Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Happy Friday!
It is raining here, so the weather became cool.
How is it there?
By the way, do you have a special plan today?
In my case, I am going to go to the movie with my female friend.
Yesterday, one of my male friends gave me free movie tickets, so I asked her to go to the movie with me.
I haven't decided what I am going to book.
After our class, we are supposed to meet each other at theater.
The theater is near my house, and I only need 10 minutes to go there on foot.
I think you might be curious about our boyfriend in this case.
Today, he has another plan with his coworkers, so he will be back home later than usual.
When it comes to the upcoming weekend's plan, I don't have any special plans for now.
I might be going to the library with my boyfriend and study hard.
Even if that is not a special plan, but I think that is certainly a worthwhile thing.
By the way, one of clients said he wants to study English, so I recommended Power English to him.
As I heard, he got a test at 07:30 PM and got grade 3.
I don't know whether he will enroll in Power English, but I am still going to push or encourage him. ^^
That's all for now and see you very soon!
[이름]
P.S.: Below is my homework. ^^
1. You must HAVE LOST YOUR MARBLES if you're seriously considering buying that house.
(b) be crazy
2. If you don't mind me saying so I think YOU'RE A BIT OVER THE TOP, aren't you?
(a) you're exaggerating a bit
3. All right then if you like I'LL PUT MY CARDS OVER THE TABLE.
(d) I'll tell you my honest opinion
4. I'd appreciate that. Go on, I'M ALL EARS.
(b) I am listening very carefully
5. Well in the first place all the windows are broken, which is A REAL PAIN IN THE NECK.
(c) a serious problem
6. Yes, I agree but at the same time it's not THE END OF THE WORLD.
(a) worth worrying about
7. Then of course there is that huge crack in one of the outer walls, that will cost you AN ARM AND A LEG to repair.
(d) a lot of money
8. You have a point but then I can deal with that IN THE FULLNESS OF TIME.
(b) eventually
9. Finally there's one thing you can't just SWEEP UNDER THE CARPET and that is the missing roof!
(c) ignore
10. I can see THERE ARE NO FLIES ON YOU but you must admit it is very cheap.
(d) you're not stupid
강사 첨삭
A fantastic Friday to you, [이름]! ^.^
It is also raining here in Baguio City, Philippines.
Luckily, the rain is not falling heavily.
We are just experiencing drizzle.
Anyhow, I have some plans this coming weekend.
Tomorrow, I might go to the mountains and see the break of dawn with some friends.
One of them is Teacher Julie.
At 3:00 PM, I will go to the gym with one of my female friends, and her name is Madam Rachel.
After working out, Madam Rachel and I will go to the mall to see a horror movie.
After watching the film, we will go somewhere to eat and drink.
Hahaha! ^^
On Sunday, I will go to the airport for jogging.
I will be there for one hour from 5:30 AM.
I am not certain if I will meet Madam Rachel for dinner.
I think these are my plans for now for the weekend. ^^
Anyway, I hope your costumer will enroll soon at Power English. ^^
That\'s all for now! ^^
See you very soon! ^^,
Happy Reading! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
P.S.: Good job for your homework! ^^ You finished your task perfectly. Very good! ^^,
Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!
Happy Friday! >> CORRECT!
It is raining here, so the weather became cool. >> CORRECT!
How is it there? >> CORRECT!
>> OR: How about there?
By the way, do you have a special plan today? >> CORRECT!
>> OR: By the way, do you have special plans today?
In my case, I am going to go to the movie with my female friend. >> In my case, I am going to go to the movies with my female friend. (C1 THE MOVIES is same with THE THEATER or THE CINEMA.)
>> OR: In my case, I am going to the movies with one of my female friends.
Yesterday, one of my male friends gave me free movie tickets, so I asked her to go to the movie with me. >> Yesterday, one of my male friends gave me free movie tickets, so I asked her to go to the movies with me. (C2 See C1.)
>> OR: Yesterday, a male friend gave me two free movie tickets, so I asked her to see a movie with me.
I haven\'t decided what I am going to book. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: I haven\'t decided what film we will watch.
After our class, we are supposed to meet each other at theater. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: After our class, we will meet at the theater.
The theater is near my house, and I only need 10 minutes to go there on foot. >> CORRECT!
I think you might be curious about our boyfriend in this case. >> I think you might be curious about our boyfriends in this case. (C3 OUR BOYFRIEND means that you and your friend have the same partner, so BOYFRIEND should be BOYFRIENDS.)
>> OR: I think you might be curious about my boyfriend in this case.
Today, he has another plan with his coworkers, so he will be back home later than usual. >> CORRECT!
When it comes to the upcoming weekend\'s plan, I don\'t have any special plans for now. >> C4 I THINK IT IS BETTER TO SAY: When it comes to the upcoming weekend plans, I don\'t have any special ideas for now.
I might be going to the library with my boyfriend and study hard. >> CORRECT!
Even if that is not a special plan, but I think that is certainly a worthwhile thing. >> CORRECT!
By the way, one of clients said he wants to study English, so I recommended Power English to him.>> By the way, one of our clients said he wants to study English, so I recommended Power English to him. (C5 PATTERN: one of the/my/our/... + plural noun)
As I heard, he got a test at 07:30 PM and got grade 3.>> CORRECT!
>> OR: As I heard, he took a test at 7:30 PM and got level 3.
I don\'t know whether he will enroll in Power English, but I am still going to push or encourage him. ^^>> CORRECT!
That\'s all for now and see you very soon! >> CORRECT!
[이름] >> CORRECT!
P.S.: Below is my homework. ^^>> CORRECT!
1. You must HAVE LOST YOUR MARBLES if you\'re seriously considering buying that house.(b) be crazy>> CORRECT!
2. If you don\'t mind me saying so I think YOU\'RE A BIT OVER THE TOP, aren\'t you?(a) you\'re exaggerating a bit>> CORRECT!
3. All right then if you like I\'LL PUT MY CARDS OVER THE TABLE.(d) I\'ll tell you my honest opinion>> CORRECT!
4. I\'d appreciate that. Go on, I\'M ALL EARS.(b) I am listening very carefully>> CORRECT!
5. Well in the first place all the windows are broken, which is A REAL PAIN IN THE NECK.(c) a serious problem>> CORRECT!
6. Yes, I agree but at the same time it\'s not THE END OF THE WORLD.(a) worth worrying about>> CORRECT!
7. Then of course there is that huge crack in one of the outer walls, that will cost you AN ARM AND A LEG to repair.(d) a lot of money>> CORRECT!
8. You have a point but then I can deal with that IN THE FULLNESS OF TIME.(b) eventually>> CORRECT!
9. Finally there\'s one thing you can\'t just SWEEP UNDER THE CARPET and that is the missing roof!(c) ignore>> CORRECT!
10. I can see THERE ARE NO FLIES ON YOU but you must admit it is very cheap.(d) you\'re not stupid
>> CORRECT!
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