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Dear my Teacher Paula, A happy Tuesday to both of us! First of all, I would like to say thank you for explaining your whereabouts last weekend and correcting my composition. I read it with joy. ^^ By the way, how is your condition of your back? It is easy for people today to feel backache due to sitting on a chair for a long time. In my case, I also sometimes feel backache when I stand for a long time, especially on the subway or bus. My travel time to go to work is so long, it takes two hours and a half there and back. Due to many people who use the public transportation in rush hours, I can't dare to dream about taking a seat even if I leave from my place very early. That's okay, I already got used to it. ^^ I hope your symptom is just temporary. By the way, today is the last day that our boss is not in the office. He will come back here tomorrow and definitely can't wait to share something with me. Wow, just the thought of it makes me excited. Hahaha! ^^;; That's all for now, and see you this evening! [이름] P.S.: Here is my homework. I think the word 'travel' in the subject doesn't seem to mean 'take a trip.' I am not sure if what I understand about the meaning of that is correct, but if you seek my opinion why people need to move or travel every day, my answer is so simple. Human beings need to work every day. Working not only means the method to make money. It is a kind of mean to make our body move regularly. It is related with our physical logic, so the more we move our body, the more we can live healthily. I can say that all of our activities in connection with movement are considered as a part of requirements to maintain our bodies healthier.

Hello, Optimistic [이름]! ^.^ Happy Tuesday! ^^   There\'s no need for you to thank me for sharing things to you. It is my pleasure. I should be the one who needs to thank you for enduring my boring stories. I hope I don\'t annoy you whenever I tell you my whereabouts. Hahaha! ^^ About your compositions, it is nothing, because checking them is my job. ^^,   By the way, my back is totally fine now. I defecated this morning, and it was really a relief. I think it was a success because of three glasses of warm water. I know what to do next time I have the same situation or condition. Hahaha! ^^. I am sorry about the stomach-churning update. =p   Anyway, I am not sure about your excitement for your boss\'s return tomorrow. I think you are just being sarcastic. Hahaha! ^^ Am I right? Hahaha! ^^,   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^^, Enjoy checking my reply! ^^. Hahaha! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: You got the real meaning of the essay question I gave you. Very good! ^^     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!A happy Tuesday to both of us! >> CORRECT! First of all, I would like to say thank you for explaining your whereabouts last weekend and correcting my composition. >> CORRECT! >> OR: First of all, I would like to say thank you for explaining your last weekend whereabouts and correcting my composition. I read it with joy. ^^ >> CORRECT! By the way, how is your condition of your back? >> By the way, how is your back\'s condition? (C1: YOUR CONDITION OF YOUR BACK should be YOUR BACK\'S CONDITION or THE CONDITION OF YOUR BACK.) >> OR: By the way, how is the condition of your back? It is easy for people today to feel backache due to sitting on a chair for a long time. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is easy for people nowadays to have a backache due to a long sitting time. >> OR: It is easy for people nowadays to have a backache due to a long sitting period. In my case, I also sometimes feel backache when I stand for a long time, especially on the subway or bus. >> CORRECT! My travel time to go to work is so long, it takes two hours and a half there and back. >> C2 I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: My travel time to go to work is so long, because it takes two hours and a half back and forth. Due to many people who use the public transportation in rush hours, I can\'t dare to dream about taking a seat even if I leave from my place very early. >> CORRECT! That\'s okay, I already got used to it. ^^ >> CORRECT! >> OR: I\'m already used to it. I hope your symptom is just temporary. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I hope what you are experiencing now is just temporary. By the way, today is the last day that our boss is not in the office. >> CORRECT! >> OR: By the way, today is our boss\'s last day not to be in the office.  He will come back here tomorrow and definitely can\'t wait to share something with me. >> CORRECT! Wow, just the thought of it makes me excited. Hahaha! ^^;; >> CORRECT! That\'s all for now, and see you this evening! >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: Here is my homework. >> CORRECT! I think the word \'travel\' in the subject doesn\'t seem to mean \'take a trip.\' >> CORRECT! >> OR: I think the word \'travel\' in the essay question is not the same with \'take a trip.\' I am not sure if what I understand about the meaning of that is correct, but if you seek my opinion why people need to move or travel every day, my answer is so simple. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am not sure if I understood it right, but if you seek my opinion about the reason why people need to move or travel every day, my answer is so simple. Human beings need to work every day. >> CORRECT! Working not only means the method to make money. >> CORRECT! It is a kind of mean to make our body move regularly. >> It is a kind of means to make our bodies move regularly. (C3 It is better to use MEANS rather than MEAN.) It is related with our physical logic, so the more we move our body, the more we can live healthily. >> CORRECT! I can say that all of our activities in connection with movement are considered as a part of requirements to maintain our bodies healthier. >> I can say that all of our activities in connection with movements are considered as a part of requirements to maintain our healthier bodies. (C4 MOVEMENT should be with S. An adjective cannot be placed after a noun.) >> OR: I can say that all of our activities in connection with movements are considered as a part of requirements to maintain healthier bodies.