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Dear my Teacher Paula, A happy Tuesday to both of us! As I told you yesterday, I am off today, so I was supposed to go to the amusement park in Youngin City. However, while we were going there, my boyfriend and I started to feel painful in our stomachs, so we were just back our home halfway. We set off for there at 08:40 AM and were supposed to stop by at a public health center to measure our body fat, but his pain was more severe, so we decided to go to see a doctor. In my case, my symptom was not that serious, so I went to see a doctor for my skin. We are now home, and I am writing my daily composition. At the same time, I am now making a bowl of porridge for my boyfriend. He is now taking a nap for a while, and I put a hot compress on his belly to make his symptom relieved. What an unlucky day! We haven't gone to the amusement park in Youngin City, and today is a weekday, there will certainly be less people to play. Today is a golden opportunity to go on the rides to the fullest without lining up. Well, that is life. Hahaha! In this case, I have to think of a backup plan for our wonderful vacation. ^^ See you very soon! ^^ [이름]

Dear my Student [이름],   You are right! ^^ It\'s a happy Tuesday to both of us even though we are somehow experiencing some troubles. Hahaha! ^^,   By the way, I feel sorry about the cancellation of your plan to go to the amusement park because of some abdominal pain that you and your boyfriend are having. I hope both of you will recover very soon. Both of you need to relax, so make yourselves happy through light things. Don\'t make yourselves too tired.   Anyway, I didn\'t explain why some of your sentences are wrong. Sorry! T.T   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you very soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! A happy Tuesday to both of us! >> CORRECT! As I told you yesterday, I am off today, so I was supposed to go to the amusement park in Youngin City.>> CORRECT! >> OR: As I told you yesterday, today is my off, so my boyfriend and I were supposed to go to the amusement park in Youngin City. However, while we were going there, my boyfriend and I started to feel painful in our stomachs, so we were just back our home halfway. >> However, while we were going there, my boyfriend and I started to feel pain in our stomachs, so we were just back our home halfway. >> OR: However, while we were on our way going there, my boyfriend and I started to have a stomachache, so we just went back our home halfway. >> OR: However, while we were on our way going there, my boyfriend and I started to feel an abdominal pain, so we just went back our home halfway. We set off for there at 08:40 AM and were supposed to stop by at a public health center to measure our body fat, but his pain was more severe, so we decided to go to see a doctor.>> CORRECT! In my case, my symptom was not that serious, so I went to see a doctor for my skin. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In my case, my condition was not that serious, so I went to see my dermatologist. We are now home, and I am writing my daily composition.>> CORRECT! At the same time, I am now making a bowl of porridge for my boyfriend.>> CORRECT! He is now taking a nap for a while, and I put a hot compress on his belly to make his symptom relieved. >> CORRECT! What an unlucky day!>> CORRECT! We haven\'t gone to the amusement park in Youngin City, and today is a weekday, there will certainly be less people to play. >> We haven\'t gone to the amusement park in Youngin City, and today is a weekday, there will certainly be less people who will play there. >> OR: We haven\'t gone to the amusement park in Youngin City, and today is a weekday, there will certainly be less people who will visit there. Today is a golden opportunity to go on the rides to the fullest without lining up.>> CORRECT! Well, that is life. Hahaha! >> CORRECT! In this case, I have to think of a backup plan for our wonderful vacation. ^^>> CORRECT! See you very soon! ^^>> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT!