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2015-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good afternoon! Today, our boss went to China for his business trip, so I somehow feel free even if there are many tasks that I have to deal with. By the way, I'd like to ask you about something in relation to the grammar. Yesterday, when I wrote a sentence of 'feel painful' on my composition, but you helped me correct it to 'feel pain.' I am just curious about why I can't use 'painful' behind 'feel.' As I know, adjectives can be used in front of the word of 'feel', such as 'I feel happy.' I am so confused about that now. ^^;; Pls help me explain it more. By the way, do you remember that one of my customers got a test in Power English? He decided to take a class with one of Power English's teachers. As I heard, he will start studying next week by Skype. I am happy to have a friend who can talk about classes with me. If he starts his class, I will share more stories with you. ^^ Anyway, when it comes to my pronunciation, I felt so ashamed yesterday. My tongue doesn't seem to listen to my brain's order well, so I also feel oppression. After our class yesterday, I practiced the pronunciation of 'better' while I lifted dumbbells, but I still could not do well. Well, I still have a long way to go. ^^;; Anyway, my teacher Paula, thanks for reading my stories above, and see you very soon! [이름]

강사 첨삭

Dear my Student [이름],   Happy Wednesday evening! ^.^   I was so glad to hear from you about your boss\'s business vacation. I can imagine those times when you were doing your tasks without thinking about him. Hahaha! ^^ I hope he will bring some good news with him when he goes back to Korea. ^^,   By the way, as I told you during our class, you can use PAINFUL after FEEL if you use more words. For instance, I feel painful burning sensation in my stomach. I hope my explanation will help you understand my point well.   Anyhow, I am really thankful for the decision of your colleague to study with us here at Power English. We assure you that we will take care of him. He will have a good teacher, and they will enjoy their time studying and learning together. I can\'t wait to hear more about his online studies.   In your case, don\'t be negative about things happening to you now. Things will go well when you practice. ^^   That\'s all for now! ^^ Thank you for always sharing your whereabouts! ^^, I am so happy reading things about you. Just keep on writing and improving! ^^. See you tomorrow! ^,^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good afternoon! >> CORRECT! Today, our boss went to China for his business trip, so I somehow feel free even if there are many tasks that I have to deal with. >> CORRECT! By the way, I\'d like to ask you about something in relation to the grammar. >> By the way, I\'d like to ask you about something in relation to grammar. (C1 There should be no THE before GRAMMAR since it is a study.) Yesterday, when I wrote a sentence of \'feel painful\' on my composition, but you helped me correct it to \'feel pain.\' >> CORRECT! I am just curious about why I can\'t use \'painful\' behind \'feel.\'>> CORRECT! As I know, adjectives can be used in front of the word of \'feel\', such as \'I feel happy.\' >> CORRECT! I am so confused about that now. ^^;; >> CORRECT! Pls help me explain it more. >> C2 I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: Please help me by explaining it more.  By the way, do you remember that one of my customers got a test in Power English? >> CORRECT! He decided to take a class with one of Power English\'s teachers. >> CORRECT! As I heard, he will start studying next week by Skype. >> CORRECT! >> OR: As I heard, he will start his Skype class next week. I am happy to have a friend who can talk about classes with me. >> CORRECT! If he starts his class, I will share more stories with you. ^^>> CORRECT! Anyway, when it comes to my pronunciation, I felt so ashamed yesterday. >> CORRECT! My tongue doesn\'t seem to listen to my brain\'s order well, so I also feel oppression. >> CORRECT! After our class yesterday, I practiced the pronunciation of \'better\' while I lifted dumbbells, but I still could not do well. >> CORRECT! Well, I still have a long way to go. ^^;; >> CORRECT! Anyway, my teacher Paula, thanks for reading my stories above, and see you very soon! >> Anyway, my Teacher Paula, thanks for reading my stories above, and see you very soon! [이름] >> CORRECT!

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