Composition

Hi, Fabulous [이름]! ^.^

Happy Thursday! ^^

I am so sorry. T.T

I apologizing for making you feel that our time was limited yesterday.

I think I was so abrupt when I ended our class.

It was not because of the good thing that you said.

It was due to my next call.

I needed to conduct a level test.

Anyhow, thanks for telling me your story more through writing.

Everything are clear now.

You satisfied me to the extent that my curiosity disappeared.

You also made me imagine the things that you experienced when you were in China, especially the \'pee\' part. Hahaha! ^^

Thank you very much! ^^,

Anyway, I hope I can go to China with you.

Hahaha! ^^

See you soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning!
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Yesterday, we didn\'t finish our talks due to our time limits, and you somehow seemed to be very busy. ^^
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>> OR: Yesterday, we didn\'t finish our talk due to the limited time, and you somehow seemed to be very busy.

Let me guess the reason why you looked so busy.
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You might have made an appointment to go out to have your dinner with your colleagues. ^^
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It is just my guess with fun.
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By the way, I will tell you the rest of the story that we didn\'t finish.
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>>OR: By the way, I will continue the story that we started talking yesterday during our class through this composition.

When I was first in China, I was shocked by the surroundings everywhere.
>> When I was in China the first time, I was shocked with the surroundings. (C1 WHEN I WAS FIRST IN CHINA means you were the first person in China.)

>> BETTER: The first time that I was in China, I was shocked with the surroundings there.

>> OR: The first time that I was in China, I found the surroundings shocking.

I could see a lot of trash on the road without any difficulties.
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In addition, many people were eating sunflower seeds and throwing the shells away thoughtlessly.
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The most surprising thing was that there were no doors on public toilets.
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Even I could see others\' pee flowing along a drain pipe under feet.
>> C2 I THINK WHAT YOU MEAN IS: Even I could see people\'s pee flowing along a drain pipe under my feet.

What a shock! Hahaha!
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>> OR: What a shocking thing!

Of course, this situation was only found in some small villages.
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However, those situations happened 13 years ago, and now, the environment of cities there has changed a lot.
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Now, China has a strong power in the world, and president Xi Jinping is trying to develop the country constantly.
>> Now, China has a strong power in the world, and President Xi Jinping is trying to develop the country constantly. (C3: P in President should capitalized, because it is used before Xi Jinping which is a proper noun.)

As the result of his sweat, the environment there has become cleaner than before, and they even have more improved facilities that get abreast of advanced countries.
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I only can see views of China through TV programs for now.
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If I have a chance to go to China to take a trip, I really want to travel all around China.
>> If I have a chance to go to China to take a trip, I really want to travel all around it.

Anyway, that\'s all for now, and see you very soon!
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