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Hi there, my Loveable Student [이름]! ^.^

Happy Wednesday! ^^

I am so happy that you answered my question about your absence yesterday.

Just like what I thought, you had an urgent meeting.

However, I was hoping that it was an appointment with your friends.

Well, that\'s okay.

I just wish you enjoyed your time with your costumers at that time.

By the way, I am glad that we have similar ways in celebrating Father\'s Day, but you don\'t really have that kind of event there in your country, right?

From what I know, Father\'s and Mother\'s Days are celebrated on one day, and it is called Parents\' Day, right?

You celebrated it last month.

That was on May 8th, right?

Hahaha! ^^

But still, we have similar tradition in relation to that event.

Anyway, I strongly agree with you when you said that bonding is the best way to make our parents happy while celebrating that occasion.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^.

See you very soon! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good afternoon!
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To start, let me say sorry for my absence yesterday.
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I had an urgent meeting with my customer, so I had to have a dinner with them.
>> I had an urgent meeting with my customers, so I had to have a dinner with them. (C1 THEM is a pronoun for a plural noun, so why did you type COSTUMER without S?)

They came here to meet me, so I had to go out with them in a hurry.
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>> OR: They came here to meet me, so I had to go out with them instantly.

I almost forgot holding off my yesterday\'s class.
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Fortunately, I had an application of Power English on my mobile phone, so

I could delay my class on time.
>> Fortunately, I had an application of Power English on my mobile phone, so I could delay my class on time. (C2 I think, instead of putting a space between SO and I, you pressed ENTER.)

By the way, I saw your reply against my last composition.
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Thanks for helping me making corrections even if I put my class on hold.
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In addition, I could understand your practice there when you have a celebration for Father\'s Day.
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I think the practice there is the same with ours.
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The best way to give happiness to our parents is to have a family bonding time.
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>> OR: The best way to give happiness to our parents is to have a bonding time with the complete members of the family.

There is nothing better than this. ^^
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Anyway, I have to leave from my work soon, and see you in our today\'s class! ^^
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