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2015-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my Teacher Paula, A happy Thursday to you! First, what you said on your last reply is correct, and I think you are really knowledgeable about Korea. Thanks for your interest about our culture. ^^ By the way, time flies so fast. It is Thursday already. I somehow feel a little tired in the middle of the week. In addition, the weather is hot and humid, so it may make me more tired. Here in Korea, the heavy rainy season has begun, and mosquitoes have begun to appear at the same time. Yesterday, when I got home, I found 3 mosquitoes on the celling, so I killed them with an electric swatter in a whisk. They all had a big belly with blood, but I didn't know whose blood they sucked up, because I didn't have a mosquito bite on my body. Well, they might have gone into my house after sucking others. I have a mosquito net, but I feel too stuffy to sleep under it. However, if mosquitoes start to bite me, I can't avoid using that. I dislike the weather of summer a little due to those conditions. Life is like that. I just have to enjoy and endure that. ^^ I hope autumn comes much faster. That's all for now, and see you very soon! ^^ [이름] P.S.: Below is my homework. ^^ 1. It was late at night, the wind was howling and when she heard the knock on the door, she ALMOST JUMPED OUT OF HER SKIN. (b) was terrified 2. As they only had a few minutes to get to the station, they ran all the way and finally caught the train BY THE SKIN OF THEIR TEETH. (a) just in time 3. There's something about him I just can't stand and he really GETS UNDER MY SKIN. (d) annoys me 4. I wouldn't do that but you do whatever you like, as IT'S NO SKIN OF MY NOSE. (b) it's not important to me 5. It doesn't matter what you say to her I promise you, SHE'S GOT A VERY THICK SKIN. (a) she's not affected by criticism 6. He looked at her and in the words of Frank Sinatra said: 'I'VE GOT YOU UNDER MY SKIN'. (c) I'm very attracted to you 7. It was simply a case of running away or being killed and we decided to run TO SAVE OUR SKINS. (d) to stay alive 8. Be very careful what you say to Georgina about her new hairstyle; remember SHE HAS A VERY THIN SKIN. (b) she is very sensitive 9. I think the horse had been neglected for months and not been given enough to eat because it was JUST SKIN AND BONES. (a) very thin 10. They say there's a very rare book in that pile of old books for sale so KEEP YOUR EYES SKINNED. (d) look carefully

강사 첨삭

Hi there, my beautiful student, [이름]! ^.^

Happy Thursday! ^^

 

First of all, I would like to say IT\'S MY PLEASURE.

I really like knowing other cultures and traditions.

Here in the Philippines, we have a lot of those since there are different kinds of people living in our country.

We are all Filipinos, but we believe in different things.

 

 By the way, you are right that time flies so fast.

I can already taste Friday.

Hahaha! ^^

 

Anyway, I pity the mosquitoes that you killed.

However, they deserve what happened to them.

If you didn\'t end their lives, they might give more trouble to other people and to you most especially.

So, what you did was just right.

 

That\'s all! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

Sleep tight! ^^.

See you tomorrow! ^.^

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

Dear my Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!

A happy Thursday to you!
>> CORRECT!

First, what you said on your last reply is correct, and I think you are really knowledgeable about Korea.
>> CORRECT!

Thanks for your interest about our culture. ^^
>> CORRECT!

By the way, time flies so fast.

>> CORRECT!

It is Thursday already.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: It is already Thursday.

I somehow feel a little tired in the middle of the week.
>> I somehow felt a little tired in the middle of the week. (C1 What is the middle of the week for you? In my case, I think it is Wednesday.)

In addition, the weather is hot and humid, so it may make me more tired.
>> CORRECT!

Here in Korea, the heavy rainy season has begun, and mosquitoes have begun to appear at the same time.
>> CORRECT!

>> BETTER: Here in Korea, the heavy rainy season had begun, and mosquitoes have started to appear at the same time.

Yesterday, when I got home, I found 3 mosquitoes on the celling, so I killed them with an electric swatter in a whisk.
>> Yesterday, when I got home, I found 3 mosquitoes on the ceiling, so I killed them with an electric swatter in a whisk. (C2 CELLING should be CEILING.)

They all had a big belly with blood, but I didn\'t know whose blood they sucked up, because I didn\'t have a mosquito bite on my body.
>> They all have big bellies with blood, but I don\'t know whose blood they sucked up, because I don\'t have any mosquito bites on my body. (C3 I think you are giving a general information, so your sentence should be in PRESENT SIMPLE FORM.)

Well, they might have gone into my house after sucking others.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Well, they might have gone into my house after sucking other people\'s blood.

>> OR: Well, they might have gone into my house after biting other people.

I have a mosquito net, but I feel too stuffy to sleep under it.
>> CORRECT!

However, if mosquitoes start to bite me, I can\'t avoid using that.
>> CORRECT!

I dislike the weather of summer a little due to those conditions.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I somehow dislike the weather in summer due to those conditions.

Life is like that.

>> CORRECT!

I just have to enjoy and endure that. ^^
>> CORRECT!

I hope autumn comes much faster.
>> CORRECT!

That\'s all for now, and see you very soon! ^^
>> CORRECT!

[이름]
>> CORRECT!
P.S.: Below is my homework. ^^
>> CORRECT!

1. It was late at night, the wind was howling and when she heard the knock on the door, she ALMOST JUMPED OUT OF HER SKIN.

(b) was terrified
>> CORRECT!

2. As they only had a few minutes to get to the station, they ran all the way and finally caught the train BY THE SKIN OF THEIR TEETH.
(a) just in time
>> CORRECT!

3. There\'s something about him I just can\'t stand and he really GETS UNDER MY SKIN.
(d) annoys me
>> CORRECT!

4. I wouldn\'t do that but you do whatever you like, as IT\'S NO SKIN OF MY NOSE.
(b) it\'s not important to me
>> CORRECT!

5. It doesn\'t matter what you say to her I promise you, SHE\'S GOT A VERY THICK SKIN.
(a) she\'s not affected by criticism
>> CORRECT!

6. He looked at her and in the words of Frank Sinatra said: \'I\'VE GOT YOU UNDER MY SKIN\'.
(c) I\'m very attracted to you
>> CORRECT!

7. It was simply a case of running away or being killed and we decided to run TO SAVE OUR SKINS.
(d) to stay alive
>> CORRECT!

8. Be very careful what you say to Georgina about her new hairstyle; remember SHE HAS A VERY THIN SKIN.
(b) she is very sensitive
>> CORRECT!

9. I think the horse had been neglected for months and not been given enough to eat because it was JUST SKIN AND BONES.
(a) very thin
>> CORRECT!

10. They say there\'s a very rare book in that pile of old books for sale so KEEP YOUR EYES SKINNED.
(d) look carefully

>> CORRECT!

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