\'t need to worry because MONEY IS NO OBJECT.(a) money is not important
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