Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good morning and happy Monday! First, I'd like to ask you the correction about my last composition. I think you forgot to finish the amendment. ^^ I could not see the last word behind 'the train.' Not only he lost his possession, but also that kind of behavior can make the train delayed. >> Not only he lost his possession, but also that kind of behavior can make the train Anyway, did you enjoy your hiking last Saturday? How was the weather there? Here in Korea, the seasonal rain front is moving northward from the south, so the weather is a little humid. My curly hair indeed shows a high percentage of humidity. Hahaha! However, it is still sunny in Seoul, because the strength of the front is not that strong for now. According to the weather forecast, Seoul will experience the seasonal rain front from Wednesday. I hope the rain won't cause any problems. That's all for now and see you very soon. [이름] P.S.: Here is my homework. In my opinion, traveling by plane only has its advantages. Nowadays, people lack their time to travel, so in this case, boarding a plane is the best way to minimize their travel time of journey. Of course, the plane ticket is a little expensive, but if we think of our time as gold, we deserve to pay for that. I'm also willing to pay for the ticket if my time can allow me to go on a trip. Suddenly, I really want to go abroad to take a rest. I don't know when I can grasp this chance and just enjoy myself without any worries. I will wait for the chance to come with joy. ^^

Dear my Student [이름],   A wonderful Monday to us! ^.^   First of all, I would like to correct my mistake on your composition before this one. You\'re right that I didn\'t end my sentence that served as a suggested statement. It should be ended with \'be on delayed schedule.\' I really apologize for that.   Anyway, just like what I said during our class, I enjoyed hiking last Saturday, especially because of the wonderful people I was with during that time. When went for a hike, it wasn\'t raining. It was so cold, but it didn\'t rain that time. It was cloudy though, but all in all, things were really great. We took a lot of beauriful pictures. I hope I cans how them with you, but I am not sure if it\'s possible. Well, I hope I can have more activities with them and share it with you also. ^^   By the way, I like your answer about your homework. You really are logical when you answer questions. You are right that traveling by plane is the most suitable method for busy people like us to take advantage with. I know what you feel, and I will also have the same thinking like yours.   Anyhow, that\'s all for now! ^^ I hope I made all things clear now. If not, just inform me. ^^, Happy reading! ^^. See you tomorrow! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula,>> CORRECT! Good morning and happy Monday! >> CORRECT! First, I\'d like to ask you the correction about my last composition. >> CORRECT! I think you forgot to finish the amendment. ^^ >> CORRECT! I could not see the last word behind \'the train.\' >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: I could see \'the train\' as the last words in your correction. Not only he lost his possession, but also that kind of behavior can make the train delayed. >> CORRECT! >> Not only he lost his possession, but also that kind of behavior can make the train >> Not only he lost his possession, but also that kind of behavior can make the train be on delayed schedule. Anyway, did you enjoy your hiking last Saturday? >> CORRECT! How was the weather there? >> CORRECT! Here in Korea, the seasonal rain front is moving northward from the south, so the weather is a little humid. >> CORRECT! My curly hair indeed shows a high percentage of humidity. Hahaha! >> CORRECT! However, it is still sunny in Seoul, because the strength of the front is not that strong for now. >> CORRECT! According to the weather forecast, Seoul will experience the seasonal rain front from Wednesday. >> CORRECT! I hope the rain won\'t cause any problems. >> CORRECT! That\'s all for now and see you very soon. >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: Here is my homework. >> CORRECT! In my opinion, traveling by plane only has its advantages. >> CORRECT! Nowadays, people lack their time to travel, so in this case, boarding a plane is the best way to minimize their travel time of journey. >> CORRECT! Of course, the plane ticket is a little expensive, but if we think of our time as gold, we deserve to pay for that. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Of course, the plane ticket is a little expensive, but if we think of our time as gold, it is just reasonable to pay for that. I\'m also willing to pay for the ticket if my time can allow me to go on a trip. >> CORRECT! Suddenly, I really want to go abroad to take a rest. >> CORRECT! I don\'t know when I can grasp this chance and just enjoy myself without any worries. >> CORRECT! I will wait for the chance to come with joy. ^^ >> CORRECT!