Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
Good afternoon!
Today, our boss went to China for his business trip, so I somehow feel free even if there are many tasks that I have to deal with.
By the way, I'd like to ask you about something in relation to the grammar.
Yesterday, when I wrote a sentence of 'feel painful' on my composition, but you helped me correct it to 'feel pain.'
I am just curious about why I can't use 'painful' behind 'feel.'
As I know, adjectives can be used in front of the word of 'feel', such as 'I feel happy.'
I am so confused about that now. ^^;;
Pls help me explain it more.
By the way, do you remember that one of my customers got a test in Power English?
He decided to take a class with one of Power English's teachers.
As I heard, he will start studying next week by Skype.
I am happy to have a friend who can talk about classes with me.
If he starts his class, I will share more stories with you. ^^
Anyway, when it comes to my pronunciation, I felt so ashamed yesterday.
My tongue doesn't seem to listen to my brain's order well, so I also feel oppression.
After our class yesterday, I practiced the pronunciation of 'better' while I lifted dumbbells, but I still could not do well.
Well, I still have a long way to go. ^^;;
Anyway, my teacher Paula, thanks for reading my stories above, and see you very soon!
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Dear my Student [이름],
Happy Wednesday evening! ^.^
I was so glad to hear from you about your boss\'s business vacation.
I can imagine those times when you were doing your tasks without thinking about him.
Hahaha! ^^
I hope he will bring some good news with him when he goes back to Korea. ^^,
By the way, as I told you during our class, you can use PAINFUL after FEEL if you use more words.
For instance, I feel painful burning sensation in my stomach.
I hope my explanation will help you understand my point well.
Anyhow, I am really thankful for the decision of your colleague to study with us here at Power English.
We assure you that we will take care of him.
He will have a good teacher, and they will enjoy their time studying and learning together.
I can\'t wait to hear more about his online studies.
In your case, don\'t be negative about things happening to you now.
Things will go well when you practice. ^^
That\'s all for now! ^^
Thank you for always sharing your whereabouts! ^^,
I am so happy reading things about you.
Just keep on writing and improving! ^^.
See you tomorrow! ^,^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!
Good afternoon! >> CORRECT!
Today, our boss went to China for his business trip, so I somehow feel free even if there are many tasks that I have to deal with. >> CORRECT!
By the way, I\'d like to ask you about something in relation to the grammar. >> By the way, I\'d like to ask you about something in relation to grammar. (C1 There should be no THE before GRAMMAR since it is a study.)
Yesterday, when I wrote a sentence of \'feel painful\' on my composition, but you helped me correct it to \'feel pain.\' >> CORRECT!
I am just curious about why I can\'t use \'painful\' behind \'feel.\'>> CORRECT!
As I know, adjectives can be used in front of the word of \'feel\', such as \'I feel happy.\' >> CORRECT!
I am so confused about that now. ^^;; >> CORRECT!
Pls help me explain it more. >> C2 I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: Please help me by explaining it more.
By the way, do you remember that one of my customers got a test in Power English? >> CORRECT!
He decided to take a class with one of Power English\'s teachers. >> CORRECT!
As I heard, he will start studying next week by Skype. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: As I heard, he will start his Skype class next week.
I am happy to have a friend who can talk about classes with me. >> CORRECT!
If he starts his class, I will share more stories with you. ^^>> CORRECT!
Anyway, when it comes to my pronunciation, I felt so ashamed yesterday. >> CORRECT!
My tongue doesn\'t seem to listen to my brain\'s order well, so I also feel oppression. >> CORRECT!
After our class yesterday, I practiced the pronunciation of \'better\' while I lifted dumbbells, but I still could not do well. >> CORRECT!
Well, I still have a long way to go. ^^;; >> CORRECT!
Anyway, my teacher Paula, thanks for reading my stories above, and see you very soon! >> Anyway, my Teacher Paula, thanks for reading my stories above, and see you very soon!
[이름]
>> CORRECT!
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