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2015-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Monday! I think you seem to make a decision to be fit. I could see your determination through your reply. I am also happy for that, but I'd like to say to you that don't overdo it. ^^ In my case, I went to see a doctor to have my skin examined last Saturday. I have never had this kind of inflammation on my face, so I was so worried about my condition. The doctor said that the hot weather made my skin oiler, and it is easy for my skin's pores to be blocked. In this case, all I need to do is to drink more water and try not to sweat a lot. I felt disappointed when I listened to that, because I always drink water a lot. In addition, I have to work out every day, but the doctor did not allow me to do that, so I somehow hate the hot weather. Well, I just have to control my mind peacefully and try not to get a lot of stresses. I think stress is all root of diseases. ^^;; Anyway, I hope you don't suffer from a Monday sickness and have a good day! See you very soon. ^^ [이름] P.S.: Here is my homework. 1. THEY'RE NOT GETTING AWAY WITH IT! They must pay for what they have done. (a) They won't come back (b) They won't succeed (c) They won't do it again (d) They won't go again 2. I'M NOT PUTTING UP WITH THAT! She must do as I say. (d) I resist 3. I made it absolutely clear that he could ON NO ACCOUNT expect a pay rise this year. (a) in this way (b) in some way (c) in that way (d) in no way 4. They asked me whether I would accept a discount instead of a new machine. NO CHANCE, I said. (c) Impossible 5. We invited her to come to our party in the hope of putting things right but she WOULDN'T WEAR IT. (a) rejected 6. I honestly don't know how you do it because personally I COULDN'T COPE. (a) would be unable to manage 7. This happens every time I start the engine up. I tell you I CAN'T BE DOING WITH IT. (a) I find it difficult (b) I find it irritating (c) I find it stupid (d) I find it hard 8. This is now the third time I've had to phone up and complain and I've reached the stage where I CAN SEE NO END TO IT. (d) I don't know when it will finish 9. IT'S NO GOOD shouting at me like that — I'm doing the best I can. (a) It's a waste of time 10. You'll get yourself in NO END of trouble if you persist in refusing to pay those taxes. (c) a huge amount

강사 첨삭

Hi, Beautiful [이름]! ^.^

Happy Monday! ^^

 

First and for most, I would like to say thanks for your comment about my decision to be healthy.

Thank you really! ^^

It makes me strive more for a better me.

Hahaha! ^^

Don\'t worry because I am not over doing anything.

I promise you that.

 

By the way, I am sorry about your skin condition.

I hope there is a better way to treat it.

I am talking about a method that will not annoy you.

Honestly speaking, I don\'t want you to hate the weather.

I also hope for zero stress for you. ^^

 

Anyway, what happened to your homework?

Is it difficult?

You got five out of ten.

However, I think that is still good. ^^

 

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you very soon! ^^,

Don\'t forget to read happily! ^^.

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

Dear my Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!

Happy Monday!
>> CORRECT!

I think you seem to make a decision to be fit.
>> CORRECT!

I could see your determination through your reply.
>> CORRECT!

I am also happy for that, but I\'d like to say to you that don\'t overdo it. ^^
>> CORRECT!

In my case, I went to see a doctor to have my skin examined last Saturday.
>> CORRECT!

I have never had this kind of inflammation on my face, so I was so worried about my condition.
>> CORRECT!

The doctor said that the hot weather made my skin oilier, and it is easy for my skin\'s pores to be blocked.
>> CORRECT!

In this case, all I need to do is to drink more water and try not to sweat a lot.
>> CORRECT!

I felt disappointed when I listened to that, because I always drink water a lot.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I felt disappointed when I listened to that, because I always drink a lot of water.

In addition, I have to work out every day, but the doctor did not allow me to do that, so I somehow hate the hot weather.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: In addition, I have to work out every day, but the doctor did not allow me to do that, so I somehow hate the weather nowadays.

Well, I just have to control my mind peacefully and try not to get a lot of stresses.
>> CORRECT!

I think stress is all root of diseases. ^^;;
>> C1 I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: I think stress is the root of all diseases.

Anyway, I hope you don\'t suffer from a Monday sickness and have a good day!
>> CORRECT!

See you very soon. ^^
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: See you very soon!

[이름]
>> CORRECT!

P.S.: Here is my homework.
>> CORRECT!
1. THEY\'RE NOT GETTING AWAY WITH IT! They must pay for what they have done.
(a) They won\'t come back
(b) They won\'t succeed
(c) They won\'t do it again
(d) They won\'t go again
>> (b) They won\'t succeed
2. I\'M NOT PUTTING UP WITH THAT! She must do as I say.
(d) I resist
>> (c) I object

3. I made it absolutely clear that he could ON NO ACCOUNT expect a pay rise this year.
(a) in this way
(b) in some way
(c) in that way
(d) in no way
>> (d) in no way

4. They asked me whether I would accept a discount instead of a new machine. NO CHANCE, I said.
(c) Impossible
>> CORRECT!

5. We invited her to come to our party in the hope of putting things right but she WOULDN\'T WEAR IT.
(a) rejected
>> (b) refused

6. I honestly don\'t know how you do it because personally I COULDN\'T COPE.
(a) would be unable to manage
>> CORRECT!

7. This happens every time I start the engine up. I tell you I CAN\'T BE DOING WITH IT.
(a) I find it difficult
(b) I find it irritating
(c) I find it stupid
(d) I find it hard
>> (b) I find it irritating

8. This is now the third time I\'ve had to phone up and complain and I\'ve reached the stage where I CAN SEE NO END TO IT.
(d) I don\'t know when it will finish
>> CORRECT!

9. IT\'S NO GOOD shouting at me like that — I\'m doing the best I can.
(a) It\'s a waste of time
>> CORRECT!

10. You\'ll get yourself in NO END of trouble if you persist in refusing to pay those taxes.
(c) a huge amount

>> CORRECT!

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